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  • Athelstone replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thank you, Kaz. Do you think this might count as an “I remember” exercise?

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thanks Gerry and Richard. Oh, and Richard – more rails. Definitely.

  • How long is it since we had a blog?

    It’s been a funny few weeks for me. But never mind all that. This is a blog from the Word Cloud, so apologies to former Cloudies who remember it. I may post a couple more of these blogs as well, so it’s worth saying straight out that I’m also sorry if they seem too locker-room in style. They are who I was.

    The…[Read more]

  • Memories, memories

    Through a mane of blonde hair, through streaks of bleached and of darker dyed strands, her eyes flickered upwards. “Can I help you, sir?”

    Behind me the door hissed shut expensively, hinges well greased by wills and probates. “Do yer know where Bryant Street is?”

    “I umm… don’t know.” She bent her head back down to the screen…[Read more]

  • Kate replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years ago

    Here is the link to the Corrugated Sky Urban Fantasy book my short story Changing Gabe is included in. Some of you will have come across it in Athelstone’s Room with a View writing challenge at the beginning of the year.

    The theme for the anthology was Sass and Magic. If that tickles your fancy, I hope you will go and take a look.

    It feels a bit…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted an update 7 years ago

    3 fabulous entries in the October Comp so far. Why not have a go?

  • Lost and Found and Lost

    Arthur was rooting through a drawer in the garage, the one reserved for plumbing parts, searching for a tap washer. His gnarled hands scrabbled through off-cuts of plastic water pipe, white nylon fittings, a flushing mechanism still in its packaging, old tobacco tins holding copper olives, bolts, nuts and split pins. No…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    Thanks Libby and Sandra – and once again, thanks to Squidge!

    October beckons.

  • Athelstone replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    I might be a bit over sensitive, but it’s the kind of trope that surfaces when feelings are being tested: stories about minorities and their secret evil ways. The classic cases would be all the tales of alien mind-control and body take over that were so popular during the anti-communist frenzy in the US during the late 40s and 50s, or the ‘Yellow…[Read more]

  • I recently found some writing notes that I’d forgotten about. I was surprised by my reaction. That seems like a theme to me. Something (anything) forgotten then discovered. Surprising reaction. 400 to 500 words (tops).

  • Athelstone replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    Thanks for a fab competition, Squidge. You’ve brought a tear to my eye. I’ve been doing the monthly competition for nearly 10 years, although with fewer entries in the last few months, and this is my first win! There were some super entries this month; I’m really pleased.

    I re-read my entry and worried that it might be steering too close to the…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted an update 7 years ago

    Wow! Came across some notes I scribbled down about 5 years ago: events in the life of a character in a book I’ve put aside. Not prepared for how guilty it would make me feel. It really seemed as though I abandoned somebody important – almost like a real person. What are my life lessons here? Stop scribbling stuff down? If I do, don’t read it…[Read more]

    • Libby replied 7 years ago

      Perhaps the last question is the right one. Or return to the character if not the same story. It sounds as though the character has life or you wouldn’t feel bothered about them. Someone to come back to when the time is right?

      • Raine replied 7 years ago

        I’ve got two notebooks full of random notes on characters or ideas. Most of it will never turn into something, but they’re great for when I’m feeling a bit blank – looking through and seeing what wants to be written. If you’re feeling that guilt, then perhaps that idea wants to be written enough for you to spend a little bit of time expanding on it?

        • I’ve written a fair amount of this character, but killed her before her history unfolded later in the story. It was during that unfolding that I began to like her. I was feeling bad enough about having done her in, but then I came across a load of notes about a chance encounter she has with an old friend after a separation of several years. I have…[Read more]

  • I’ve generally replied in the past to agents who have read the full and the type of reply has depended on the type of mail they’ve sent. if it’s been a fairly short ‘not for us’, I’ve just thanked them but if they’ve gone to the bother of giving me some feedback, I’ve normally thanked them for it specifically and told them how much I valued it,…[Read more]

  • Do you mean that you sent a ‘thank you’ to the agents after they declined? I haven’t done that in the past. Not that I’ve made many submissions lately.

  • Athelstone replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    Oh yes, 373(ish)

  • Athelstone replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    Tortoiseshell Specs

    I wear tortoiseshell specs. My dear old mum did too. And Dad. A family tradition that I hadn’t really thought about. I mean, we had so many things that I hardly even noticed. Family traditions, that is. There were words we used that I thought were just normal. Mum called me dinny if I did something daft and lairy when I was n…[Read more]

  • Fabulous Elle – well done.

  • Fantastic achievement @elle! Congratulations

  • Athelstone posted an update 7 years, 1 month ago

    Tick tock! Songs of Innocence & Experience.

  • Athelstone posted an update 7 years, 1 month ago

    Well, here I am looking out at the Haymarket tram stop in Edinburgh from a cosy AirBnB. It would have been nice to catch up with local Denizens but I have my family with me and it’s been a packed weekend around a family wedding so not much opportunity. Flying back to Sussex by the Sea later this PM so won’t be feeling much like doing responsible…[Read more]

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