Jonathan

Hi Elle,

Another superb bit of writing. It is a very convincing portrait of the slide into depression, which is very hard to do in a way that engages the reader. You’ve easily passed that test. I agree with Raine that a bit more tension would give the story more ‘shape’. I also agree with Jonathan that perhaps a few too many sentences are struc…[Read more]

Thanks Raine,
I’m realising I am forming a habit of having “successes” with books I haven’t actually written yet! I mean, no pressure…

That sounds scary!! I’d rather they were up there with me 😂😂 At least Debi will be 😊😊 Sorry to miss you this time x

Great stuff, Mandy – I won’t be there but wish you all the best on that stage – facing all those friends.

Thank you @jillybean both for the cheering and the tag explanation! And @madiguana that’s helpful too 😊
@raine Sorry to miss you this time – enjoy the wedding! I’m missing one to be here this weekend 😳 (Very understanding friends though!)

Just spotted this – fantastic news, Philippa! See you in Sunday 😊😊

It is an epic journey, Mandy. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sorry I won’t be there to see you give a jey note address but I’m rooting for you from the Den. Best of luck – not that you need it. Can’t think of another person more deserving of success 🙂

(Btw if you tag someone using @ then you need to @their profile name rather than the name that…[Read more]

@Mad Iguana Sorry to miss you this time, but totally understand! And thank you 😊