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Kate posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
I wanted to let you know that I’ve finally gone ahead and published my humorous middle grade book. I’m very excited!
Some of you may remember the characters Pix and Gabe from one of Athelstone’s short story contests. Well, the pair have now gone large.It’s launching on 12 July. If anyone is interested, you can pre-order an e-copy now, or get a…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 10 months ago
Hunting The Children of Electric
You may think we’ve harnessed electricity but don’t be fooled by its compliance, it’s merely an angry beast straining at its leash, longing to be free.
If you’ve stood watching for the crackle-flash of its untamed brother, then counted and listened for the rumble, you’ll know what I mean when I say, the effec…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 10 months ago
Thanks for the comp, Ath! Another opportunity to stretch myself ☺️
And congratulations to Libby for winning, and the rest of us for giving it a go ????
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Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
Sorry for any oddities and issues with the site. I had a bumper crop of major updates to install and although I did my best to slip these in seemlessly, there are one or two niggles. In particular, Buddypress, which gives the site many of its social networking features had a complete rewrite. I did check all the prerequisites and tried it out on…[Read more]
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Kate posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
Is anybody else have trouble with group posts? It’s impossible to get to recent posts.
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Hi Kate, sorry , I’ve not been online much today. Can you give me some more detail on the issue you’ve got? What forum? What posts? Anything else you think might be helpful.
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Thanks, Ath. It’s in our SE course group. A forum has multiple pages but we can’t move beyond the first page to look at later posts.
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Hmm. OK, no idea at the moment.
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So, when you go to the forum, you’re presented with an original post (topic) plus any replies on that page, but you can’t proceed, i.e. if you pick page 2 or the arrow, nothing happens apart from the screen refreshing. I think it may be a problem with other forums as well.
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I think I’ve got a fix.
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That’s me borrowing Admin’s hat by the way.
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🙂 yes, that’s what is happening.
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Try now.
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That’s working. Thank you!
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 10 months ago
A most enjoyable writing challenge for May, Ath.
Well done Libby, Sandra and Sea for creating such powerfully expressive reading.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 10 months ago
Why do you always insist on making this difficult?
Terrie’s Plant Song is almost a poem to the language of flowers. Rich and ancient with a deadly heart. The melody, she writes, is intoxicating, and I can’t think of a better word for the whole piece. I said “anything floral” and it’s hard to imagine something more floral than this. A wonderfully…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
THE GATEKEEPER
They closed the Winter Gardens. Lack of funding or resources or some other bullshit excuse. Redundancy notices for the gardeners who’d been there for years, and redeployment to grass-cutting duties for the young apprentices who still didn’t know their aquilegia from their allium. They stored the tools in the old stable buil…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
Plant-Song
Nepenthes, the watcher, teaches us to listen for murmurs along the grapevine because the scent of those words is strong and always carry seeds of the truth. They whisper tales of creation that began beneath woody crowns of ancient cycad trees and of cerebral vines, trailing and probing in thickly netted curls upon the loamy earth.
The…[Read more]
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Athelstone started the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
April showers bring May flowers. they say. But when is a flower a flower and when is it a weed? Anything floral in less than 501 words.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp April 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
Seagreen, thanks so much. A brilliant prompt for April. Thanks also to my co-authors. There were some great pieces of writing.
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Seagreen replied to the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 1 year, 11 months ago
I love to plan. That’s why nothing ever gets written.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Comp April 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
Honestly, I’m sorry this has taken me so long…
All the entries left me wishing I’d given you more words to play with since each of them teased with hidden depths.
Ath – so easy to read (as ever!) Engaging, apparently effortless writing, but so many questions! Who was this man? Where did he come from and where would he end up? More importan…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Comp April 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
Sorry! I haven’t forgotten, just waiting for a break in the clouds.
If I don’t have time tonight, then results will definitely be posted tomorrow when I’m off.
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Athelstone replied to the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 1 year, 11 months ago
To be fare, sometimes I don’t know the ending – or the story.
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RichardB replied to the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 1 year, 11 months ago
Stephen King, Ath? He’s said that he never knows what’s going to happen when he starts a novel, and he’s published nearly seventy of them.
Your method (if we can grace it with that name), Ath, sounds very much like mine: a rough idea of the story arc and the ending, and not much more. The nearest I ever got to planning was to write out the rather…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 1 year, 12 months ago
I’ve written three full length novels and two shorter ones, plus numerous short stories. I’ve never been able to bring any planning tools to bear on the process, either widely advocated or self-invented. Yes, it is extraordinarily difficult and a constant worry as the story progresses, since I am an inveterate seat-of-the-pants writer. Yes, I…[Read more]
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Terrie started the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 1 year, 12 months ago
I might just be burbling on to more practised and organised storytellers but thought I’d share this little part of my writing experiences.
In my teens, when I first began to tinker with the idea that I could be a writer, I simply let whatever came into my head trickle out from beneath my fingers. Sometimes it made sense sometimes it didn’t. The…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Where Does Your Writing Inspiration Come From? in the forum Blogs 1 year, 12 months ago
@sandradavies, yes indeed – transfer of information. The number of times I’ve come across a note I’ve scrawled down when all that’s left is an incomprehensible collection of words and a vague memory of myself thinking that I must find a way of using this brilliant insight. the very embodiment of having all the nuance but none of the original…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 2 years ago
Oddity Corner: accustom, verb, make someone or something accept (something) as normal. The other day, in my writing group, somebody came up with the phrase, “…as my eyes accustomed to the darkness.”
It immediately struck me as an odd phrase, but I was in a minority of one. I suppose my reaction is because I’m used to seeing accustomed as part…[Read more]
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I don’t think it has a problem though it perhaps sounds old fashioned, which could be the intention. In a contemporary story I’d be more likely to say, ‘As my eyes adapted to …’.
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But I think there could be a grammar question in there, Ath. This is where I show my uncertainties about active v passive but accustomed on its own is active. In a compound with an auxiliary verb it’s more passive I think. ‘My eyes became accustomed.’ The OED says, ‘In passive use sometimes approaching the stative adjective; cf. accustomed adj.’
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My eyes opened to darkness.
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In which ‘opened to darkness’ is adjectival. Sometimes you want a straightforward active verb and sometimes you don’t.
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I’ll stay sitting on this fence 🙂
And I’ll chuck in a quote. ‘The ear is not accustomed to exercise constantly its functions of hearing, it is accustomed to stillness.’
J. Ruskin, Modern Painters vol. I. 60
Lucky Ruskin.
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It’s definitely not intended to be old-fashioned. A twisty modern tale.
The nearest support I have found to my position when searching the internet, is the statement that “accustomed to usually comes after linking verbs such as be, become, get, and grow”.
I suspect that part of the issue is that, as the OED suggests, there is an adjectival…[Read more]-
I wondered if the transitive quality of accustomed was playing a part but couldn’t get my head round whether it was or not. This is where my thin knowledge of grammar fails me. I’m also easily lost when having to consider how one word can fulfil different grammatical functions which might overlap.
With accustomed, maybe it comes down to how an…[Read more]-
In the end, voice is probably the most important thing. If the character or narrator would use a linking verb, there should be one included.
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I think that’s what bothered me the most. It’s far away from a commonplace way of speaking. I’ve had quite a few conversations over the last three score years and (well not quite) ten, and read a fair bit, and I’m pretty certain that this is the first time I’ve seen “accustomed” used in this way.
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Why I’m wasting my time puzzling and researching this, I don’t know. Actually I do. I’m about to start editing and at the same time I’m at a difficult point in the rewrite of a short story that’s insisting on growing towards novella length. In other words, prevarication.
Anyway, I think I have it:
1) Accustom is a transitive verb. It requires an…[Read more]-
No good asking me about grammar, so I can’t give a reason for it but while I had no hiccup over “My eyes accustomed to the darkness” I mentally inserted ‘themselves’ after accustomed.
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Which is to supply an object to the verb and make it grammatically correct.
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Thank you for sorting this out, Ath. It has made me think more carefully about verbs 🙂
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I think the importance for writers is that we need to demonstrate that we can follow the generally accepted grammatical conventions so that our work is publishable. There’s an awful lot of correct grammar that simply reflects how the posh mates of C19th lexicographers spoke and wrote and sets out that other ways are wrong.
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More often than not , i find if something you write or read stops you from moving forward then it probably could benefit from revision. depending on the surrounding context of the piece i would have probably written something like … As my eyes adjusted I negotiated the dark shadows with growing ease.
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Late to this, but maybe I’ll make up for that by the pungency of my comments. Even before your careful explanation six posts back, that phrase just sounded plain wrong to me, like a bum note in music. Just because you were in a minority of one doesn’t mean the others were right. To extend the musical analogy, it’s as if you’d been in a group of…[Read more]
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@purplewitch absolutely. I don’t think it will be an issue because the writer in question is quite sharp. Anyway, if it gets to the point where a 3rd party is giving it a professional read, it isn’t going to last.
@richardb yep, that analogy is about right. In this instance I wouldn’t say the author has cloth ears (although the others might, I…[Read more]
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Adding a bit of nonsense to the conversation –
To write a pithy sentence and not use well-worn phrases
Comes with all the thinking and headache that it raises.
So, me, I play with words and, using inconsistent skill,
I hammer, pull, and twist them and bend them to my will.
I make them mine – reformed, unique, and, sometimes packed with w…[Read more]-
Very nice too.
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Pix and Gabe are brilliant, 100% delightful characters who will entice any reader. Well done, Kate! I’m looking forward to reading The Shadow Deception.
Thank you, Libby!
Great news, Kate. I’ve watched your magical duo for some time now. I’m certain the Shadow Deception will be a winner.
Thanks, Athelstone. Fingers crossed. 😊
That’s such exciting news – congratulations, Kate! I’m sure your charming, quirky duo will enchant many young readers. xx
Thanks, Kaz!
Well done, Kate. I’m so out of touch with my writing people, but I love your writing. I’m busy finishing off my own WIP, Marigold (almost there), but will take a look as soon as I come up for breath.
Thanks so much, Janette, I really appreciate that. And good luck with finishing the WIP.