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Libby posted a new activity comment 6 years ago
Here’s a review of the book https://www.theguardian.com/books/2020/aug/06/a-traveller-at-the-gates-of-wisdom-by-john-boyne-review-an-ambitious-era-hopping-epic
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Libby posted a new activity comment 6 years ago
I didnβt gasp – too world weary – but I can see why you’re annoyed, Ath. On a lighter note I was disappointed, having hoped to learn something more about nightshade! Woody nightshade grows in our garden, is pretty and you could imagine the berries being used for dye. Itβs also poisonous. But when I got a bit further Iβd have switched off if you h…[Read more]
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Here’s a review of the book https://www.theguardian.com/books/2020/aug/06/a-traveller-at-the-gates-of-wisdom-by-john-boyne-review-an-ambitious-era-hopping-epic
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Thanks, Libby. A really interesting review. I hadn’t realised that the Zelda mistake was one amongst many. Aside from characters deep in history musing about their peers in the language of C20th psychology, we have ‘…kimonos and obis to the Chinese, igloos to the Norse Icelanders, and steel and horses to pre-Columbian South Americans. Potatoes…[Read more]
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That makes me flippin mad! All the hard work we put into our MSs, and he just… 😫
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Absolutely agree. I accept that the βworldsβ we base our stories in have a lot of the unlikely and improbable in them but there is a big difference between that and not bothering to do proper research.
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Libby posted a new activity comment 6 years, 1 month ago
Coming from the Manchester area myself I’m pleased one of the big publishing companies thinks this very populous, diverse and influential area is worth direct support. (If I knew how to add an emoji signalling a combination of weariness, irony, relief and some kind of optimism, I’d put it here.) I have to agree, Raine, that Manchester is hardly…[Read more]
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Libby posted a new activity comment 6 years, 1 month ago
Thank you, Seagreen. The 7 Cs is the most useful and memorable framework I’ve seen – and one comes across a lot of them. Definitely the 7 Cs is a mnemonic to save for next time I need to think about plots.
Many plotting techniques remind me of ‘My Way’. Techniques, I’ve seen a few/many/umpteen, but then again too few to mention.
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Libby replied to the topic Planning vs Winging it. in the forum
A place for Stupid Questoins 6 years, 1 month agoI outline before I start by knowing the probable ending or at any rate an ending I’m heading for – it could change though hasn’t done so far. And I know what the midpoint or turning point will be – the tightening up when the main character(s) are stuck with what’s happened and have to deal with it in a focused way. This applies to short fiction as…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly Competition: June 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 2 months ago
Congratulations, Squidge! I really enjoyed your story and everyone else’s too. Thank you, Jill, for the themes and the comments.
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Libby replied to the topic Where to start? in the forum
A place for Stupid Questoins 6 years, 2 months agoThis forum is a great idea, Andrew.
Re show-or-tell, I can’t add much to what’s already been said so well. The only thing I can think of is that sometimes, even with telling, you might want to write quite descriptively. Emma Darwin gives an example in the showing and telling post Jane mentions.
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Libby replied to the topic That old enemy, Perfectionism in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 6 years, 2 months ago
The character questionnaire. I’m with Richard. I don’t doubt they’re great if you find them useful but for me they are disheartening.
The other ‘favourite’ which sends my spirits groundwards is the implication, sometimes a very thinly-veiled instruction, that creative prose should learn from film or TV. If studying that medium helps fire…[Read more]
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Libby posted a new activity comment 6 years, 2 months ago
It’s interesting when a piece of writing develops a life of its own. And encouraging too I hope π
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Libby posted a new activity comment 6 years, 2 months ago
I gather now, from the Guardian, that it was a ‘misunderstanding’ on the part of RTZ. I feel this probably makes things worse.
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Libby posted a new activity comment 6 years, 2 months ago
That’s great news, Squidge. Well done and, I’m sure, well deserved!
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 2 months ago
I’m pleased the critique was useful, Jill.
I forgot to link names, and as we haven’t heard from @squidge here’s a direct contact.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 3 months ago
All these entries are wonderful! Goodness, it has been hard to choose a winner. I love the way they all capture the detail of immediate surroundings at the same time as linking to a wider world, and how each one answers the competition’s brief in such interesting ways. All these pieces show acute sensibilities and curiosity, and I really enjoyed…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 3 months ago
Ten days left for anyone thinking about entering the May monthly Den competition π
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Thanks, Libby. A really interesting review. I hadn’t realised that the Zelda mistake was one amongst many. Aside from characters deep in history musing about their peers in the language of C20th psychology, we have ‘…kimonos and obis to the Chinese, igloos to the Norse Icelanders, and steel and horses to pre-Columbian South Americans. Potatoes…[Read more]
That makes me flippin mad! All the hard work we put into our MSs, and he just… 😫
Absolutely agree. I accept that the βworldsβ we base our stories in have a lot of the unlikely and improbable in them but there is a big difference between that and not bothering to do proper research.