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Mad seems to be the generally accepted diminutive, GippsGirl. I’m happy with anything, as it means I’m being seen. 🙂

Thanks, Kate

I suppose all you can do is send a follow-up email to say they should disregard the submission?

Interesting question though. Not sure what the best solution is

I think you’re right on the ending btw, I was just a bit slow on the uptake

Thank you Jonathan and Deadalus for your feedback and suggestions, they have been massively useful.

Regarding the comment about the cereal and the sugar. The reason it’s in there is to show her degradation when later she has cereal again and that time they taste like cardboard

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