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John S Alty replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Tony, good points, noted.
Thanks, Elle. I guess my spell checker doesn’t speak French! Good points. I think I have a tendency to over-explain or I would have ended it at “He was my first”. Need to trust the reader more. The telly paragraph is a bit of a cop out – I’ll need to rewrite it.I can’t remember what the original prompt was, but I…[Read more]
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John S Alty started the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Here’s a nasty little story I have been playing around with for fun. Have at it, critics!
Memories
Two tall men wearing overcoats followed the nurse down the corridor towards Room 19.
“Florence can be a bit slow some days but most of the time she’s surprisingly bright. She was quite perky earlier so she should be able to answer your que…[Read more] -
John S Alty replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Hi Daeds,
Yes, if you look under fiction at acrossthemargin.com and at https://www.ellipsiszine.com you should find them. A couple of super stories from @Elle also. -
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Hi Stevie, glad you cpuld make it
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Stevie replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 8 years, 1 month ago
Phew! Managed to clamber aboard, soaking and dripping. Hi to all and thanks to the folks who nailed this site together.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Twitter in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years, 1 month ago
I’m following. Spread the word!
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John S Alty replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
I’ve had a couple of pieces accepted recently, in EllipsesZine and Across the Margin. Reflex Fiction have also published two pieces.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Well done L. I keep seeing your work popping up at various magazines and websites – always good.
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Hi John 🙂
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Hi Jules!
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Great to see you John
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You too, Daeds
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JaneShuff replied to the topic A Brief History of York Festivals in the forum Blogs 8 years, 1 month ago
I wish I was going to be there in person @skylark but I will be cheering you on from London. Enjoy it!
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Oh Congratulations Philippa. That’s great news!
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