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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Hi Janette – as discussed, it’s gone. Feel free to post again when ready.
Ath.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
I knew from the minute I started reading these that judging would be a tricky business…
Thanks all for entering! I love that you each took a perfectly mundane experience – like sitting in traffic – and gave me a fabulous peek into the headspace of your characters.
Ath, straight in there with your character reference of the man in the siler GT. T…[Read more]
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Thank you, Sea, for such a good challenge. Congratulations @Libby – a worthy win.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
What is this? I turn my back for TWO days and I’m inundated!! ????
Please bear with me. Worked a fifteen hour shift today (with the same tomorrow). I promise to come back with a winner by Monday at the absolute latest x
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Car
Look at that bloke. Arm out of the window, cigarette in hand. Marks and Sparks polo shirt that his wife bought him. Revving the engine every five seconds; counting down the time until death. And he got the silver car, the GT model. He chose that. He calls it “my car”. But if anybody asks, “We chose it. Me and my lady.”
How old do you reckon?…[Read more]
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Seagreen started the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 10 months ago
You’re sitting in traffic. Tell me about the car and the person (people) in the car next to you.
400 words
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 10 months ago
Pleasantly surprised by this, especially given the company ☺️
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 10 months ago
Wow! They were all classy little pieces of writing. Seagreen, I really enjoyed that. Well done.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 10 months ago
The Unmarked Letter
It’s a circular, sitting there on the mat. Or is it? It doesn’t look like the sort of envelope they use. And they usually say To the Householder or something like that. When Arthur was alive, he’d say, ‘That’s me. The householder,’ as though I didn’t count. This one has nothing on it.
Right, that’s Edith at the door. I’d b…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 11 months ago
UNTITLED (321 words)
On Thursday, I wrote a letter. Not to send, you understand, since it wasn’t really to someone, and not to keep either, because once I had written it, and re-read it in that way that people do when they are shocked by their candour, I felt embarrassed by it. Embarrassed by the uncontrolled rage and disappointment that I had…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Motor Racing's Blackest Day: Le Mans, 1955 in the forum Blogs 2 years, 11 months ago
Quite awful accident, Richard. I sought out some of the video and still-images after reading your blog, and I have to say that Hawthorn does look, physically, like the villain of the piece. Whether he was the actual villain or not, his face relaxes into a rather smug expression that does him no favours. I was reminded of the comedian Rob Beckett,…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp – March 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 11 months ago
That Pixie gets everywhere. Well done Kate!
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp – March 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years ago
Dream of an electrician
The day that Colin first fell asleep in his van was as cold and unfriendly as a garden privy in the small hours of a winter’s night. Two long shifts, back-to-back, rewiring the mayoral offices in the town centre, saw him close to exhaustion. He had taken his supermarket sandwich down to the seafront and, with the windows c…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp – March 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years ago
Well, my vote is another month. If you’re up for it that is. If you’re OK with that, I’ll post an entry in the next few days.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Close to Home in the forum Blogs 3 years, 1 month ago
What a fabulous place. The film suggests a strong sense of community. Do you feel part of it as an “incomer”?
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Athelstone replied to the topic The book trade and older readers in the forum Coffee Shop 3 years, 1 month ago
Not sure I’m representative, even though I am also (considerably) beyond 45. I don’t read as much as I did when I was, say, in my late-teens or early twenties. Then I could easily clear 3 or 4 books a week, sometimes 1 a day. I read pretty much every day. At the moment I am reading a book by somebody I know to provide a review. I have a vast pile…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
Best part of 4 days to vote, but that’s it. Still nothing conclusive.
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Athelstone posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
Just over a week to go. Votes are coming in. We have leaders, but everything could change.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 1 month ago
Great story Alex!
Thanks for the prompt @Seagreen. Gave me a chance to work out the back-story for one the main antagonists in my WIP.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you both for entering and I’m so sorry to keep you hanging on like this. To be honest, I found it really difficult to choose; I liked both of them in different ways. On this occasion (and because if I don’t stop prevaricating we’ll still be here next week) I’m going with Alex.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 1 month ago
You caught me on the hop ☺️
I’ll come back to these tomorrow. - Load More
