Debi Alper

  • Well done, Sandra! And thank you for the prompt, Seagreen. As ever, some fine entries.

  • As usual, I began my search for inspiration by looking through my collection of charity shop-acquired poetry books, although ‘Intimate expanses’, a collection of Scottish poems published 1978-2002, in which I found Liz Lockhead’s  ‘My Rival’s house’ was a first purchase from Carcanet. It details a vivid account of a first meeting with  a future…[Read more]

  • Thank you, Sea, for the challenge and for the kind words. Congratulations, Sandra, your words clearly came from the heart and made you a worthy winner.

  • Have to say I am astonished to be chosen, Sea – and grateful, despite feeling that I fell far short of ‘enthralling’ in comparison to those far more apt which were posted, and made impressive reading. Also, following what has been something of a let-down day, this was a welcome cheering, so thank you for that.  I’ll aim to post August’s…[Read more]

    • I have posted my congratulations and comments and not sure why they are not showing here! Perhaps under Seagreen’s link? This site confuses me at times. Anyhow, Congratulations once more.

  • A great prompt, Sea – I just haven’t had time to write a story this month. Very enjoyable entries from everyone.

    I’m sorry to hear about the cardiologist.

  • Teabreak tells it straight

    I have been known to buff the truth a little, just to get a sparkle when a story is recounted. And if that helps somebody see the finer details a little more clearly, then who am I to deny them the opportunity? However, just as experts say we should resist the call of Mr. Sheen and microfibre when rare treasures are at…[Read more]

  • John T posted an update 10 months, 1 week ago

    I haven’t been around (apart from a flying visit to Janette last week) but much is happening. I’m still ploughing through the first draft of book three – almost there. And Apples in the Dark 2: Angels and Blackbirds is now out in the wild, and available to order through any bookshop (please – I make a loss on every copy sold through Amazon). Sum…[Read more]

    • It was lovely to catch up with you, John. I’m also making more effort to visit here, and I must say, the monthly comps have been a great exercise in tightening prose and the challenge of new writing.

  • Okay Sea, that ‘honesty snagged my conscience:

    The  last time I cried was as I attempted to sleep,  having earlier been admitted to hospital after my husband Steve correctly diagnosed the oddness of my being unable to control my fingers, while doing the Saturday General Knowledge as potentially a stroke. Quoting ‘FAST’, he did everything right…[Read more]

  • Janette posted an update in the group Group logo of DONATIONSDONATIONS 10 months, 1 week ago

    Presuming your details haven’t changed since last time, I hope you will find my £20 donation in your bank. Hope you find the rest.

  • It’s that time again. If anybody feels inclined, please take a glance at the Donations Group. If you aren’t a member of the group, you’ll need to join to see the forum, but that doesn’t commit you to anything.

  • <p style=”text-align: right;”>Sorry Sea, I’ve been racking my brain (while fighting off Ken Dodd and attempting to pack for some days in the  Hebrides) but am totally bereft of  words about tears.</p>

  • The Last Sense

     

    Curse my tears, dissolving my bold exterior to expose the raw feeling beneath. How dare they come at a time when I needed to show courage? To offer a united support when Mum’s strength had finally crumbled?

    And see how the foundations of mine gave way, leaving the sturdier ones to put on the brave faces; carry the weak link of…[Read more]

  • RichardB posted an update 10 months, 2 weeks ago

    Finest line of dialogue I’ve encountered for some time. From The Watchmaker of Filigree Street, by Natasha Pulley:
    ‘What does a clockwork octopus in an elevator shaft sound like?’

  • Athelstone replied to the topic Positivity in the forum Blogs 10 months, 2 weeks ago

    William James seems like an interesting man. He’s an example of something less common these days, a polymath. He studied widely across medicine and philosophy, developing expertise in both fields so that he taught physiology, psychology and philosophy (at different times) at Harvard, whilest finding time for an apprenticeship as a painter, and…[Read more]

  • Janette posted an update 10 months, 4 weeks ago

    Thank you, Ath, for an excellent prompt and for the kind feedback. I loved everyone’s stories, and congratulations to Seagreen – a worthy winner.

  • That’s such a fabulous story, Seagreen.

    I enjoyed everyone else’s entries too. Thank you Ath for the prompt and all your comments.

  • Oh, hooray, and congratulations @ Seagreen, but similarly to all for a varied and thought-provoking selection of ‘last times’. Thank you too Ath  for the prompt – a subject which I ponder increasingly  frequently.

  • Bumper crop springs to mind, but the cliché is wrong because these stories didn’t just spring up, they were all lovingly made by hand.

    Janette’s story reminds us of the way that roles are exchanged as age demands. More than this, it reminds us that life is full of last moments each important and deserving of attention and memory. There is a wist…[Read more]

  • Any more takers? Last chance today. That could be the subject.

  • Moving On

    The elderly man picked up a landline receiver. On his desk lay an open, glossy page of Country Life. The man underlined a phone number and dialled.

    “Hello, my name’s John Tucker,” he said. “I’d like to sell my house. Could you send a valuer?”

    He gave his address. A distant phone voice burbled.

    “Two valuers?” said John. “This aft…[Read more]

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