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Libby replied to the topic Influences in the forum Blogs 2 years, 9 months ago
I agree, John, this is a difficult one. I’ll have to think about it.
Some influence comes from writers whose style I don’t like. I make mental notes not to do things like ‘whoever’ (they’ll remain nameless :-))
Then there’s the memory of a feeling a book created at the time I read it. They include authors I couldn’t or don’t feel drawn to read…[Read more]
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John T started the topic Influences in the forum Blogs 2 years, 9 months ago
Have any of you thought about who your writing influences are? I’m asking, because I was about to write a blog about my writing influences, and then stopped, unsure. I know plenty of authors whose writing I adore, including a fair few in this Den. But influences? I’d have to go further back, and then I’m not sure at all.
Most of the authors I…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 2 years, 9 months ago
Fabulous blog, Richard. Chanson is so little known outside of France. People think they know it because they’ve heard a recording of Non, je ne regrette rien or maybe they know that Seasons in the Sun is a translation (sort of) of a Jacques Brel number. It’s hugely popular in France. Travel to any town and go out and about on market-day. Every…[Read more]
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RichardB started the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 2 years, 9 months ago
There is a genre of French music known in English as chanson – ironically, since in French chanson simply means song, any kind of song. You might call it popular music with brains, for its distinguishing characteristic is articulate lyrics that set out to say something actually worth saying. In France it has a long and noble tradition, its best k…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition – August 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Perhaps I should make it clear this is just one line intended as a prompt to build a story on, from a collection of poetical, random lines, in a pocketbook entitled ‘Distance and Proximity’.
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Sandra started the topic Monthly competition – August 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
“In a yellow rectangle, in the black facade of a house, a woman is laying a table.”
The above is taken from a prose poem by Thomas A Clark entitled by ‘A walk by moonlight’. For August’s comp I would like you to develop this scene in not more than 300 words. Deadline 3rd September as I’ll be away until then.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Wow, Libby, and thank you, a big surprise, especially as I’d already identified winners 1,2 and 3 and, my laptop having died and been taken away, and only having my ancient, over-full and steaming one, I wasn’t checking as often as I have been. I’ll try and come up with something as interestingly challenging as the last few have been.
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Alex replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
@ Libby, thanks for the feedback. It was a great prompt.
I enjoyed all the entries and how varied the stories were.
@Sandra, congrats!
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
What terrific stories. So much horror too. I began to wonder if the topic of building work had raised deeply traumatic memories!
@clebs ‘Behind Closed Curtains’ is very atmospheric, rich in detail and perfectly titled. I felt a few words could be cut, such as the second mention of Jimmy’s bowl, and I wasn’t sure if I got the story’s message.…[Read more]
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Wow, Libby, and thank you, a big surprise, especially as I’d already identified winners 1,2 and 3 and, my laptop having died and been taken away, and only having my ancient, over-full and steaming one, I wasn’t checking as often as I have been. I’ll try and come up with something as interestingly challenging as the last few have been.
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Congratulations, Sandra. And thanks, Libby, for the challenge. Didn’t expect the critique too.
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Clebs replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
The formatting isn’t great – sorry.
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Clebs replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
<p style=”text-align: center;”><b>Behind Closed Curtains</b></p>
‘Jimmy look, that rude electrician is back!’ Marjorie adjusted her glasses and squinted towards the bungalow. ‘And he’s wearing that t-shirt again, you know, the orange one with large red letters saying Bog Off You Nosy Neighbour!’ She poked her tongue out in the general direction of…[Read more] -
Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Brutal
Graham was beside himself. Furious, speechless, incandescent with rage. They had demolished the ancient well in his garden, thrown the centuries old stonework down inside, and constructed a former which showed their intention to pour footings a full twenty metres from where the summerhouse should be. He leaned forward and peered down. All…[Read more]
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Alex replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Fallen
I messed up.
In the worst way.
The building site was wrong. How could I have made such an amateur mistake? Because I was an amateur, that’s why. No man who has spent his life in the Alaskan mountains could know how to build in the Caribbean. And not a simple house, but a castle. The mosquito bites on my back provided evidence this was my…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
July monthly comp reminder – three more days to post an entry 🙂
Tell a story of building work that suffers some kind of mix up. The wrong site, the wrong builder – anything you like.
Deadline midnight 31st July.
300 words maximum
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Athelstone posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
And we’re there. Thank you to all the generous donors. We’re here for another year!
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Athelstone posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
One More Year!
Probably daft, bearing in mind we have maybe 10 to 15 members who are even close to regular, and perhaps half a dozen who are. I need to raise about £150 this month to keep the site going. It will keep going; it’s just a case of finding as much as I can. SO… please see the donations group for details. Simple as that. -
Janette replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
The Mausoleum
… The star broke down as wife Stephanie’s casket was taken into the mausoleum. The stone masterpiece, testament to their love, could have been fashioned by Wren …’
Justin Mallory’s architect had also been proud of the secret panel to facilitate re-entry: stone-clad, freed by hidden lock and latch. Justin pocketed the key. He swiped…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Hi Janette – as discussed, it’s gone. Feel free to post again when ready.
Ath.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Hi Janette – feel free to tidy up! I see no reason why software idiosyncrasies and confusions therefrom should affect anyone’s chances in the monthly comp.
I haven’t yet read your submission so I won’t know what you change. I think you can delete the original post if you wish.
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I just tried that, but it remains on the monthly comp thread. Typical Monday morning.
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@janette
Don’t worry. Post your tidied-up version and I’ll ignore your first submission.-
Thanks to Ath, I’ve been able to delete and try again. Sorry for the kerfuffle!
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