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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competion – September 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m late with the congratulations – life has been frantic for a few days! Thanks so much for the prompt, @jillsted. A thoughtful piece from @libby is a more-than-worthy winner. And well done to @knickylaurelle for a splendidly acute story.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competion – September 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 months, 4 weeks ago
The Artist of Wexton
A gust of icy wind blew across the beach, and I turned to one side and pulled my coat tighter. Doing so, I realised that something was wrong, but I wasn’t quite sure what. An elderly woman stood about fifty yards to the west looking out to sea. There was something almost mournful about her, and, against my usual inclination I…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition August 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Here I am, racked with guilt. I did sit down a couple of times to write an entry, but it just wouldn’t come. I had an idea yesterday that I liked, and it may end up as a scene in the WIP, but I had so much going on I couldn’t manage it. Apologies, it’s a fascinating idea and I should have done something. However, you have two very good entries to…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Pretty much, these days.
Most of the pubs I’ve loved are long closed now. The Railway Hotel in Newbury where I first tasted Morland bitter at the grand old age of 15 (just). At 12p per pint even I could afford it. Then there was the Cambridge in Cambridge Circus. To be fair, the beer was dreadful – so bad that I drank bottled lager mainly – but…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 9 months ago
Sounds glorious.
Just had a short break in France where nearly all the draft beer is lager style, with the exception of a few unpleasantly-sweet dark beers. To be fair, some of the lighter ones are drinkable, especially if it’s a hot day – which it usually is.
All this talk of real ale reminds me of that magical moment when you enter a…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 9 months, 1 week ago
Oh for a decent pub nearby. There used to be a decent pub only a few hundred yards away from me. It was always The George as it stood by a roundabout on Worthing’s George V Avenue. A couple of years ago it was acquired by the Toby Carvery group. I see that they claim to serve real ale now, but I did try to beers they offered a few times and I…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Well done, Sandra! And thank you for the prompt, Seagreen. As ever, some fine entries.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Teabreak tells it straight
I have been known to buff the truth a little, just to get a sparkle when a story is recounted. And if that helps somebody see the finer details a little more clearly, then who am I to deny them the opportunity? However, just as experts say we should resist the call of Mr. Sheen and microfibre when rare treasures are at…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 10 months ago
It’s that time again. If anybody feels inclined, please take a glance at the Donations Group. If you aren’t a member of the group, you’ll need to join to see the forum, but that doesn’t commit you to anything.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Positivity in the forum Blogs 10 months, 2 weeks ago
William James seems like an interesting man. He’s an example of something less common these days, a polymath. He studied widely across medicine and philosophy, developing expertise in both fields so that he taught physiology, psychology and philosophy (at different times) at Harvard, whilest finding time for an apprenticeship as a painter, and…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Bumper crop springs to mind, but the cliché is wrong because these stories didn’t just spring up, they were all lovingly made by hand.
Janette’s story reminds us of the way that roles are exchanged as age demands. More than this, it reminds us that life is full of last moments each important and deserving of attention and memory. There is a wist…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Any more takers? Last chance today. That could be the subject.
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Athelstone posted a new activity comment 11 months ago
Mention whatever you want. The Cloud brought many of us together and it was a fabulous start for many, and a nudge on the way for others.
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Hello, Athelstone. I was a member of Word Cloud from its inception; invited because I had just had a critique from Harry et al. Therefore I saw many writers come and go as well as forming good online relationships with those who stayed long term. It was so beneficial and inspiring and I learned a myriad of writing skills from both the…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Positivity in the forum Blogs 11 months ago
Jill, it’s so good to hear from you again, in spite of what you’ve been, and are, going through.
I think any response that isn’t on a level with your own experience of positivity is likely to sound trivial, or at least less significant. But it is a fascinating topic. It’s often said that realists have a less positive expectation of outcome, but…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 1 week ago
Two fabulous stories and still half of the month to try your hand. What luck!
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 11 months, 3 weeks ago
It was, and still is, a very good blog indeed. I remember it well, and on the strength of your recommendation I bought Pavane. It is a unique book, with an extraordinary atmosphere. Since reading it I’ve returned many times to check on parts and to reread. It really is remarkable that it isn’t better known. It’s somewhat depressing that a book so…[Read more]
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Athelstone started the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s been on my mind that during this month I will begin the last year of my sixth decade. The topic this month is the last of something. So, whatever that suggests to you, good, bad, indifferent, in a maximum of 500 words.
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