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  • Daedalus posted an update 8 years ago

    This is just to say

    I have finished
    The Draft
    I was working on since 2014

    And which you
    Probably thought
    I’d never finish

    Forgive me. It was indulgent
    All 178 thousand
    Words of it

  • RichardB posted an update 8 years ago

    Call me weird if you will, but I do love picking a passage apart and putting it back together again, better than before. So satisfying.

    • That’s not weird, Richard. I didn’t think I could be the only one who preferred working with an existing draft to creating a new one

      • Two different types of adventure, I think. I enjoy both but creating a new draft can be like swimming in very rough seas.

        • Definitely. Editing is a craft. Writinf a first draft is an extreme sport

          • Raine replied 8 years ago

            I like that analogy. If it’s skiing, then I am currently uphill xcountry skiing, stuck in those parallel ruts and not sure whether they are heading in the right direction…

  • Thank you Daeds, I really appreciate it.

    I’ve found your nonfic book on the Amberley publishing site and will order a copy forthwith! It’s a while since I read a pilot biog or autobiog and am looking forward to learning about Duncan Menzies.

  • Yay! Such a beautiful and chilling story…. well done!!

  • Thea replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years ago

    Congratulations, Elle! A really poignant story!

  • Elle replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years ago

    My flash “Little Bird” has been published in Reflex Fiction today https://www.reflexfiction.com/little-bird-flash-fiction-by-laure-van-rensburg/

  • Elle replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Glad it is useful.

    The workshop was great and organised by Word Factory. I highly recommend them if you’re in London.

    After the workshop, some of us stayed behind to discuss what we learned and then after that they have a short story club where everybody read a designated story beforehand and then we spent an hour discussing it. The story this…[Read more]

  • Well done, Daeds. Really impressive! I hope it leads to more programmes.

  • Thea replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    That sounds an interesting workshop, Elle.

    I think that treating ‘place’ as a character in its own right can add an extra dimension to a piece of writing, so that’s a handy checklist to follow. Thanks for sharing.

  • Good to know! Coffman starters are great. Basically using a shotgun cartridge to start an engine, minus the lead shot of course. I don’t just do naval aviation btw, my last nonfic was a biography of a RAF bomber pilot, flying instructor and test pilot before and during WW2. Any technical queries, feel free to ask

  • Daedalus posted an update 8 years ago

    Woohoo! Just got a rejection in six minutes. Six minutes! Beat that if you can

    • Raine replied 8 years ago

      That’s impressive going. I think my best offer is same day. Will try harder…

  • Raine replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Thanks Elle. These are good prompts. I’m very into settings, which I think comes from my previous life as a conservation ecologist – working in some amazing wild places. So I’ve always got to have a strong sense of the natural world that my story takes place in – weather, plants, animals, noises, tides, rock types … yeah maybe I go too far, but…[Read more]

  • Kate replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Thanks Elle. Setting is something I usually skim over, so I will try applying this and see what happens!

  • Libby replied to the topic What shape are your ideas? in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Sounds like you might be doing spider diagrams, Philippa – more poshly called mind mapping I think, but ‘mind mapping’ sounds too abstract for me. Anyhow, I find the technique very helpful. Completely agree with the two ‘touch points’. I need somewhere to head for – that itself is the basis of an idea. Also need to know the main theme before I…[Read more]

  • That’s really kind of you Daeds. I’m OK at the moment but there could well be something as I still do bits of research as I draft. I promise not to bombard you. My story deals with flying before and during WW2 but I admit I’ve kept naval aviation at arm’s length as something I don’t need to include, at least not in any detail.

    You’ve already…[Read more]

  • Raine posted an update 8 years ago

    Happy Monday, Denizens. It’s a dreich one up here, so please send all the tea.

    • Libby replied 8 years ago

      Tea and biscuits on their way 🙂 Patchy sun here in southern England.

      • Raine replied 8 years ago

        Thank-you for the tea! If you could see your way to sending a patch or two of that sun north, that would be grand!!

  • Philippa East replied to the topic What shape are your ideas? in the forum Blogs 8 years ago

    Just seen this post…

    I too am floundering about in the “half-idea” realms…. I think I usually need two sort of “touch points”: an inciting incident of some kind, but then another event of some kind to head towards in the narrative. At the moment, I sort of just have my inciting incident and not another “way point”. Grrr.

    These days, I find…[Read more]

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