John S Alty

  • Athelstone posted an update 7 years ago

    Still a week left to enter the monthly comp!

  • Her Granny’s face beamed through the steam rising from the jug that she clutched to her chest as though it was a precious jewel.

    ‘Surprise,’ she said.

    Lily looked carefully at her. What could it be? Her plate was complete; a piece of white fish at the top; sweet corn balanced on the left; and mashed potato carefully piled to one side. She’d…[Read more]

  • There was, of course, no such thing as corporate manslaughter back then. But I did hear that after one Victorian accident (not this one) where the driver was charged with manslaughter, Punch published a cartoon showing a policeman collaring the driver and a director walking away, with the caption ‘Yes, you’ve got one. But you ought to have got…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    I’m not sure. An I remember exercise about a particular relationship would be something of a curiosity I think. I enjoyed writing these short pieces because they helped me remember the taste of the time rather than focusing on every intense flavour.

  • With such a litany of abysmal systems, irresponsible staff and wayward practices, it’s a wonder that a lot more than fifteen people weren’t killed. Not that that’s any consolation. The people who ran the show ought to have gone to prison for a very long time

  • Philippa East replied to the topic Bumbling Round the Citadel in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Hah hah! Reading back, I think I maybe make it sound worse than it was. Despite all the tears and tantrums, it still felt like a privilege to sit down and create something with my words. I still knew this was what I wanted to do. Plus, I have a lovely agent who I knew would support me. At the time, it was all so new though, such a steep learning…[Read more]

  • Elle replied to the topic Bumbling Round the Citadel in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    What @hilary said.

    Despite going through all this rollercoaster Philippa is still here to support and encourage others and is very good at talking people off the ledge!!

    Anyway, cannot wait to buy my Little White Lies copy.

  • It’s really hard to believe that somebody could send deliberately ridiculous/obstructive messages like Herbert John when lives were at stake (and I know he was only 18). That said, it’s a level of managerial incompetence and hubris that almost defies belief. Sadly, as the years go by it’s clear that more than cream floats to the top.

    Another…[Read more]

  • Hilary replied to the topic Bumbling Round the Citadel in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thanks for sharing this, Philippa. What a journey!
    And I would just like to add, for the record, that while Philippa was going through all this, and working (and crying) so hard, she has continued to be ever-generous in giving support and encouragement to others. Much appreciated.

  • Railway accidents have many causes. Sometimes the fault is with the hardware: the signalling, the track, the trains themselves. More often one or more people make mistakes, through pressure of work, a moment’s lapse of concentration, or sheer negligence. But the Radstock collision of 1876 on the Somerset and Dorset Joint Railway was, fortunately,…[Read more]

  • Bella replied to the topic Bumbling Round the Citadel in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Someone on Jericho has suggested that the best way to pick up typos is to read the book backwards. Much though I hate typos, I’m not sure I hate them quite that much.

  • Philippa East replied to the topic Bumbling Round the Citadel in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Hah hah, yeah! Well, I suppose I could have not bothered reading the page proofs and just left it to the proof reader. But when I asked other authors, they all advised checking myself, saying I would KICK myself down the line if I spotted typos I could have caught! TBH though, I’ll take page proofs over structural edits any day!

  • Bella replied to the topic Bumbling Round the Citadel in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    O.M.F.G.

    On top of all of that you have to deal with page proofs? I had fondly imagined that at least would be the publisher’s job. They certainly make you earn your crust, don’t they?

    Thank you (I think) for this insight into the process. Before I smash my computer and run screaming for the hills, I must congratulate you on seeing it all…[Read more]

  • KazG replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    actually that would be really interesting @athelstone – putting these memories into the I Remember format (which does seem to intensify them somehow, the way it jumps and juxtaposes gives a really different feel than a narrative does). You should try that!

  • Hello Denizens,
    Following up on my previous two blogs (which you can find here and here), here is the latest instalment on my publishing journey. I hope it is useful to you and good luck to everyone for whatever stage you’re at in your own writing journey xxx

    December 2018
    As you may recall, on 4th December 2018, I officially accepted a two-book…[Read more]

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  • Athelstone replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thank you, Kaz. Do you think this might count as an “I remember” exercise?

  • KazG replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    This is wonderful @athelstone. It feels like a tender and perceptive remembering and Maggie seems extraordinary. You’ve drawn her with a light, deft touch. There’s self awareness and real affection in there too. Beautifully done, without a hint of sentimentality.

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thanks Gerry and Richard. Oh, and Richard – more rails. Definitely.

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