Terrie

  • Shall I compare thee to a summer day?  

    The sons of Scathios are not many, but we exist, hiding in plain sight, yet cautious as stealthy shadows flickering through time.

    The oracle of Ages states ‘everything is subject to the passing of time, even that which is immortal’ and yes things around me did transform and I perceived them in their tran…[Read more]

  • Only three entries but what a selection!

    All expertly written and cleverly presented is evidence that Den of Writers contains a wealth of experienced and skilled writers.

     

    1. Wow Libby what a wonderfully executed piece of verb-less writing; plus a well-crafted opening sentence as well.

    Richly descriptive but without verbs, the shorter…[Read more]

  • I thought July’s challenge could be a free choice of subject matter and genre, but to add a little twist to the  task your entry must contain a reference to a cooking pot of your choice (saucepan, frying pan etc.) and the words,

    Shadow

    Bridge

    Trinket

    Word variants of the above are also ok.

    Be funny, be scary, be mysterious, be whatever takes…[Read more]

  • This was such a good challenge producing three different  perspectives .

    I agree with Sandra picking a winner is  always difficult  at the best of times and I think we all did brilliantly. So well done Ath and  Sandra and thanks for passing the baton over to me, Libby.

    I will be posting  next months challenge shortly .

  • Hunting The Children of Electric

    You may think we’ve harnessed electricity but don’t be fooled by its compliance, it’s merely an angry beast straining at its leash, longing to be free.

    If you’ve stood watching for the crackle-flash of its untamed brother, then counted and listened for the rumble, you’ll know what I mean when I say, the effec…[Read more]

  • A most enjoyable writing challenge for May, Ath.
    Well done Libby, Sandra and Sea for creating such powerfully expressive reading.
    Looking forward to Libby’s June challenge.

  • Plant-Song

    Nepenthes, the watcher, teaches us to listen for murmurs along the grapevine because the scent of those words is strong and always carry seeds of the truth. They whisper tales of creation that began beneath woody crowns of ancient cycad trees and of cerebral vines, trailing and probing in thickly netted curls upon the loamy earth.

    The…[Read more]

  • Terrie posted a new activity comment 2 years, 2 months ago

    Adding a bit of nonsense to the conversation –

    To write a pithy sentence and not use well-worn phrases
    Comes with all the thinking and headache that it raises.
    So, me, I play with words and, using inconsistent skill,
    I hammer, pull, and twist them and bend them to my will.
    I make them mine – reformed, unique, and, sometimes packed with w…[Read more]

  • I might just be burbling on to more practised and organised storytellers but thought I’d share this little part of my writing experiences.

    In my teens, when I first began to tinker with the idea that I could be a writer, I simply let whatever came into my head trickle out from beneath my fingers. Sometimes it made sense sometimes it didn’t. The…[Read more]

  • Terrie posted a new activity comment 2 years, 2 months ago

    More often than not , i find if something you write or read stops you from moving forward then it probably could benefit from revision. depending on the surrounding context of the piece i would have probably written something like … As my eyes adjusted I negotiated the dark shadows with growing ease.

    • Late to this, but maybe I’ll make up for that by the pungency of my comments. Even before your careful explanation six posts back, that phrase just sounded plain wrong to me, like a bum note in music. Just because you were in a minority of one doesn’t mean the others were right. To extend the musical analogy, it’s as if you’d been in a group of…[Read more]

    • @purplewitch absolutely. I don’t think it will be an issue because the writer in question is quite sharp. Anyway, if it gets to the point where a 3rd party is giving it a professional read, it isn’t going to last.

      @richardb yep, that analogy is about right. In this instance I wouldn’t say the author has cloth ears (although the others might, I…[Read more]

      • Adding a bit of nonsense to the conversation –

        To write a pithy sentence and not use well-worn phrases
        Comes with all the thinking and headache that it raises.
        So, me, I play with words and, using inconsistent skill,
        I hammer, pull, and twist them and bend them to my will.
        I make them mine – reformed, unique, and, sometimes packed with w…[Read more]

  • I know everyone has their own muse that sparks ideas and their urge to write. The genre of writing you are most comfortable with also flavours those ideas so, for me, anything archaeological, mythical and magical always holds that allure.

    And yes I have a note book in which I scribble ideas – actually I have a couple of notebooks. Alright……[Read more]

  • Not Date stamp Approved

    I am waiting in a line of silent people.
    Through the high-domed crystalline crown of windows, pale light, drifting like blossom in the air, reflects a gauzy veil of sleepy light and a comfort blanket of warm, mysterious, air coils softly with it.

    There is a sense of waking on a limp summer morning coated in the scent of…[Read more]

  • Thank you Sandra, Ath, and Sea for such excellent entries.

    1. Sandra, what a ‘jump right in’ really thought-provoking opening statement then backtracking to give a well-crafted back story to the piece before we actually meet Vic Duncan. I especially liked the small almost throw away sentences that gives good insight into the main cha…[Read more]

  • Thanks for choosing my entry as winner for the February competition i enjoyed writing it and also reading everyone else’s offerings.

    As this year is a leap year I decided a good title for this months competition would be ‘The Leap’.
    The only limit is your imagination so interpret it as you like, prose or poem if that takes your fancy but…[Read more]

  • Barely six weeks in to another year and I am wondering what task should I tackle next?
    The Christmas tree is gone the limited decorations I possess and are packed away .The few yuletide cards received are now repurposed into gift tags for the next festive season and thank you messages are all written or texted. Holey moley I’ve even written m…[Read more]

  • The Emporium.

    I’d been watching the place for a while and now I was ready.

    The tiny shop by the empty mill was cobwebbed in layers of age and the light inside flickered with a hospitable glow. The antique-looking sign over the bottle-glass door announced it was an “Emporium Of Returned Things”.

     It was out of the way and the perfect place…[Read more]

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