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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
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Today is the last day I will beat myself up over this.
It’s the last day I’ll say sorry for hurting you, as if I haven’t said sorry a million times already.
It’s the last time I’ll try to make amends for something you will never forgive me for.
It’s the last time I’ll go to bed and wonder how di…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Positivity in the forum Blogs 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Jill, it’s so good to hear from you again, in spite of what you’ve been, and are, going through.
I think any response that isn’t on a level with your own experience of positivity is likely to sound trivial, or at least less significant. But it is a fascinating topic. It’s often said that realists have a less positive expectation of outcome, but…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Two fabulous stories and still half of the month to try your hand. What luck!
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RichardB replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 1 year ago
You’re not actually the person I was referring to when I said I knew I was preaching to the converted. Quite often people reply to these Literary Byways blogs saying they’re going to read the book concerned on my recommendation, but this is the first time I’ve had feedback on that, and I’m delighted that you share my enthusiasm for Pavane.
As for…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 1 year ago
It was, and still is, a very good blog indeed. I remember it well, and on the strength of your recommendation I bought Pavane. It is a unique book, with an extraordinary atmosphere. Since reading it I’ve returned many times to check on parts and to reread. It really is remarkable that it isn’t better known. It’s somewhat depressing that a book so…[Read more]
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RichardB started the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 1 year ago
It has occurred to me that this occasional series is incomplete without the piece that started it all off, which was posted back in the old days on the Word Cloud. Some may remember it; some may not. And in one case I know I’m preaching to the converted…
In 1983, on a commission from a Japanese publisher, the novelist and critic Anthony (A…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Congratulations, Ath. Delightfully creative tale!
Thanks to Janette for the prompt and to Sandra, Libby and Terrie for a selection of wonderful stories x -
Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Congratulations, Ath, for your interpretation with a twist and well done Sandra, Sea and Libby as well.
I enjoyed everyone’s entries.
Its always interesting to see others take on a challenge prompt.
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Athelstone started the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
It’s been on my mind that during this month I will begin the last year of my sixth decade. The topic this month is the last of something. So, whatever that suggests to you, good, bad, indifferent, in a maximum of 500 words.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
When I say that I seriously didn’t think I’d win – I mean it. There was a fistful of really great entries. Thanks to Janette for the prompt and to my co-entrants for some great entertainment.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
May
The cactus on the table, out there on the decking, it’s gone mad. Look there are four new paddle things growing off it. Mr Hoskins from next door says they’re called “cladodes”. He should know, seeing as he’s a botanist or something at the college. It’s a modified stem, apparently, which serves the function of a leaf. He came over for a cup o…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Renewal Dance
Below a patchy canopy of leaves, sunlight falls in dusted shafts of light, highlighting small tufts of fluffy-winged seeds, spiralling and soaring in the breeze and somewhere, within the cool, dark, caverns of under-earth, the chime of rock, root and soil begins its soft, ceaseless, song of renewal.
Stirred from slumber beneath the…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Princes Street, Edinburgh, in early May. The morning is bright, the sky opaque with a promise of blue, and there’s enough chill in the air to warrant the cardigan I left on the back of the chair in the kitchen. I’m walking on the sunny side of the street – the side across from the gardens – with measured, purposeful steps as I head to a train…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
Congratulations, J! Well deserved ☺️
Thanks to Libby for challenging my poor sluggish brain cells with an extraordinary prompt, and to Sandra for an excellent read.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh BOTHER! So sorry, Libby. I confess I found the prompt a little tricky, but I was getting the start of an idea. Then I got myself involved with something and forgot all about it.
Well done to all three entrants, especially Janette. I liked the stories very much.
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Kate replied to the topic New novel from Kate Machon! in the forum Podium 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks, Sea! 😃
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Seagreen replied to the topic New novel from Kate Machon! in the forum Podium 1 year, 1 month ago
Ooh! Congratulations! 😀
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
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Preheat the oven to 220 degrees C.
Scrub the parsnips thoroughly, top and tail, then cut in half lengthways.
It’s Mum’s old recipe. I’ve never used it before, but George’s parents are coming for dinner and his dad is especially fond of roast parsnips, apparently. Or so George would have me believe. Honestly? I think i…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic New novel from Kate Machon! in the forum Podium 1 year, 2 months ago
Thanks, Ath – as I’m sure you remember, they came to life in a short story in one of you winter writing challenges. Now I’m about to start writing book 3.
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Athelstone replied to the topic New novel from Kate Machon! in the forum Podium 1 year, 2 months ago
Really well deserved. I love the fact that you carried the two MCs along for ages and are reaping the rewards!
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