Athelstone

Hi Raine,

Thanks for reading and for your feedback, it is really useful.

I like your suggestion about adding tension and about trying. My idea was to show what happens when you stop trying and how quickly things can spiral if you don’t reach out to people, but I think I can work out hints at failed attempts and create some more tension.

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Congratulations Philippa.

Whoohoo! Congratulations!

Great stuff, Philippa – best of luck.

Wow – well done, you. Will be keeping fingers crossed.