John S Alty

  • August, peak holiday season. For the August comp please combine the themes of holiday and sea. It could be from the point of view of a holidaymaker or a person who works in the tourist industry or someone who simply observes.

    500 words max, deadline midnight 31st August.

  • Thank you, Ath! Thanks also for your comments and careful reading of my story – always helpful for an author. And thanks to Jill, Sandra and Terrie for such evocative, enjoyable pieces.

  • Thank TOY Ath foc comp and commentryand well done to all of us for so vividly  evoking childhoods now past, I  particularly enjoyed Ath’s reference to radio – ours was a brown 18″B Bakelite cube which was only allowed into our bedrooms when we were sick (and often. it seemed. Luxembourg sicker. Looking forward to Libby’s comp for August.

  • Jill’s entry grabbed my attention straight away, because although my own childhood was a few years later, so much was the same. And yes, all the shops shut. In fact, almost everything shut on a Sunday apart from Church and Sunday School. “Hear the pennies dropping” for those who remember it. So much centered on the home back then. A wonderful…[Read more]

  • Don’t mind at all; hope fulfilling demands not too onerous.

  • A brace of fabulous entries this month. Real life has struck at an awkward moment with silly demands on time. I hope you won’t mind too much If I pinch a day from the next comp. and post the results tomorrow evening. So sorry about that.

  • Libby replied to the topic Flash fiction published in the forum Podium 1 month ago

    Thanks, Janette!

  • Janette replied to the topic Flash fiction published in the forum Podium 1 month ago

    Many congratulations, Libby x

  • Fuel

    (385 words)

    At dawn she was in the kitchen, a follow-on to hours of restlessness, the turning over under heavy blankets, a heart driven to pump quicker than usual, a fluttery stomach. She was sixteen. It was a relief to get up and do something.

    The first person downstairs each morning had to check the Aga. The temperature gauge on its…[Read more]

  • There’s a word for it!

    The much faded five inch Quality Street tin I inherited from my mother is near-filled with  buttons, their variety in part due to them having been donated by my aunt Muriel, who was a dressmaker and her mother Dora who was a tailoress. Needless to say, had there been such, I would’ve won ‘best-dressed child’ many a time had…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted an update 1 month, 1 week ago

    Perilously close to the end of July for anybody wanting to enter the monthly competition. The prize this month is the unending adulation of your sister/fellow competitors. Just 400 words could see you enjoying all that. Do you remember the bell ringing on a platform to signal an approaching train, discussing whether careless words could cost…[Read more]

    • I’m in that can’t-tell-the-difference category. I’m trying to get my act together to produced something by the end of the month. My excuse is that I’ve been on holiday, have been socialising, and have watched some football. The time has evaporated, probably inside a tardis.

  • Echoes of a life twinkling in time.

    As years roll away from me I look back at reflections caught in memories rainbow.

    I know I was lucky. My childhood was idyllic, because woven among the colours of my life and simplicity of youth, the feelings of each moment are held, perfect and bright, like small lights of sheltering warmth against the…[Read more]

  • Dear All,

    Please note that this doesn’t have to be about an object. From the theme up there (points up) “an object, or an event, or a saying, or anything at all really that you remember as commonplace when you were young”

  • Libby started the topic Flash fiction published in the forum Podium 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    It’s been a good month for publications by Denizens: Janette’s lovely, satisfyng novel The Indiculous Grace Dunn; Kate’s latest in her delightful Pix and Gabe adventure series; and now, much smaller, there’s a flash fiction of mine in the new CafeLit anthology. It’s a story first written for one of the Den Monthly Competitions. The anthology is…[Read more]

  • Me too, Sandra,  mine’s a  green one . I also have  my  grandparents  twisted  metal  meat  skewers  too.  🙂

  • Well done, Jill – the only inspiration I’d had so far, came from my mother’s mincer (of which I’ve a 1960’s version in a cupboard. Back to the drawing board for me  🙂

  • Kate posted an update 1 month, 3 weeks ago

    Woohoo. Today is release day for book 3 in my Pix and Gabe Adventure series – The Book Trap. The characters would never have seen the light of day without Athelstone’s winter writing challenge, where they emerged in a short story. Some of you have been kind enough to support earlier books, so if anyone is interested, here’s a link. 😀…[Read more]

  • Thank you, Jill. I forgot to set a word limit, so I take your entry as “the bar” and set it now at 400 words.

  • When televisions had rooftop aerials shaped like an “H”, showed black and white, had only two channels, and one more turn of the knob found The Home Service and maybe The Light Programme, they often came with a slim metal rod perhaps 8 or 9 inches long. This could be slotted into holes on the back of the set labelled Horizontal Hold and Vertical…[Read more]

  • Incidentally, I wanted to call the girl Aelfwin but I had trouble getting the A and e to combine into a proper “ash” at the start of the name. Then it occurred to me that a drunk Teabreak would be unlikely to remember that anyway, hence “Alwin, or something like that.” I think Alwin is still sometimes used as a female name, but I could probably…[Read more]

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