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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 10 months ago
And thank you Ath for setting the competition and giving us all helpful feedback. Apologies for not mentioning this before.
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Kate replied to the topic Feedback on the Course in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 10 months agoThanks for all your hard work @woolleybeans.
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Kate replied to the topic Writing Practice: Year 1 in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 10 months agoNice summary @JaneShuff. I think you’re right – it’s about getting in the mindset of making notes and creating work regularly. I read an interesting quote from Ira Glass about closing the gap between what you want to be creating and where you are now. That was all about doing a big volume of work and having deadlines. It’s back to the old idea of…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 10 months ago
Congratulations, John. I loved your yo-yo story. And thanks for organising, Ath.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 10 months ago
Well done, John, and well deserved. And to everyone else too. I’m glad I didn’t have to judge between such good entries.
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Kate replied to the topic Feedback on the Course in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 10 months agoWorks for me. I’ve got my journal ready, just haven’t written in it yet! But a step in the right direction.
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Kate replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 10 months ago
First day
The first day of school was always like this – nervous parents clutching little ones’ hands, milling in a crowd of growing frenzy. The sooner they were decoupled and the parents moved firmly on their way, the better it would be for everyone. But first reassurance was needed.
I moved through the group, cutting apron strings when no one…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 10 months ago
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Photographs
Kirsty wasn’t interested in the marriage album but there was a folder of other wedding photos. She tipped the glossy prints out over the kitchen table: all those relatives and friends, held in their best outfits for decades.
It was fine to look at them now. The old emotions didn’t snag any longer. Her…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Story idea in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 10 months ago
What a great crucible of an idea. I can see it as a film too.
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Kate replied to the topic Craft Seminar Class 1: Getting Started: Memory, Obs in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 10 months agoI believe there’s a chemical released in your brain during traumatic (or very happy) events that fixes the memory. Probably some sort of survival learning mechanism I would guess. But this does mean our I Remember pieces are like to be tear jerkers. I had a go yesterday and was reduced to sniffling. I’m going to a conference on UK GAAP this…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Class 1: Writing Exercise, Hilary in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 10 months agoSo poignant, Hil. He sounded like a lovely person.
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Kate replied to the topic Class 1: Writing Exercise, Bella. in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 11 months agoFrom a child’s perspective, this is quite a scary, stomach churning tale. Nicely evoked. I’m glad it had a happy ending.
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Kate replied to the topic Class 1: Writing Exercise, Sea in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 11 months agoThere’s a big ouch in the middle there with the dentist! My teeth are aching at the thought of it. You really conjure up the childhood feelings beautifully (and painfully).
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Kate replied to the topic Craft Seminar Class 1: Getting Started: Memory, Obs in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 11 months agoI’m with you on all that @Raine.
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Kate replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 6 years, 11 months ago
Here is the link to the Corrugated Sky Urban Fantasy book my short story Changing Gabe is included in. Some of you will have come across it in Athelstone’s Room with a View writing challenge at the beginning of the year.
The theme for the anthology was Sass and Magic. If that tickles your fancy, I hope you will go and take a look.
It feels a bit…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Craft Seminar Class 1: Getting Started: Memory, Obs in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 11 months agoI enjoyed the Burroway chapter. There were lots of great suggestions to kick start ideas and, like Woolleybeans, I think I shall have to summarise them before they slip away. I’ve seen free writing suggested many times but never tried it. Perhaps now is the time to give it a go.
I struggled to understand the gorgeousness of the pieces in the Le…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Class 1: Writing Exercise, Raine. in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 11 months agoWhat a fab idea to use the I remember exercise to find a character’s voice. I shall do that in future. Your ‘I remember’ is very lovely and conjures up so many scenes and senses. It needed several reads to take it all in.
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Kate replied to the topic Syllabus and course materials. in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 11 months agoThanks, Wooleybeans, this is all looking great. Just waiting on the books before digging in.
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Kate replied to the topic Syllabus and course materials. in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 11 months agoI should have ordered mine earlier, but they’re on the way now.
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Libby replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 11 months ago
I very much like your story, Ath, exactly because of the problems you comment on. The twist worked really well for me, and I often don’t really enjoy such stories because the twist feels tacked on. This one, though, feels integral to what’s gone before. I also enjoyed it as a horror story but that was secondary for me. I could be over analysing…[Read more]
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