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Active 3 years, 11 months ago-
Jules replied to the topic FAQ: Requesting and Giving Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
Yes. Excellent point, Squidge. When monkeying around with someone else’s work, it’s important to always remember that your ideas and the author’s ideas may not mesh. Any rewriting should be done sparingly, strictly as an example (unless the author requests otherwise) and the power should always be returned to the author when you’ve finished.
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Squidge replied to the topic FAQ: Requesting and Giving Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
Can I add something extra to this list, Jules?
By all means, give examples of how differently something could be written when you give feedback – sometimes seeing the work written differently helps you as the author to understand what difference that kind of change could make to your story. But don’t be tempted to completely rewrite the whole…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 7 years, 11 months ago
My agent experience is somewhat limited, but I’d add that it’s not the end of the world if you don’t get one.
Although I worked with an agent for two/three years, when she decided not to work with me any further (bearing in mind that nothing was signed between us in all that time) it gave me the freedom to strike out on my own. Course, I…[Read more]
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Jules replied to the topic Test in the forum Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
There’s this topic and a sticky FAQ page which is closed to comments, Barny. Otherwise it looks fine in my browser.
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Barny started the topic Test in the forum Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
This is a test – DoW seems to be telling me there is 1 topic here, now there should be 2 but I can’t see the 1st only this.
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Barny replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 11 months ago
Hi Laure. please forgive me if I sound silly aking this question, but should I know you from the Word Cloud?
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Jules replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 11 months ago
I feel like ýou’re talking from personal experience here, Ath 😁
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Athelstone replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 11 months ago
“Mosquito? Nope.” What about a mosquito with a really bad attitude that’s sitting there on the wall hardly able to stay put because of the weight of blood it’s just scoffed out of your cheek just exactly where EVERYBODY will think it’s a spot, and planning just how to make its saliva more proteiny and anti-coagulanty and generally irritating. But…[Read more]
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Amanda Berriman (Skylark) replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 7 years, 11 months ago
Hahahaha! I got that, don’t worry 😀
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Athelstone replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 11 months ago
” I literally wouldn’t kill a fly. Even a tiny one.” What about a mosquito?
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Amanda Berriman (Skylark) replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 7 years, 11 months ago
Oops! But the good thing is that making mistakes isn’t the end of the world – which you have proved! And I’ve had plenty of mistakes along the way too…
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RichardB replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 11 months ago
Yes, welcome, Laure.
We’ve only been going a few days, but things are already warming up nicely, so stick around.
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Amanda Berriman (Skylark) replied to the topic Den of Writers – Forum Feedback in the forum Admin and Technical 7 years, 11 months ago
Yes, agree with that Philippa. I’ve not got anything else to add yet, except to agree with comments already made – and thank you for setting this up!
Edit: and like the edit button!
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