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Athelstone replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
I’m way behind – my family invasion came early and is continuing. On a more positive note, it has made me get going on a completely new novel that I’m reasonably happy with so far. I’m trying something I’ve seen recommended elsewhere and not bothering with chapters (yet). Seems OK for now.
I’m doing a weekend away in mid-January (Dunford…[Read more]
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RichardB posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago
Editing: they say cut cut cut, don’t they? Hmm. I don’t work like that. When I finished the first draft of my ghost story six (My God!) years ago it was only 47,000 words long. When I submitted it two years later it was 74,000 words. Now its creeping up to 80,000. Mind you, there’s some rather drastic cutting needed near the end.
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I think it works like that for some, doesn’t it? Writing the bare bones first and then fleshing out. (I’ve always hated the term ‘fleshing out’ – too many dissection classes and JEkyll and Hyde stories!)
I seem to always end up at roughly the same word count – cutting a lot and feeling all pleased with myself, then realising I need whole new scenes…
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Yes, I know that Debi (for one) works like this. so there’s a published author as an example.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
Yes. Great title. Hope the creative/productive jag lasts.
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Daedalus posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago
This is just to say
I have finished
The Draft
I was working on since 2014And which you
Probably thought
I’d never finishForgive me. It was indulgent
All 178 thousand
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I like it! How were the plums?
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Delicious. So sweet, and so cold. Unlike the novel which is bitter and very, very long
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that is bloody amazing @daedalus! Congratulations 🙂 What a lot of plums…
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Yippee Daeds! Hope you are going to take the day off to celebrate.🍒🍾
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Haha I wish
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This is awesomes Daeds. Both the achievement and the plums. I want that meme back, it was the best.
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Congratulations!
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RichardB posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago
Call me weird if you will, but I do love picking a passage apart and putting it back together again, better than before. So satisfying.
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That’s not weird, Richard. I didn’t think I could be the only one who preferred working with an existing draft to creating a new one
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Two different types of adventure, I think. I enjoy both but creating a new draft can be like swimming in very rough seas.
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Definitely. Editing is a craft. Writinf a first draft is an extreme sport
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I like that analogy. If it’s skiing, then I am currently uphill xcountry skiing, stuck in those parallel ruts and not sure whether they are heading in the right direction…
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Daedalus replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Good to know! Coffman starters are great. Basically using a shotgun cartridge to start an engine, minus the lead shot of course. I don’t just do naval aviation btw, my last nonfic was a biography of a RAF bomber pilot, flying instructor and test pilot before and during WW2. Any technical queries, feel free to ask
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Daedalus posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago
Woohoo! Just got a rejection in six minutes. Six minutes! Beat that if you can
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 7 years, 9 months ago
Very interesting blog, Elle. Place is very important to me when I write and when I read. It’s often the element of a novel that stays with me longest after I’ve finished it. I try to think in terms of how the people in my story react with the space within the scene and what part the place has played in their lives but your list is very helpful.
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Daedalus replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Thanks Libby, that’s really nice of you. Glad you found it interesting and informative. I thought they struck the balance pretty well, and as you and Jane felt, did not overdo it with reconstructions. The little bits they did have (a snippet at the start of the Eugene Ely segment and some sailors running through corridors on a warship in the…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Thanks Jane, am blushing now! You’re very kind
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JaneShuff replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Just finished watching this. Daeds – you’re a star. The depth of your knowledge and your passion shine through. Plus I thought the programme was a quality production. It told the story in an interesting and engaging fashion, simply enough for someone with no knowledge like me to follow but without talking down and without the endless repetitions…[Read more]
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JaneShuff posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago
So, returning to my WIP this morning, I saw that the last sentence I’d written yesterday was – I don’t care if this is a redam. – And nope, I don’t have a clue what I meant…
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Daedalus replied to the topic Monthly competition – Nov 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 9 months ago
My inclination would be for you to leave as-is Jonathan. I’m sure you’ll get plenty of entries as and when. NaNo month is always a bit difficult for things like this, but I for one am keen to make sure I enter every Den comp
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Daedalus replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
That works. Nice and simple!
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Daedalus replied to the topic Some notes on Dara Marks' Transformational Arc in the forum Blogs 7 years, 9 months ago
Yes, it was a bit of a million candlepower searchlight moment. In a sense, it’s not that the MC doesn’t try to change, he just completely misinterprets the kind of change he needs. He (and I) had been thinking it was one thing, and it was actually almost the opposite.
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RichardB replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Spot on, Kaz. That’s exactly what he is.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
I must remember to watch it next trip to the UK.
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Daedalus replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Thanks all! This is my second TV credit, but the first was only for archive materials and this is definitely my first proper TV appearance. I don’t think I did too badly, though no doubt a lot of editing was required!
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Daedalus replied to the topic Some notes on Dara Marks' Transformational Arc in the forum Blogs 7 years, 9 months ago
Wooooah! I’ve just had a massive revelation about my MC. I thought that he accepted the necessary change, but it just turned out badly. I actually think he got completely the wrong idea about what change was needed, spectacularly FAILED to change…and that’s what ends badly.
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RichardB replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Well done indeed, Daeds. Authoritative, erudite and lucid. Once again you display that knack you have of making technical things clear to the layman.
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