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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – February 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
I was mooching around the bookstore with my daughter when I read the dedication in Onyx Storm, and it immediately brought to mind my eleven-year-old self – pink, NHS framed glasses, front teeth that I still had to grow into, and a passion for escaping into some book or other, looking for adventure. I posted the dedication as the monthly comp in…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
Some of you may remember Gary Steward from the Wordcloud days. I see that he’s just published the book he was working on way back then. I *think* it was called “The Lemon Grove” back then, but you can find his book on Amazon, kindle or paperback, as the similar sounding “Where Lemons Grow”.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition – February 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
Katherine is typing…
JohnG91 19:44
Hi Kath. I’ve been thinking about what you said. You know, about being decisive. I’ve made a decision. You’ve bullied me into it.
JohnG91 19:57
Just read that back. The bullied thing was supposed to be a joke. Well light-hearted anyway. You’re not a bully. I know when you talked about people who don’t mak…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – February 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh, for goodness sake!
Bilbo, not Frodo. Where is my head at? -
Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – February 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 2 months ago
We have a week to go.
Still time to access your inner burglar and be the next Frodo Baggins ????
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – February 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 2 months ago
Including figurative dragons, of course ☺️
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Seagreen started the topic Monthly Competition – February 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 2 months ago
This is the dedication from Onyx Storm (new book from Rebecca Yarros)
To the ones who don’t run with the popular crowd,
the ones who get caught reading under their desks,
the ones who feel like they never get invited, included, or represented.
Get your leathers. We have dragons to ride.
400 words or less on if, and how, you or your MC would…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 2 months ago
Apologies for being late back to this.
Richard, thank you for the comp and for your kind words. I did try to steer clear of that particular subject matter but, ultimately, it was the only thing that remained front and centre when all the other ideas had scarpered.
Strong field this month and all so marvellously different!…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic What if I'm a bad human being? in the forum Blogs 1 year, 2 months ago
But now the debate does (briefly?) raise its head again as I contemplate that doyen of popular, left-liberal writers, Neil Gaiman.
Why must people keep doing this? I almost completed that last sentence “to me” because it does feel personal sometimes.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 2 months ago
Some strong writing this month. Very well done, Seagreen.
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Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
Apologies to Denizens who are not members of the group “A Different Time”. Any member who is considering an entry to the challenge, or who may have forgotten about it, please note that we close for submissions on Sunday 2 February at 22:00 UK time. Thank you.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 2 months ago
I’ll come back tomorrow
I’ll come back tomorrow to look at the clear space between the Co-op and the Santander Bank. The fresh morning sun will light the glistening concrete and the unexpected birds taking baths in puddles where carpets have been carried off. Men in hard hats and hi-vis vests will bundle drills about and smoke their cigarettes a…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 2 months ago
UNTITLED – 350 words
It wasn’t supposed to be like this.
Lumpy pillows in torn, unidentifiable protective fabric, stuffed into too-small pillow cases. A saggy, foam mattress, plastic-coated and marinated in dilute bleach. A side-room with a window looking onto the whitewashed wall on the other side of the hospital and a door that opens d…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The latest in vanity publishing in the forum Marketplace 1 year, 3 months ago
I asked it about limits and it recommended breaking text into chunks, so I divided the input into blocks of chapters, but as I was about to do the final block I hit an error, which I think was the limit of my free access: there was a message about that soon afterwards. Annoyingly inconclusive! Some chapters were summarised in full, others were…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The latest in vanity publishing in the forum Marketplace 1 year, 3 months ago
I tried a 500 word synopsis. It was curiously like a “bad” synopsis that an inexperienced writer might try, too much detail at the outset and then broad generalisations for the middle and end. It always concludes by asking whether you want any refinements, so I asked for more detail about the conclusion and it invented a character and several plot…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The latest in vanity publishing in the forum Marketplace 1 year, 3 months ago
As we are in imminent peril of being swamped with things-AI if Mr Starmer and our present government are to be believed, I thought I’d bite the bullet and give ChatGPT a whirl. As an experiment, I thought I’d try for a summary of my WIP. Since that’s something I will have to wrestle with when I come to submit, I wondered whether it might be…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh Lord. Two entries. Both very different from what I expected. Not that I expected anything in particular, but I know what I mean. Both excellent. Richard’s engrossed me, as the protagonist was engrossed in the model. Terrie’s made me laugh out loud. There’s no winner or loser here, because it was a virtual toss of the coin. Richard, choose us a…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
Anybody thinking of entering the last Monthly Competition of 2024? Still plenty of time for a few hundred words, but it’s getting closer.
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Athelstone started the topic One Christmas in the forum Coffee Shop 1 year, 3 months ago
Back on the WordCloud I started a group called Advent for Christmas-related posts. It was slightly popular, but back then we had an active wall and plenty of other groups, so it never flew especially high.
I posted a short children’s story. It needs a good edit that I might give it one day, but i think it’s quite fun, so if you’re in need of some…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Happy Christmas in the forum Coffee Shop 1 year, 4 months ago
And many thanks to you, Libby, and to the other happy few who make this place worth keeping. A very happy Christmas to us all.
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Thank you for your kind comments, Sea. However I think such a subject would maybe better suited to @johnt3, or perhaps another Welsh writer whose genre is children’s stories.