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Raine replied to the topic Monthly comp: Feb 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
Mutated the quote, I know. Sorry. In my defence it didn’t say the quote had to be exact. Plus, I know ‘ghosting’ isn’t about ghosts, but I like ghosts, and am too old to write about ‘ghosting’! ๐
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Raine posted an update 7 years, 1 month ago
Snuck in under the wire for the April (extended) monthly comp. ๐
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Raine replied to the topic Monthly comp: Feb 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
Aconite and Forget-me-not.
(347 words)To you who Iโve haunted, will you listen? I have whispered stories in your ear and did you hear them? They were both your stories and mine, your sins and yes, mine too, and when I paid for both of us, you thought yourself free. So I came, did I not, to remind you. I have been the footfalls behind you in t…[Read more]
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John S Alty replied to the topic 'The Five': A Dissenting Voice in the forum Blogs 7 years, 1 month ago
The same sort of appalling victim-blaming appears to have been prevalent in the much more recent Yorkshire Ripper enquiry. According to a recent documentary, the police assumed the ripper, Sutcliffe, was punishing prostitutes when, in fact, he was preying on their vulnerability. At one point they failed to “credit” a victim to him because she…[Read more]
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Raine posted an update 7 years, 1 month ago
Today is finish transcribing edits day, and tmrw is write monthly comp day. Cat disagrees on all of these points.
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Raine replied to the topic 'The Five': A Dissenting Voice in the forum Blogs 7 years, 1 month ago
Interesting, Richard. I’d heard some of the reviews/hype/chat about the book, and liked the idea of presenting the women as three dimensional people – something other than just another dead whore. By the the sounds of it though, Rubenhold equates the women sleeping alone with them being absolved of any contributing blame for what happened to them,…[Read more]
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Raine posted an update 7 years, 1 month ago
Hullo. Back from easter (we don’t do easter monday in Scotland, no idea why. Something to do with the English stealing it off us, probably). I have done NO writing and NO editing over the hol, which means I have LOTS to do now. Gah. Tea.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Monthly comp: Feb 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 2 months ago
Nice one, Libby.
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Raine posted an update 7 years, 2 months ago
In support of the monthly/bimonthly comp – one of mine from ?November? has just been accepted for (paid) publication. ๐
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John S Alty replied to the topic A Bad Job: Thirsk, 1892 in the forum Blogs 7 years, 2 months ago
Another hugely entertaining tale of the rails, and very informative too. Thanks Richard.
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John S Alty posted an update 7 years, 2 months ago
I sense there is very little interest in the monthly, (or two monthly or three monthly competition), so perhaps we should just bag the whole thing. Put Jonathan out of his misery. It’s becoming embarrassing.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Monthly comp: Feb 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 2 months ago
OK, I’ll go first:
Sunday morning
A late breakfast, tea and toast, the paper folded at the cryptic crossword. 22 down, Kathmandu hippie hospital, 9 letters. Michael scratched his head with the pen. Just an average Sunday.
The doorbell rang, startling him. Nobody called on Sunday. Nobody called on any other day for that matter, not since heโd p…[Read more] -
Raine posted an update 7 years, 2 months ago
Anyone going to @bric‘s launch tomorrow – I’ll see you there!! ๐ ๐
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Wish I was, but no. Have a wonderful time!
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I’m going – it’s just up the road from me. See you there!
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I chickened out of going on my own. Have a great time!
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Had planned to but going to the Edinburgh one instead.
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Wish I was but still can’t manage long journies ๐ I’ll be there in spirit.
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Can report – it was a great night. Books AND cake, and fellow writers.
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Colour me jealous! I’m sure it was brilliant.
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Congratulations, Fiona!!
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 2 months ago
Just checked with Steve and apparently an 18 year old is limited to bikes of no more than 125 cc – nippy enough to weave through London traffic, but max speed of ~60mph (and not as nippy as the twist’n’go scooters beloved by street thieves) Once he’s 19 and had has 2 years experience he can go larger.
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 2 months ago
Steve is out – on his BSA B33 – today, I’ll ask him when he returns.
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 2 months ago
Kate, it also crossed my mind, on first reading, that Alex would’ve referred to his bike by make: ‘his Ducati 500 Hornet’ (or something – I made that up). If you want some better info than I have about modern bikes I can find out, but need to know how old he is – there might be rules about what cc a bike for what age.
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Sandra posted an update 7 years, 2 months ago
Intriguing and likely valuable exercise on Andrew Wille’s blog which I’m determined to have a go at sometime this month: http://wille.org/blog/2019/03/29/heart-words-vs-head-words-guest-writing-experiment-no-73-from-zoe-gilbert/
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Thanks Sandra, thatโs really interesting. Latin root strikes me as the language when someoneโs trying too hard, and it has the opposite effect.
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Oh that’s interesting, Sandra. I went to Andrew’s ‘Crafting Your Prose’ masterclass yesterday, and that was one of the topics we covered.
I can thoroughly recommend: https://www.wordsaway.info
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 2 months ago
Then ‘mate’ worked, don’t fret – the trouble with reading to critique is that one tries too hard and focuses on unnecessaries.
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Knicks replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 2 months ago
I really like Squidge’s suggestion of a noncompetitive writing prompt.The previous format of having it be a comp to judge was slightly off-putting, for me anyway, because of the burden of that responsibility alone. I don’t have a lot of time to show up and chime in, so the idea of judging a comp was a daunting one for me. Now to show up and…[Read more]
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