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  • RichardB posted an update 8 years ago

    Dunno about NaNoWriMo and word count targets, but in the last two days I’ve revised and rewritten 4,000 words, which is pretty good going for me. I’ve almost finished changing an entire (long) chapter from one POV to another. Remember that exercise in the S-E course? Like that, only longer. Much longer.

  • Athelstone replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 8 years ago

    AAARRRGGHHH! (as it used to say in my comics)

    Up with the count. Resisted the temptation to count the 2500 “seed” words that I had before the start. I think I’ll have a couple of hundred more to do before I give up tonight. Remarkable difference in the way I feel about making myself write at this pace which, honestly, isn’t that high a word…[Read more]

  • I haven’t entered a comp for a while though lack of time but this one intrigued me and my entry is short.

    I suppose it’s a form of Writer’s Block – except that I can’t stop writing. Does that make sense? Probably not. Think of it as writing your way around the surface of a Klein bottle. Yes! That’s it exactly. Thank you. I know where I am now. I…[Read more]

  • @kazg, thanks so much for that link.

    And you’ve expressed above so beautifully my exact thoughts on story structure – including the necessity of balancing all our technical knowledge with room for the subconscious to speak.

  • I’m not sure what fascinates me more – the list of items you came up with or the fact you came up with them when you were caught by surprise…🤔

  • For this month’s comp I’d like to think about the inciting incident; the moment when things deviate from the norm, and to which the noteworthy events of the story can be traced. To hopefully help you (and because I was caught by surprise this a.m.) I have done a brain dump of items, events, bits and other bobs, and I’m looking for one of these…[Read more]

  • Wow. Gobsmacked. I wasn’t expecting this. It’s a change from the crack of regular rejections I’ve been getting used to, so thank you Seagreen! Great entries all 🙂

    I’ll set another prompt shortly. Just … got to come up with something.

  • Thank you all for taking the time to post an entry, especially Sandra, who kicked things off (phew!), but later withdrew by reason of unavailability to set the next comp should she win.

    Anyway, as most of you know, I’m rubbish at any kind of feedback so I’ll keep this short.

    Sandra – strong voice. And some perfect turns of phrase – ‘Like a…[Read more]

  • “Let’s go. Everyone’s gone!”

    “Not yet, there’s still one coat left.” I only been working in the cloak room for less than a month, but I take it seriously. It’s my first job after my stint in jail. Nothin’ bad, just got me some sticky fingers is all. Then of all the jobs to land after that, I gets a job takin’ care of other people’s belongings…[Read more]

  • I know @raine!! It’s just too good to be true eh? AND now you love me forever 🙂 What a very fine day this is turning out to be. Back atcha BTW (and apologies to all others for PDA. She’s Scottish and I’m Aussie so the English emotion rules don’t apply :-))

  • @KazG & @emmad – oooh, I like the phrase ‘thinker on paper’! That sounds a lot closer to what I do. For all my love of graphs and themes and character outlines, and more graphs, very little of the detail gets decided until I’m in the story. I think it’s a little like my old self’s data analysis process – first you gather all the plethora of…[Read more]

  • Last day to put in an entry for the Den monthly competition, people… 🙂

  • RichardB posted an update 8 years ago

    Just about to take murdering darlings to a new level. There’s this paragraph I posted for one of the exercises in the S-E course. Debi was impressed, and helped me make it even better. And now it’s got to go. The whole para. (Sobs.)

    • Libby replied 8 years ago

      You have my sympathies. But keep the cut lines somewhere, Richard. You never know when a version of them may turn out to be useful in another piece.
      In the meantime, here’s a hanky 🙂

  • KazG replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 8 years ago

    Sorry @athelstone, just saw your question – I’m Kaz Ginnane over there. I see I’m already friends with @daedalus, @jillybean and @raine 🙂

  • KazG replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 8 years ago

    I have a title. And a reeaallly rough idea of what happens. But there are still many strands waving wildly around and I have no idea where I’m going to stuff them, let alone tie them together neatly…

    I’m apparently planning it now, but here I am instead!

  • And now I’ve seen this and am very, VERY sorely tempted to whip out the credit card…Margaret Atwood is one of my all time lit heroes. And can I just boast that when I first started on Twitter, my first tweet was to her and she REPLIED!!

    (Twitter has never lived up to that since, needless to…[Read more]

  • Jules replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 8 years ago

    I’m pretty sure I’ll get the words down. But right now I have only the vaguest plan and I can’t think of even a working title.

  • What a lot of clever things have been said on this thread! I have read through them all now and it’s all fascinating.

    I love Dara Marks, @raine, and your summary is brilliant. I’m getting ready to do NaNoWriMo with book two now and I’m holding these ideas in my head (as opposed to an actual firm plan, which truly is beyond me at first draft…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 8 years ago

    Well, I’m feeling a tad more apprehensive than in previous years. There’s a certain investment in succeeding this time – for me. Well, succeeding in writing the requisite number of words anyway. My record is one complete children’s story, one block of 50K words that I eventually deleted, two failures.

  • I often think “getting” story structure is like one of those damn magic eye puzzles. All these people around you are like “oh yeah! It’s dolphins!!” while you’re staring at it like, “whaaa?”

    And then, you glimpse it (maybe in a CM Taylor workshop), but then it’s gone again. You glimpse it, it disappears, you glimpse it, you go…[Read more]

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