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Tangled Web (A, The, What a, Weaving a,)
Untangled Web

Time is sometimes described as a fourth dimension, so:
Fourth Dimension
The Fourth Dimension
Into the, From the, Out of the, Attack of the. (last one was a joke).

Excellent, Richard.

You have to blow your own trumpet, no-one is going to blow it for you.

What genre are you writing in Jane?

I agree that if you have built up to it, then there has to be a payoff. You can still adapt the level of detail to suit your intended reader.

It’s a good idea to study comparable books and see how they deal with violence before you decide which route to go down.

Thanks, Daeds, a valid point and I appreciate the input.

Well done Seagreen, fully deserved.
Thanks, Daeds. Yes, I was in SA for the election. What do you mean by “on the nose”?

Wonderful news, congratulations!!

How about a cute market town? Bustling with people going about their trivial day to day activities. It will be in stark contrast to the traumas the abducted child has to process. The family has stayed in the same place the whole time, and when the child comes back she recognises and remembers things from before her abduction. Things are the same…[Read more]

Well done Janette!