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Bella posted an update 7 years, 6 months ago
Coming back to a WIP after a year off. My writing tics are horrendous! On the plus side, the word count has now been slashed to something approaching acceptable, and there’s more to go.
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Bella replied to the topic What shape are your ideas? in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
I can’t remember what inspired my first WIP.
My second was inspired by a trip to Benidorm and I thought it would be fun to make a character suffer it too.
The current WIP was inspired by reading something about the Ten Pound Poms and thinking that would add an interesting aspect to a novel. Another couple of ideas have been sparked by stuff I…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic Some notes on Dara Marks' Transformational Arc in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
I struggle with using this sort of thing as any kind of scaffolding around which to build a story. I can’t even get on with the “Take off your pants” approach, though the book itself contains much of interest and value.
Where I do find it helpful (particularly this one) is when editing, because it can highlight areas that I may have touched on…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic Opinion about title in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
The first and last feel very children’s story to me.
AngGalina looks as if the capital G is a typo (though oddly, AnGal does not give me that impression).
An Galina doesn’t give me anything really to go on, though it still feels YA for some reason.
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Bella replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Tick Toque
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Bella replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
A few initial ideas – not sure if they are anything like suitable:
She once was lost
But now she’s found
(Been playing Amazing Grace…)
Re-filling the nest
Stolen childhood
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Bella replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Truly terrifying conditions. I am sorry it was such a sad end for so many people.
Very well-told tale, Richard. Thank you.
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Bella posted a new activity comment 7 years, 7 months ago
Spotting my verbal tics and searching out specific words. I knew I use “that” a lot but that (ha ha) was the tip of the iceberg. Just, up, down, seems, etc etc – OMG. Plus cutting bits where I did not resist the urge to explain.
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Well done. that is worth a celebration.
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Booyakasha! How did you do it?
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Congratulations.
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Spotting my verbal tics and searching out specific words. I knew I use “that” a lot but that (ha ha) was the tip of the iceberg. Just, up, down, seems, etc etc – OMG. Plus cutting bits where I did not resist the urge to explain.
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Oh, nice work! All those little pesky words. And all that RUE-ing.
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Bella replied to the topic Violence and mental illness in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Whisks, I agree. Good on you for getting that training. And for myself I would have a go if I really had to. I am not small and I am strong, plus my boxing training means I can get force into a punch. But the club owns a duty of care to its members and I am putting it on notice that even if the first incident came out of the blue they can’t use t…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic Violence and mental illness in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
For anyone who is interested, I spoke to the club about their plans to deal with future incidents. I suggested conflict resolution training, Daeds.
I was then told that their only plan has been to tell staff they can lock themselves into the office if they feel scared. I hope aeroplane cabin crew will not be following that example and locking…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic I've gone and done it again! in the forum Podium 7 years, 7 months ago
Wonderful news. Well done, you.
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Bella replied to the topic My failure in the forum Podium 7 years, 7 months ago
@andrew – I loved your para about us imagining ourselves in the new job. I must confess that on that basis I have consistently failed to win the lottery. Off to read your blog now.
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Bella replied to the topic Violence and mental illness in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Thanks all.
I have since discovered that he was on police bail, having already been arrested a couple of days earlier for public order offences and assaulting a police officer. So he may be incarcerated for now. The gym will know, I expect.
Philippa – I entirely agree that he was less likely to assault a female than a male, especially since I…[Read more]
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Bella started the topic Violence and mental illness in the forum Blogs 7 years, 8 months ago
Sorry, this is nothing to do with writing, but I’m a bit rattled by events earlier today and I suspect that some of our members may have some useful input.
Long story short, a previous member of our gym has mental health issues and was at some point under residential treatment for these (I don’t know if this was voluntary or not). Our gym was…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic My failure in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
My significant failure this year has been to have written nothing.
I am not sure that there is much I can learn from that failure, but I have discovered that the desire to write is not one of the flash-in-the pan obsessions to which I am prone. The desire is still there, and I have valid reasons for the mojo loss.
I am hitting the half-century…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic Pitching opportunity for northern writers in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 8 months ago
Crikey. I’m quite tempted and I am a solid South-Easterner. But 2 hours on the train is hardly a no-no.
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