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  • Seagreen replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Felt the pressure building up as I read and the dam burst at this line ‘Within twenty four hours enough people from Mousehole had volunteered to form a new crew…’Not a good look when you’re in the restaurant car park waiting for your sister.

    Seriously, there are no other group of people who earn this much of my respect.

  • RichardB replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    I can understand how this man feels, but I also remember that the coxswain turned away some of those who did make it to the lifeboat station. Who’s to say he might not have been one of them?

    If you want to experience the full admiration for the courage of those men, you need to watch that BBC film and listen to Russell Smith’s eyewitness account…[Read more]

  • Daedalus replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Another possibility is that the waves were so big that in a trough the Solomon Brown literally hit the seabed. If I’m ever up Whitby way I’ll definitely see about a ride on their Watson lifeboat.

    There’s a decent collection of historic lifeboats at the dockyard at Chatham. I’ve a feeling they have a couple of Watson-type boats there but it seems…[Read more]

  • RichardB replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    The BBC documentary gives the false impression (without actually saying so) that the moment that transmission broke off was the end of the Solomon Browne. That makes for an emotional moment in the programme, but was not the case, since it was seen afterwards. For what it’s worth, I believe that it suffered another violent impact with the Union…[Read more]

  • Daedalus replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Superb blog tinged with tragedy, and, as always told with clarity and sympathy. For all the improvements in hardware and technology, RNLI operations can still be phenomenally dangerous. Operating in those conditions, that close to shore… Reading the account reminded me of The Perfect Storm by Sebastian Junger (great book, but don’t bother with…[Read more]

  • Interesting. I think sometimes, ‘It’s not quite there yet’ can sound like an apology, when it’s actually the admittance of a mature (by which I mean you know yourself and your writing) author, who realises that something created in such a short space of time needs more work. I’ve done it myself!

    But of course it takes time to build that…[Read more]

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    That should be IT didn’t disappoint!

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Logged into the Den and saw that you’d written another of your fascinating blogs, Richard, so I went and made myself a cup of tea and settled down for a good read. I didn’t disappoint. Fascinating story and I must confess to having damp eyes at the end. You’ve got a real knack of telling these tales in an interesting and moving way. Thanks Jane

  • RichardB started the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    The older I get the more disenchanted I become with my fellow humans. I look at the dishonesty, greed, hate and stupidity that seem to fill the news and I despair. One reason I live in a small village halfway up a South Welsh mountain is to get away from all the shit. But in the increasing misanthropy of my old age there is still one group of…[Read more]

  • Such an interesting thread, Sandra.

    I think the most helpful advice I read on this theme was the point that it is not my job to judge whether my work is good or bad. Who am I to say whether someone else’s mind will or won’t be blown? That’s up to them.

    My job as author is to write the damn piece to the very best of my ability, and then to put it…[Read more]

  • Interesting. If I’m asking people for feedback and it’s the first time for us both, I try to signal that I know the piece of work isn’t perfect/finished and that I am genuinely hoping to be told what doesn’t work. Is that self-deprecating? I don’t think so. But I wouldn’t express doubts in a cover letter because it does beg the question as to why…[Read more]

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago

    Thanks, Giselle. You’d do well to duck.

  • Raine posted an update 8 years ago

    Bulgaria holiday day 6 of 12. Pages edited: 0
    Hours with running water: 5
    Dates fed to beech martens: 500

    • That sounds like a typical holiday, all right. Apart from the beech martens thing, but that sounds like a typical Raine holiday

    • Sounds like a typical holiday, apart from feeding the martens, which sounds cool. Enjoy racking up some memories – writing can always come later.

  • Philippa East posted an update 8 years ago

    @danielle Welcome! So glad to have you here xxx

  • Philippa East posted an update 8 years ago

    Have fixed that stupid chapter. Didn’t have to delete the whole thing after just had to write a new opening and make the rest a resolution rather than an inciting incident. Yeah, don’t worry, it’s making sense in my head. I hope.

    • That”s great. Like the wonderful moment when you realise there’s nothing wrong with Chapter Eight. Except that it should be Chapter Twenty-One.

  • Philippa East replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago

    I do love a good pow.

  • Philippa East replied to the topic Example Cover Letter in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Hi @Alanr
    Sounds like a plan. My understanding of the “read our books before you submit” guideline is to help prospective authors determine whether their own MS would be a good fit. I’m sure you’ll quickly work this out by consuming a few of their titles to see if your own seems similar in style and flavour. Good luck!

  • Never Judge a Book

    No, sir, we don’t hold property any more. Not since 1 October. Yes, you did just miss out. Yes, if it was a gold bar we probably would look after it and if you ever find one of those on a park bench then don’t hesitate to come straight here. But this is a book. Well, look after it but leave us the details and we’ll conta…[Read more]

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