Daedalus

  • Thank you, Knicks! @knickylaurelle

     

  • Thanks for the kind words, @sandradavies! I appreciate it. And congratulations to you, Libby! I enjoyed yours and every other entry coming out of this prompt. It was a good one 🙂

  • Thanks, Sandra, for the prompt, which I did find somewhat challenging (not a bad thing).

    Fantastic entries from everyone else! You motivated me to (try to!) do better.

  • I’ve taken Sandra’s brilliant prompt idea from last month and tweaked it. On a micro-fiction course some time ago, I was advised to find story prompts by combining a line of poetry with an instruction from a recipe.

    For the April comp please write 400 words max of prose inspired by:
    <p style=”text-align: center;”>”Suntrap bay windows”</p>
    and
    <p…[Read more]

    • Libby replied 1 year ago

      The monthly comp April page shows all this without added text instructions.

  • Thank you, Ath!

  • You may not have expected it, but you should believe it, Libby. really sharp story there.

    Thanks, Sandra. I enjoyed that prompt. And thanks to all the other entrants; I really enjoyed reading through them this month.

  • Thank you, @sandradavies I really didn’t expect that. The other entries were so good.

    I’ll be back later with a comp for April.

  • Sandra posted an update 1 year ago

    March competition winner declared, and I urge everyone to read the half dozen entries as evidence of the strength and breadth of talent in the Den, and thank Athelstone, for providing the venue.

  • And, at close of play, I confess I find myself reeling at the richness of the offerings sparked by this ptompt, and rather than daunted by the necessity of choosing a winner, feeling well rewarded by the pleasures of reading them – thank you all.

    <u>Terrie</u>’s single word of denial sparked instant interest, and maintained it with phrases suc…[Read more]

  • “you will mistake the gulls

    for the screaming of a girl

    and run out of your flat

    to an empty landing”

     

    you will turn your head this way and that and peer over the railing to the stairwell below,

    seeing no-one, hearing nothing, not even an echo of the sound you followed in the first place. You will grasp the red-painted railing with both…[Read more]

  • Of course, I felt stupid when I realised. There I was standing on the landing in shorts and tee-shirt with my apron on. “World’s Best Chef” it said on the font. Katya bought it for me for Christmas—oh—must be ten years ago. Mrs. Hardcastle from number seventy was out there as well. I wonder if she thought…

    ‘Morning Mrs. Hardcastle. It was the gu…[Read more]

  • Promise Landing

    (410 words*)

    The screams tear Seth like cheap paper from shallow, disturbing dreams, and he gasps awake, eyes on the living darkness that writhes, malevolent with secrets, in the corners of the room. His gut can tell it’s way beyond midmorning, though the blackout curtain over the single window could convince him it’s the wit…[Read more]

  • Libby posted an update 1 year ago

    Change.org has a petition regarding the unlicensed use of authors’ work in AI training
    https://chng.it/5rPXS2C2Hy

  • RichardB replied to the topic The Wild West Railway in the forum Blogs 1 year, 1 month ago

    No, there’s little or nothing to tell you a railway had ever been there. A short stretch at the Tralee end re-opened in the nineties with one of the original locomotives, but it only seems to have lasted less than twenty years. There’s still a Tralee and Dingle Railway Preservation Society page on Facebook, though.

  • Sandra posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago

    Six days left before the monthly comp deadline, and three VERY different, exciting and surely inspirational entries already. Make my selection of a winner all the harder by posting your response.

  • RichardB replied to the topic The Wild West Railway in the forum Blogs 1 year, 1 month ago

    It must have been well over thirty years ago, on holiday in North Wales, when, after visiting Beddgelert, we went for a riverside walk along what must have been the Aberglaslyn Pass. Noting the width and smoothness of the footpath and how it bored its way straght through some rocky outcrops, I remarked wistfully that we must be on the trackbed of…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The Wild West Railway in the forum Blogs 1 year, 1 month ago

    Fabulous blog again, Richard. I’ve always been fascinated by narrow-gauge railways. I’m not quite sure what it is, but maybe it’s the feeling of being able to step into (or onto) something that doesn’t look feasible. I remember my excitement as a child on holiday visiting the Lynton & Barnstaple Railway in Devon.

    Mind you, you wouldn’t get me…[Read more]

  • The Prophecy

     

    You will mistake the gulls
    for the screaming of a girl
    and run out of your flat
    to an empty landing

    This dark prophecy will forever haunt me.
    An old neighbour uttered it; a self-proclaimed psychic, who called by to pass on the warning. Such a pathetic attempt, I thought, to scare me from moving to the new flats offered to tempt…[Read more]

  • They’d Chosen Me for Being Good at Isolation

    Those harbour houses had slope-ceilinged attics with dormer windows. I’d been instructed to stay in one garret, squint out between curtains, send situation reports every two hours. A reconnaissance man, a civilian thought to be steady, I watched the quay below, admired the yachts and motorboats moo…[Read more]

  • RichardB started the topic The Wild West Railway in the forum Blogs 1 year, 1 month ago

    No, not that Wild West. But west this railway certainly was, and as wild as any railway in the British Isles. Its locomotives even had cowcatchers and bells and (at least in its early days) big oil headlamps, like those engines you see in Western movies. And, apart from the absence of hostile Injuns, running trains on it in its last years was…[Read more]

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