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  • Somewhere to Bloom

    The cottage on the lane had a garden of pink, blue and mauve flowers on plants she couldn’t name. They faced her in clumps and drifts. On the lane she considered the pretty cottages, each one wearing its garden like a skirt, patterned, pastel – standardised, or something. And, even more annoying, they coped with the early May…[Read more]

  • Janette posted an update 12 months ago

    Time passes so quickly. Would you believe there are only six days left to enter the May competition? Already four stunning entries but, go on, please make my job to pick out a winner even more difficult – I like a challenge. Give me an essence of May.

    • I started a story but life has been busy. Let’s see if I can a) finish it and b) it’s not too embarrassingly draft-like to share.

  • Renewal Dance

    Below a patchy canopy of leaves, sunlight falls in dusted shafts of light, highlighting small tufts of fluffy-winged seeds, spiralling and soaring in the breeze and somewhere, within the cool, dark, caverns of under-earth, the chime of rock, root and soil begins its soft, ceaseless, song of renewal.

    Stirred from slumber beneath the…[Read more]

  • Princes Street, Edinburgh, in early May. The morning is bright, the sky opaque with a promise of blue, and there’s enough chill in the air to warrant the cardigan I left on the back of the chair in the kitchen. I’m walking on the sunny side of the street – the side across from the gardens – with measured, purposeful steps as I head to a train…[Read more]

  • Libby posted an update 1 year ago

    Among all the relentless bad news in the world, something today which made me laugh, courtesy of Tom Cox on Substack https://substack.com/@tomcox/note/c-115447202

    “In 1996 two neighbours in Devon spent an entire year hooting at each other while believing they were communicating with owls.”

    Is this true? Who knows. It doesn’t matter.

  • Lyrical determination (thin on legend)

    2001, around eleven, on the first day of May, lying on a sun-striped bed in an attic studio, John Martyn exhorted, ‘May you never’, in a voice fluffy and worn as the sheet beneath them and a saxophone further ramped  up lust while Fran Lloyd satisfactorily surrendered her virginity to Ivo Kinnersley. Ivo,…[Read more]

  • Today’s walk gave me the inspiration I needed, while I hummed away to May Day songs. I’d like you to write a story with a May (Day) theme.

    It could be goings-on at a festival or fair while Maypole and Morris Dancers dance in the May. Or a nod to the Green Man (Jack-in-the-Green) defeating the Holly King of winter. Perhaps be inspired by the lines…[Read more]

  • Congratulations, J! Well deserved ☺️

    Thanks to Libby for challenging my poor sluggish brain cells with an extraordinary prompt, and to Sandra for an excellent read.

  • Heck, I did not expect that. Thank you for such an awesome feedback, Libby, and for a competition prompt which challenged my writerly boundaries. Also well done to Sea and Sandra for their excellent stories.
    I have nothing in mind for the next topic – a walk is in order to mull it over, not that I need and excuse to set out in this wonderful sunshine.

  • Well done Janette for and Seagreen for such entertaining tales, and thank you Libby for forcing me into finding new characters to deal with this tricky prompt. I was grateful for the part played by Google.

  • @sandradavies

    Sandra, this is an atmospheric depiction of the personalities within a family, all so economically written. I’d never heard of furanocoumarins. What an interesting thing to discover! You built tension with all the possible problems resulting from letting children loose in the kitchen, then there was a fine twist at the end. Very e…[Read more]

  • Janette posted an update 1 year ago

    I wondered if I could ask a favour of any fellow writers who enjoy character-led novels. The current title of my book Saving Grace has never really sat easy with me, being aware it also the title of a major film (one of my favourites), and I more recently learned it is the name of a US series, besides being used several times by other authors…[Read more]

    • Libby replied 1 year ago

      Hi @janette , I immediately liked (Don’t) Call Me Graceless and
      My Growing Chain of Big Fat Lies. Is Fibs an alternative title?
      The first title suggests character, the second plot. They both have voice.
      I’m not keen on Fibs. It feels vague.

    • Sandra replied 1 year ago

      I like ‘The Art of invisible mending’ which offers intrigue.

  • Ten days left to enter the monthly competition for April!

    Details here

    Monthly competition April 2025

     

  • <u>Parsnip Wine

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    Our back-facing neighbours were the first to acknowledge our arrival. Each time I looked out, the ever-preened woman was at her bay window, dog-in-hand (at least I think the explosion of fur was of canine origin). Gerald supposed she were sun-worshipping, her glances only polite curiosity – then he always did see the good i…[Read more]

  • Janette posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago

    And sorry for the belated congratulations, Libby – amid the business of being employed again, I thought I had already posted my response to your comp win, which was a fine, worthy entry.

    I confess I didn’t know what to do with the April challenge you posted, but some thought during a weekend walk gave me a lightbulb moment.

  • Janette posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago

    Kate, brilliant stuff. Congratulations!

  • Kate replied to the topic New novel from Kate Machon! in the forum Podium 1 year, 1 month ago

    Thanks, Sea! 😃

  • Ooh! Congratulations! 😀

  • UNTITLED (357 WORDS)

     

    Preheat the oven to 220 degrees C.

    Scrub the parsnips thoroughly, top and tail, then cut in half lengthways.

    It’s Mum’s old recipe. I’ve never used it before, but George’s parents are coming for dinner and his dad is especially fond of roast parsnips, apparently. Or so George would have me believe. Honestly? I think i…[Read more]

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    Three sleeps become one [342 words]

    Odd the way memory works, Changes shape and emphasis as one grows older. For me, hearing myself  echoing my mother’s faux cheery encouragement as she told me and Robin, my brother, ‘So, you’ll be staying with Granny and Grandad Trent for a little while. Just three sleeps – ‘ shocked me. That I was  …. not ex…[Read more]

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