Anna

  • I’m working to finish this month’s competition entry (come on, you lot!) and fiddling with the Room with a View thingy. Had a piece published in Across the Margin, always a little boost.
    Real life is quite demanding right now, also, so just popped in to say Merry Christmas!

  • JaneShuff posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 7 months ago

    Congratulations to my fellow December SloMo members on all your achievements in December. I know there is a third of the month to go but I am about to disappear in Christmas – ferries permitting. December hasn’t worked out for me quite how I thought it would and has ended up being more of time to reflect. I have written and edited a lot in 2018…[Read more]

    • I sympathise, Jane – my SloMo has been NoGo. A continuation month – CoMo? – in January would be great

      • I’m the same as you Daeds…NoGo. I’ll plump for CoMo, and try to get something out for RWaV 😉

        • I’m also a NoGo. Hoping January will be more of a GroMo or a FloMo 🙂

          • It is really helpful isn’t it? Seeing others’ updates and getting little boosts. Lets go for a SomethingMo. If only to get me through the most miserable month of the year…

  • JaneShuff posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago

    Ha! The bots think they can get in by sneakily adding vowels.

  • JaneShuff posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago

    Has anybody ever had to write a long synopsis – 3 to 10 pages? If so, any tips?

    • If it was me? I’d set out to write a one-page synopsis.

      • To be less flippant, though… you could probably give a bit more detail to character arcs

        • I’ve done a shortish one page version but this press asks specifically for a 3 to 10 page version so I think they want a bit more detail. I’ve started writing a summary of each chapter to see where that gets me but it will still be on the shorter side.

          • Sorry just seen your second reply. Yes, I think you’re right. Character arcs. And funnily enough, I don’t have too much of a problem keeping my synopses short these days.

          • Maybe put in the subplot(s), assuming you haven’t done this with a shorter synopsis? And anything else which is important to you such as themes, settings, similarities/differences between main characters. Ten pages is a lot so I’m wondering what they want which wouldn’t be in a standard synopsis.

            • I was asked for a chapter by chapter breakdown once. With secondary characters plotted too…

            • I can’t help feeling it’s so they can unerstand the book without the bother of actually reading any of it.

            • “I can’t help feeling it’s so they can unerstand the book without the bother of actually reading any of it” – I’m sure you’re right. But perhaps also to get a feel for how much you understand your own book, in terms of thinking about it structurally and thematically

    • The wall is doing that thing again when it says there have been seven replies to this comment but is only showing me one. Anyone have any idea how to view the whole conversation?

    • Out of curiousity, which press is that? (only if you don’t mind sharing)

      • *curiosity

        • I don’t mind sharing at all. In fact I’d be interested in hvaing a separate group/thread on the Forum for people to share their experiences of the Indie Presses and Imprints that you can submit direct to. I bought the Indie Press Guide from Mxlexia which is useful but personal experiences are always better. Anyway the imprint wanting the long,…[Read more]

          • Oh, interesting! I hadn’t heard of them. Out of interest, are you also planning to submit to agents? Or going purely down the indie route? I agree a dedicated thread for indie processes might be a good idea, to get lots of info all in one place.

            • I’m going purely down the Indie Route @philippaeast. I’m staying with my agent but she’s happy for me to try and sell this to an Indie myself as suggested by Raine and Debi. Speculative fiction is apparently a bit of a hard sell…

            • I was wondering what happened in the end with your agent and that book @janeshuff – that sounds like a brilliant plan. You get to keep the agent relationship and also your (wonderful) book has its chance, independent of that. I do love all he options open to writers these days, even if publishing is so much harder in others. Good luck!!

            • *in other ways

      • Thanks @kazg.

  • JaneShuff posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 7 months ago

    I’ve had a few days off as we went to London to see children and grandchildren as far as Mr Janeshuff was concerned although I’d organised two surprise birthday celebrations for him as well. We’re back now after a wonderful but exhausting time and I’m hoping to restart tomorrow. I’ve spent the best part of a month planning this WIP and after only…[Read more]

    • Great work on making a start, even if it went in a different direction! I think there must be something about trusting your instincts on this though? Sounds like a good plan to take a step back and relax and switch to something else for a while to allow your brain a chance to catch up with your muse!

      • I agree with Philippa, @janeshuff.
        Sounds like you’ve achieved a lot with the writing, what with family celebrations as well.

        • It’s exciting when things veer off plan, especially when there’s energy in the veering, rather than just a ‘I’ve lost momentum and don’t know where to go now’ type of thing. I would listen to it if I were you @janeshuff. Might, just might be something great bubbling up from your subconscious? An early Xmas gift perhaps??

          • How right you all are. It is exciting. The new ideas are much better. It’s all part of the process. I have been trying to keep a diary this time so I can remind myself next time how tortuous the process of coming up with and writing a new WIP is. I have let the diary slip because of everything else, but must get back to it.

  • I came across this piece of writing advice by Sol Stein which appeals to me:

    “….be sure you don’t stop the story while describing. You are a storyteller, not an interior decorator.”

    Probably a shot across the bows of so-called literary prose. King likes to emphasize this point too, but doesn’t do it quite as succinctly.

  • I got long listed in the Crowvus Publishing Christmas ghost story comp. No publication but at least I know I’ve now got a half decent tale in the bag. And since mine’s wasn’t especially Christmassy, I’ve got an in for any spooky comps that crop up!

    If this link works – I will be amazed at myself.

    Crowvus

  • I see we have four new members who could use a vowel or two in their name. What’s that all about?
    Anyway, Wlcme!

  • JaneShuff posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago

    Am bored. Am very bored. Hairdresser is running an hour late.

  • JaneShuff posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 7 months ago

    Got my 500 words done. The first 500 words of a new WIP. Had to remind myself several time – Don’t get it right, get it written! Suspect it might show that I loved doing my research a bit much! Tomorrow’s target is the same – 500 words. Then I’m off to London for a big weekend so won’t get anything written until I get back. Hope you’re all doing…[Read more]

  • JaneShuff posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 7 months ago

    I didn’t have a lot of time today but I think I have got the planning to the stage where I need to start writing. So that’s the plan for tomorrow. Although I won’t have a lot of time, so I’m going to do the background research for it tonight and set myself a gentle target of 500 words.

  • JaneShuff posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 7 months ago

    I am loving redaing what you’re all planning to do in December.

    Having spent yesterday and today running and manning the local twinning committee’s ‘sell English products to the French’ Christmas stall in between dodging the Gilets Jaunes to take my OH to the airport, my aim tonight is to do enough RL work to free up tomorrow morning for a bit…[Read more]

    • *reading

      • That would be a very good end of year @janeshuff. I hope you are all ok over there. Awful to read about all the anger and destruction x

        • Thanks @kazg. Luckily we are far from the mayhem of Paris and the gilets jaunes here were peacable enough. However they’ve started blockading the Port du Commerce which means no petrol deliveries and there was a spate of panic buying over the weekend which means the pumps have run dry!

          • Oh yikes! Hope the blockade lifts soon, although I have to admire their protest power! Good luck for the writing today – and without the OH to interrupt!

          • Oh no, hope you don’t get stuck! yes, the French know how to get protesting, don’t they? Phlegmatic they are not. Good luck with the writing @janeshuff

  • Well done, Raine.

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic Two newses in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago

    That is fantastic news, Raine. Not that I’m at all surprised. Thank you for sharing!

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    “Listen to me, Luigi; we’re always on the lookout for new stage plays and this one sounded interesting. Ingenious plot, bit of sex, incest, prostitution, a potential murder and ending up with a suicide.” He put down the cigar he had been waving like a conductor’s baton and folded his hands on his expansive belly. “What’s not to like?”
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  • JaneShuff replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Actually playing something like Freecell occupies the surface part of your brain and liberates the sub-conscious to do a lot of sorting out. Or something like that. My terminology is all wrong.

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Sometimes what feels like procrastination is valuable thinking time…

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Good point @Richardb about the guitar playing.

    And @alainrain, I think we all struggle and procrastinate from time to time because writing can be tough.

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Absolutely @raine. Where does the guilt come from? Because come it does. Every time someone asks me what I’m up to and I have to admit to spending most of my spare time writing but, no, it’s not published. And, yes, I have spent the last seven years doing this. I try to rationalise it by thinking of lots of perfectly acceptable but equally…[Read more]

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