Philippa East

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Oh God, this analogy is all too apt….

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    @daedalus I’m pleased the impetus is there. That IS a good sign. And I think an “open-minded reader’s” read would be a great place to start. (Tip: If you’re like me, lock up the pencils / pens before you start. I find it so hard to resist marking stuff up and it always gets in the way of absorbing the story as a whole)

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Oh good for you @kazg. I am glad it’s helping you conquer the fear. Driving with headlights, yes! (Ug). Chipping away, exactly, and I’m so pleased you feel “rested but engaged”. NaNo really is crazy… I have never done it. I fear I’d lose my mind!!

    • I love that analogy – I will think of that as I plough through each slow chapter!! I’m driving in pretty dense fog at the moment, but there are cats’ eyes. And actual cats on my desk, obv. Well dones for sticking to your targets – that’s bolstering & will hopefully keep you moving.

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Yes… I’ve found if I try to write in the evenings (i.e. after work), my brain gets too wired and I can’t switch off to sleep. Also, because I’m like a dog with a bone with stuff, and enforced break from writing is probably good for me, to prevent me getting obsessed and overwhelmed. It also means I make better use of the other days, knowing I…[Read more]

    • Not surprised you can’t focus after work! But well done for moving through the panic and getting into things again. Hope the weekend lets you keep the momentum up…

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Ps well done on the two chapters. What kind of editing are you doing?

    • Ta. x. Edit is a general tighten up to try to shrink the total. But I’ve also decided to cut out a character who just wasn’t quite pulling his weight. I’m hoping that helps the whole thing streamline, but it makes the whole thing very line-edit level. Tempting, like you say above, to just keep going when there’s time. But I don’t think that would…[Read more]

      • Oof that does sound hard. I know what you mean about changing one thing affecting everything. Sounds like you,are making brave decisions though with the tightening. I hope it is starting to feel more streamlined (streamlined is such a good word. That’s how we want stories to feel, I think. You know, a sort of organic elegance).

  • Philippa East posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 4 months ago

    Well, I’m sure glad for this SloMo month… until the start of this week, I had too many distractions to focus on writing and the lack of progress was just making me increasingly panicked. But for the last three days, I’ve managed my plan of a few hours a day. I feel less panicked now, because I feel sort of ‘back in the familiar groove’ and I can…[Read more]

    • Sounds good, Philippa. And I think you are right to acknowledge that some days are just not meant to be writing days. I can never write when we are away, even if I have the time. It used to annoy me but now I accept it.

      • Yes… I’ve found if I try to write in the evenings (i.e. after work), my brain gets too wired and I can’t switch off to sleep. Also, because I’m like a dog with a bone with stuff, and enforced break from writing is probably good for me, to prevent me getting obsessed and overwhelmed. It also means I make better use of the other days, knowing I…[Read more]

        • Not surprised you can’t focus after work! But well done for moving through the panic and getting into things again. Hope the weekend lets you keep the momentum up…

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Gah, @daedalus, that’s rough. But maybe trust that your writing brain will be whirring away in the background and when you have the time and energy again, the ideas will be there.

    • Thanks @philippaeast, I hope so. The other day I really wanted to just drop everything and start reading through my WIsortofP so that’s probably a good sign. I feel I should just read it through without making any notes, let alone editing, to try and read it as much like a reader might, and get a feel for what I might cut without overthinking it.…[Read more]

      • Do it Daeds.

      • @daedalus I’m pleased the impetus is there. That IS a good sign. And I think an “open-minded reader’s” read would be a great place to start. (Tip: If you’re like me, lock up the pencils / pens before you start. I find it so hard to resist marking stuff up and it always gets in the way of absorbing the story as a whole)

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    *Room With A View

    • I love it when something insists on being written even if you don’t have a clue where it’s going.

      • How did the writing group go @squidge?

        • Sorry – been out of sight for a few days. Writing went well – the group of mainly older ladies (70+yrs) seemed to enjoy the exercises I set, and convinced quite a few that they could write after all. Yet to try it on the NIBsers…

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Well, that’s progress then! Nice work on the Room With a. It’s story. Hope it collaguates soon.

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    I like the plan, @raine. Slow (SloMo) and steady. I’m also switching it up – spending a couple of hours mentally revising elements of book one and then an hour or so sketching ideas for book 2. I switch sides of the table in between!

    • Ps well done on the two chapters. What kind of editing are you doing?

      • Ta. x. Edit is a general tighten up to try to shrink the total. But I’ve also decided to cut out a character who just wasn’t quite pulling his weight. I’m hoping that helps the whole thing streamline, but it makes the whole thing very line-edit level. Tempting, like you say above, to just keep going when there’s time. But I don’t think that would…[Read more]

        • Oof that does sound hard. I know what you mean about changing one thing affecting everything. Sounds like you,are making brave decisions though with the tightening. I hope it is starting to feel more streamlined (streamlined is such a good word. That’s how we want stories to feel, I think. You know, a sort of organic elegance).

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Oh well done! Any words on a new WIP is great. And that research all counts too.

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Me a billion. I feel your pain. Great work on the short story though, and good luck for the submission

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    203 > 0.

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago

    Well done @hilary on pushing on. I know what you mean about the false summits, but keep,faith. It does just take that long. If it’s any consolation I’m on draft, er, 20 with at least another round of edits to go! And trust me: the agent will wait, there’s no rush. I took a whole year between the request for the full and sending it, and it was fine.

  • Oh wow @hilary, what an honour!! Congratulations again on your placing. I hope you had a wonderful time at the launch x

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago

    Good work on the popping. Good luck for the playing too 🙂

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago

    Oh well done on the ruthlessness! And that sounds like such an important thing to have fixed. I wonder if part of our Fear can come from the sense that if we try to change tricky elements in the MS, the whole thing will fall apart….

  • Philippa East posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 5 months ago

    Okay, well today has gone well, I think. I managed about two hours, working on balancing the various twists, climaxes and (false) resolutions in the book. I think I’ve managed to pin down the problem more clearly and sketch out a general solution.
    I still have to work out the specific details I’ll need to add into the story MS itself to pull…[Read more]

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago

    Hi @raine. I feel your pain! Is that comment about trimming one that you have only just received? If so, then it might need a little time to digest. Is it a change that you are, in principle, in accord with? Do you think it’s a case of losing some scenes / a subplot line, or more a case of just tightening everything and trimming words throughout?…[Read more]

  • Philippa East posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago

    Yes, good point! But I agree, I think there’s a danger that we over-tax the creative subconscious by hammering away at idea-generation for too long.

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