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Active 3 years, 11 months ago-
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Daedalus replied to the topic Den monthly competition September 2018 in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 11 months ago
You’re welcome, Bren. Lovely to see so many familiar names, indeed
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Daedalus posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
Well done Denizens – @bric‘s The Chemical Detective will be the next book read by the Waterstones reader Fiona Sharp 🙂
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
Oh – and it might be good if there was a veiled hint of what was to come, earlier on. I mean heavily veiled, so that its true meaning would only be realised after reading to the end. Just a thought.
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
I thought this very well written, John; nicely constructed, with the flashback. I kept wanting to read on. The only suggestion I would make is in the ending. “He was my first” is good because you immediately think she means her first time with a man, but quickly we see that’s not what she meant – which gives away the ending too soon. Much as I…[Read more]
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John S Alty started the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
Here’s a nasty little story I have been playing around with for fun. Have at it, critics!
Memories
Two tall men wearing overcoats followed the nurse down the corridor towards Room 19.
“Florence can be a bit slow some days but most of the time she’s surprisingly bright. She was quite perky earlier so she should be able to answer your que…[Read more] -
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Baz Baron posted an update in the group
A Room with a View 7 years, 11 months agoFeet and inches
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Sandra posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
@jhowejr And yet another Predictioneer – well done and welcome.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 11 months ago
Hi Daeds,
Yes, if you look under fiction at acrossthemargin.com and at https://www.ellipsiszine.com you should find them. A couple of super stories from @Elle also. -
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