Athelstone

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 3 months ago

    And congratulations on the tosh, Jane!

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 3 months ago

    Yes, but my mulling had moved on to how to add to my collection of noir films, or should I make myself another PC and had even reached the outskirts of ‘I wonder what’s on Channel 4’. Luckily that turned out to more Brexit so I started writing again.
    The most immediate problem is that my characters are having a conversation and won’t stop bloody…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 3 months ago

    🙂

    • I haven’t written any shit today, because I haven’t written anything at all. I’m mulling stuff over. But one H*rry B*ngham once pointed out that he’d spent a whole week in his study mulling things over and not writing a single word, and still counted it as writing time because it produced results later. A murrain on daily targets, that’s wot I say.

    • Yes, but my mulling had moved on to how to add to my collection of noir films, or should I make myself another PC and had even reached the outskirts of ‘I wonder what’s on Channel 4’. Luckily that turned out to more Brexit so I started writing again.
      The most immediate problem is that my characters are having a conversation and won’t stop bloody…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 3 months ago

    Not getting at anybody in particular and I’ve done it myself many times over the years. Anyway – main point, writing!

    • Me too Ath. As of this morning. Mine is utterly shit too. 177 words of complete garbage so far. And I don’t care! I might even try to write another 100 words of tosh before lunch!

      • But CONGRATULATIONS. If I could remember how to insert an emoji, I would. So just imagine champagne bottles popping, streamers and smiley faces.

        • 🙂

          • I haven’t written any shit today, because I haven’t written anything at all. I’m mulling stuff over. But one H*rry B*ngham once pointed out that he’d spent a whole week in his study mulling things over and not writing a single word, and still counted it as writing time because it produced results later. A murrain on daily targets, that’s wot I say.

          • Yes, but my mulling had moved on to how to add to my collection of noir films, or should I make myself another PC and had even reached the outskirts of ‘I wonder what’s on Channel 4’. Luckily that turned out to more Brexit so I started writing again.
            The most immediate problem is that my characters are having a conversation and won’t stop bloody…[Read more]

      • And congratulations on the tosh, Jane!

    • and now I can only see my original update and my own first reply. No other replies and no ‘show all replies’ prompt.

  • Hoorah! At last, after an overload of dithering, I am back on the path that Julie Cohen recommends and writing sh*t.
    Don’t you hate it when people put an asterisk in a word, converting a perfectly good piece of Old English into the illegitimate cousin of a euphemism? It’s as though it’s somehow more pol*te.

    • Not getting at anybody in particular and I’ve done it myself many times over the years. Anyway – main point, writing!

      • Me too Ath. As of this morning. Mine is utterly shit too. 177 words of complete garbage so far. And I don’t care! I might even try to write another 100 words of tosh before lunch!

        • But CONGRATULATIONS. If I could remember how to insert an emoji, I would. So just imagine champagne bottles popping, streamers and smiley faces.

          • 🙂

            • I haven’t written any shit today, because I haven’t written anything at all. I’m mulling stuff over. But one H*rry B*ngham once pointed out that he’d spent a whole week in his study mulling things over and not writing a single word, and still counted it as writing time because it produced results later. A murrain on daily targets, that’s wot I say.

            • Yes, but my mulling had moved on to how to add to my collection of noir films, or should I make myself another PC and had even reached the outskirts of ‘I wonder what’s on Channel 4’. Luckily that turned out to more Brexit so I started writing again.
              The most immediate problem is that my characters are having a conversation and won’t stop bloody…[Read more]

        • And congratulations on the tosh, Jane!

      • and now I can only see my original update and my own first reply. No other replies and no ‘show all replies’ prompt.

    • Your bug work around worked! I managed to find all the comments. Congratulations on all your characters talking. I rewrote the first chapter of my WIP for the thousandth time this morning. It might be getting close to being THE ONE. But there again…

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Ah, well that’s my inexperience with the site then. I should have added ‘join’ as a step.

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    That’s odd. There aren’t any settings I can see to make the forum more visible, or even to hide it or anything really. It’s a public group, can you see the forum if you join it?

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Hi Squidge, from login select Groups, then scroll down and select Donations, then select Forum 🙂 There are two topics. the first is a summary of where we are and how to donate. The second is for chat.

  • Den of Writers is a FREE forum. That means that nobody pays for membership and if you join you are absolutely entitled to use and enjoy the place as much as anybody – in fact, you are encouraged to.

    However, people have enquired about contributing to the cost of hosting the site, so the Donations group will show you how to if you want to.…[Read more]

  • Just brilliant notes.

  • Brilliant news, Stevie. Well done!

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Well, that just answered my own question for me. At about half that price I might puzzle over whether I could stretch to it, but £5K is way out of reach

    • Sounds to me like Harry’s got his head in the clouds again. Who on earth is going to commit that sort of money? Anyone who was confident enough of their abilities to make it seem worth it would be confident enough to think they didn’t need it, surely?

      Incidentally, I see Retreat West, partners in this venture, is run by Amanda Saint, who was on…[Read more]

      • At least 4 of the people in my self-edit group are publishing away, Richard. One of the our very own Bric. We definitely do not all move at the same pace along our paths!

      • You’re as good a writer Richard. Anyway, people on each SE course are naturally at different stages when they come into it. Incidentally I still think that second novel of yours is cracking and would urge you to keep subbing it as well as working on AROS

      • Agree with Daed and WB. We all take tge journey or mountain at what speed best serves us. And you should definitely keep going with AROS (as long as you want to!)

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Oh yes (part 2): just to show how bad I am at reading things – it’s £4,950 / €5,700 / $6,500

    • Well, that just answered my own question for me. At about half that price I might puzzle over whether I could stretch to it, but £5K is way out of reach

      • Sounds to me like Harry’s got his head in the clouds again. Who on earth is going to commit that sort of money? Anyone who was confident enough of their abilities to make it seem worth it would be confident enough to think they didn’t need it, surely?

        Incidentally, I see Retreat West, partners in this venture, is run by Amanda Saint, who was on…[Read more]

        • At least 4 of the people in my self-edit group are publishing away, Richard. One of the our very own Bric. We definitely do not all move at the same pace along our paths!

        • You’re as good a writer Richard. Anyway, people on each SE course are naturally at different stages when they come into it. Incidentally I still think that second novel of yours is cracking and would urge you to keep subbing it as well as working on AROS

        • Agree with Daed and WB. We all take tge journey or mountain at what speed best serves us. And you should definitely keep going with AROS (as long as you want to!)

    • Oh yes (part 2): just to show how bad I am at reading things – it’s £4,950 / €5,700 / $6,500

      • Well, that just answered my own question for me. At about half that price I might puzzle over whether I could stretch to it, but £5K is way out of reach

        • Sounds to me like Harry’s got his head in the clouds again. Who on earth is going to commit that sort of money? Anyone who was confident enough of their abilities to make it seem worth it would be confident enough to think they didn’t need it, surely?

          Incidentally, I see Retreat West, partners in this venture, is run by Amanda Saint, who was on…[Read more]

          • At least 4 of the people in my self-edit group are publishing away, Richard. One of the our very own Bric. We definitely do not all move at the same pace along our paths!

          • You’re as good a writer Richard. Anyway, people on each SE course are naturally at different stages when they come into it. Incidentally I still think that second novel of yours is cracking and would urge you to keep subbing it as well as working on AROS

          • Agree with Daed and WB. We all take tge journey or mountain at what speed best serves us. And you should definitely keep going with AROS (as long as you want to!)

  • I expect many here know about Jericho Writers, the successor to the Writers’ Workshop that hosted the Word Cloud forum. It seems that they are about to offer a one-year Writing a Novel course to include a pass to the Festival of Writing and either the Getting Published or Self-Publishing day. It also includes a full MS assessment, one to one…[Read more]

      • Oh yes (part 2): just to show how bad I am at reading things – it’s £4,950 / €5,700 / $6,500

        • Well, that just answered my own question for me. At about half that price I might puzzle over whether I could stretch to it, but £5K is way out of reach

          • Sounds to me like Harry’s got his head in the clouds again. Who on earth is going to commit that sort of money? Anyone who was confident enough of their abilities to make it seem worth it would be confident enough to think they didn’t need it, surely?

            Incidentally, I see Retreat West, partners in this venture, is run by Amanda Saint, who was on…[Read more]

            • At least 4 of the people in my self-edit group are publishing away, Richard. One of the our very own Bric. We definitely do not all move at the same pace along our paths!

            • You’re as good a writer Richard. Anyway, people on each SE course are naturally at different stages when they come into it. Incidentally I still think that second novel of yours is cracking and would urge you to keep subbing it as well as working on AROS

            • Agree with Daed and WB. We all take tge journey or mountain at what speed best serves us. And you should definitely keep going with AROS (as long as you want to!)

    • Who the hell is going to pay £5k for that? For £5k you could probably do one of the more prestigious creative writing MAs

      • Flippin heck. That is steep. With no guarantee at the end of it that you’d be published…
        Amanda does seem to be getting on well – there are some other ex cloudies working with her now as well.

    • Interesting… almost feels like they’re trying to offer something similar to the Curtis Brown Creative course. That’s a massive amount to invest.

    • Ok that’s mad. For £84 you can join skillshare (having got the first 3 months free) and pretty much learn evetything being taught here from a choice of 100s of different teachers. With a bit of research and determination, you can find professional author groups to join that will give you a lot of the hand holding and help. Ok it includes the…[Read more]

      • Yes, Jules, that’s just what I was getting at above. If you’re so near to the start of your writing journey as to need everything in this package it’s still basically a dream/hobby. And how many have that sort of money to blow on a dream?

    • Chichester Uni’s creative writing MA costs £5,202, and features some fairly big names on the teaching roster. With all due respect to the people on the Jericho course, they ain’t Jim Crace or Kate Mosse.

      • And of course at the end of that you have a postgraduate qualification as well as having received first-class teaching and support

        • If I had 5k to spend, I’d spend it on an MA. YOu get the 1:1 tutoring from highly qualified teachers and writers, peer support, much more in depth writing tuition, and you end up with a degree that agents etc will sit up and pay attention to. No contest. (I wish I had 5k. I’d LOVE to study writing at MA level)

      • Wow, Daeds, that comparison is a real eye opener. I wonder which will go best on a CV? He really has showed himself up for what he is IMHO.

    • It is indeed a lot of money. It is rather aimed at complete beginners as far as I can tell, because somewhere (possibly in a blog about it) Harry has said that if you have completed a novel and are editing it then it probably isn’t for you (at least not for that novel) so it does seem like a write from scratch hand-holding affair. I’m sure that it…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    I was toying with splashing out on the Kindle edition but Andrew Motion’s review made me think about it. I probably will, though.

    • I have now read Andrew Motion’s review and he sums up my frustration with the book perfectly.

      • Thanks Ath.

      • I think I agreed with Andrew Motion’s review too. Read Warlight when it came out and memory of details is beginning to fade. But, yes, a little disappointing. Sort of changed its nature part way through?
        PS Motion’s review of Tessa Hadley’s latest, Late in the Day, pretty spot on too though I enjoyed it a little more than he seems to have done.…[Read more]

        • PPS Actually I liked it, but I’m a big Hadley fan. However I didn’t put it down thinking I’d like to read it again.

          • Ooh I’ve never read anything of hers. Could you recommend one, @libby?

          • Of her novels, I’d go for The Past. Though I also like The London Train for the way it includes contemporary issues and anxieties.
            The short stories are even better. I’d start with the last volume, Bad Dreams.

  • Athelstone posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Fine with the cheerleading and tea. Not a great one for kicking people I fear.

    My own writing is slow, with moments of excitement, thank you for asking 🙂

  • I can definitely see the attraction in steam locomotives, and I have fond memories of holidays as a child, waiting on Newbury station for the express to arrive and whisk me away. I always prayed that it would be one of those wonderful swept-front, streamlined marvels, and was overjoyed if it was. Looking over the tracks to the Newbury marshalling…[Read more]

  • Richard, it may be something I missed over the time that you’ve been writing these (excellent) blogs: I know where you used to work, but do you have a connection to the railway yourself?

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