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Seagreen replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 12 months ago
WASTE NOT, WANT NOT (391 words)
Early evening, and the headache that had been stalking me all day slammed into me with the force of a rear-end collision, scattering coherent thought into the ether and making further editing of the new book impossible. I wasnβt surprised by it – the headache, I mean β the pain in my temples had been building up…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Unediting in the forum Blogs 6 years, 12 months ago
In general,Squidge, although I know exactly what you mean, I don’t. Partly because a lot of the time I am writing ‘badly’ to start with, so much needs to be improved (and the correct word substituted for the one I couldn’t remember – I’m grateful for Emma D’s suggestion of putting then in [ ] so as to later find.
At the moment, writing a…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Unediting in the forum Blogs 6 years, 12 months ago
Only got a couple of minutes, Squidge, so a very quick response. Yes, I do. But it is mainly about how I tell the story. I might decide something needs more dialogue or less description or more inside head and then Iβll change my mind. Because none of them are wrong per se … or right. It is something to with varying the pace and style, I think.
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Squidge started the topic Unediting in the forum Blogs 6 years, 12 months ago
I’m editing Book 1 of Tilda’s story series at the mo for Bink (good news – looking like it’ll be published earlier than I thought, in Sept. Yay!)
I was told that there weren’t many things to look at – all nit picky stuff. Woo-hoo!
Thing is, I had worked my way through half of the MS on paper, because I needed to get more into Tilda’s head (if…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic On Submerging and Re-emerging in the forum Blogs 6 years, 12 months ago
I certainly blog less when I’m writing – or busy, generally. The Scribbles are sadly neglected at the moment…
I try to keep some level of engagement with the Den going, but when writing it can be either extreme; popping in to read but not comment, so I appear absent, or lots of posts asking for opinions or having a rant or despairing about the…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic On Submerging and Re-emerging in the forum Blogs 6 years, 12 months ago
You made me think long and hard Gerry because it doesn’t work like that at all for me. It tends to be when I am submerged in a writing project that I’m most active on my particular forms of social media either seeking help or discussing writing or just having a good moan about every part of the process from drafting to submitting. I’m quietest…[Read more]
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Gerry Fenge replied to the topic Writers & Artists short story comp in the forum Podium 6 years, 12 months ago
Is it available anywhere to read?
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Gerry Fenge started the topic On Submerging and Re-emerging in the forum Blogs 6 years, 12 months ago
Hereβs how it might go. You attend a Festival of Writing and β clever you β wangle three One-to-Ones, from which the comments are: (a) not so good, (b) a bit better, and (c) not bad at all. So, semi-encouraged, you decide to blast through the redrafting process to completion. Focus-focus-focus. You disappear from social media until finally, hey h…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Writers & Artists short story comp in the forum Podium 6 years, 12 months ago
Excellent … your fame is spreading, and rightfully so.
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Raine replied to the topic Writers & Artists short story comp in the forum Podium 6 years, 12 months ago
This story has just been accepted into the Mechanics Institute Review. Randomly named journal, but I’m pleased it’s found a good home. 😊
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Gerry Fenge posted an update 7 years ago
Hello everyone, I’ve been more absent than present here so don’t feel I have the right to say much as yet – except, gosh, look how many people I (digitally) know, great to see the faces and aliases again.
I was wondering what people think to the new Jericho Townhouse. Iβd hoped it would be like the old Word Cloud, but it lacks the same sort o…[Read more]
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I’m inclined to agree with you, Gerry. The Jericho layout doesn’t help, but also, to a large extent, we have necessarily become more wary of committing time and energy to sites which may disappear without warning.
Also, I suspect quite a lot of us are getting on with writing.-
I’m finding it very difficult to use. Have joined a group and posted something but now can’t locate it or the original comment it was a response to. This isn’t a plea for help, just a statement. I’ll battle on for a while. Am keeping a word.docx copy of any critiques I give in case I have to post them again.
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I can locate the group but not my post.
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Hi Gerry! How are things?
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Things are fab-groovy, super-duper, thank you. I hope and trust the fab-grooviness etc is equally well experienced by you and indeed all Denizens.
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Definitely clunky, and the front page timeline doesn’t have the same feel. I received a notification that someone had written something on my timeline, but can I figure out where that timeline is!
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It wasn’t me, Kate. I hadn’t even thought about timelines π π Yesterday I thought I’d ‘liked’ myself by mistake, but heaven only knows …
Some of this is my own lack of skill.-
I’m not sure liking yourself should be a mistake. π π π
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Lovely to see you Gerry. I’ve not joined Jericho, like @athelstone says, I’m leery of investing time in a platform that may or may not remain open to me. This Den has its own clunky foibles, but I think I’ll stick to mooching around in here as and when I am efficient enough to get online with time to spare!
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Gerry, if being absent was a disqualification I’d be booted out by now. To my mind, the new Townhouse has the problem of overcoming the old Townhouse. There’s an attempt to push a “wow this is awsome” mood and this, combined with the staff being very evident, is a bit unwelcoming. Awsomeness(?) comes with the people who contribute and there are…[Read more]
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Great to hear from people – quite like the old days β how nice. Sandra’s comment ‘I suspect quite a lot of us are getting on with writing’ inspires me to consider writing a blog (on submerging and re-emerging β a sort of rhythm that I suspect a lot of us follow).
Itβs been sad to lose the Cloud’s timeline – it was a real plus of SocialGo, and w…[Read more]
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Write the blog @gerryfenge.
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This place exists because a bunch of us saw the Cloud thinning out and dispersing and decided we’d better have somewhere to drift off to.
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John S Alty posted an update 7 years ago
Just back from Mallorca with lots of new writing ideas. Well, one.
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JaneShuff posted an update 7 years ago
Having a nightmare time with my plot. Please send torches and pickaxes so I can try and find it…
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Raine posted an update 7 years ago
Went to Stephanie Hutton’s ‘Psychology of Character’ workshop on Saturday. If she does one in your area, I’d recommend it. Really thought provoking and insightful for character development.
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Jonathan replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
OK yep that all sounds good π
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Raine replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
Yeah, I’d agree, i think the comp works best as a pressure-free place for people to dip their toes in the water or play around a bit. Nice, encouraging comments are a great way of supporting that, but more critiquey comments, although a wonderful thing would perhaps be more useful in the critiquey Forum, or direct posting/messaging, and of course…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
‘Specific questions’? – yes indeed, particularly in the light of the current one – Raine’s saying “Itβll be judged purely on βhow much do I want to read onβ” (which strikes me as a genius note to strike when setting a competition.) Of those posted so far I would say there are those which I am unlikely to pursue, simply because they are not the g…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
I think this discussion is clarifying things. We want the monthly/bi-monthly/whatever frequency competition to be somewhere where people can post unfinished/half-finished/incomplete/never going to be finished/trying-things-out bits of writing as well as more finished and considered things. As such the tone of comments should be positive. If a…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
Entirely agree with Knicks and Jane. If critique is wanted it should be specifically asked for; where someone believes it would be helpful, a pm is the best place to start. For myself, comp entries are often little more than the flexing of writing muscles.
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