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  • Raine replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Yay for plots resolving themselves @alanr! Always a good feeling. 🙂

    HOw’re other NaNoers doing? I’m on 36k, struggling a bit with days being taken up with RL, but am hoping to make it early next week – before a family invasion!

  • Raine replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Fever Dream by Samanta Scweblin is a novella too – although I don’t know the wordcount – and it got shortlisted for the Booker!! I wasn’t her debut in Spain, but I think it was her first translated book.

    I think there is more scope for novellas with the smaller presses, but yeah, I think a new writer would find it nigh on impossible to get…[Read more]

  • RichardB posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago

    Editing: they say cut cut cut, don’t they? Hmm. I don’t work like that. When I finished the first draft of my ghost story six (My God!) years ago it was only 47,000 words long. When I submitted it two years later it was 74,000 words. Now its creeping up to 80,000. Mind you, there’s some rather drastic cutting needed near the end.

    • I think it works like that for some, doesn’t it? Writing the bare bones first and then fleshing out. (I’ve always hated the term ‘fleshing out’ – too many dissection classes and JEkyll and Hyde stories!)

      I seem to always end up at roughly the same word count – cutting a lot and feeling all pleased with myself, then realising I need whole new scenes…

  • Libby replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    I’d guess probably not, Alan! Maybe publishing novellas is something to look forward to once one’s career is established 🙂 Though as they seem mostly to be written by big names such as Hill and Ian McEwan, you probably have to be very established.

  • Bella posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago

    Saw a post on Facebook that could easily apply to one’s writing (mine, anyway).

    “Don’t cling to a mistake just because you spent a long time making it.”

    • That’s wise advice, Bella. I guess that’s the writerly version of the outfit that has never been worn but remains in the wardrobe because it was expensive. Alas, I’m guilty on both counts!

  • Philippa East replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Time to make yourself an outline?
    Nice work though on the 16k!!!

  • Giselle replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Hello all!
    I thought about doing NaNoWriMo but I don’t have time to write a sentence these days, let alone 50k!
    That being said, I need some motivation so I’d love to do a Denizen’s SloMoWriMo – sounds like perfect motivation, and what great people to do it with!

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    Yes. Great title. Hope the creative/productive jag lasts.

  • Raine replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago

    That’s great, @alanr! Hope the flow keeps going. I am in the process of hauling myself over my 25k wall. Getting there, but oof.

  • Well done @elle. Such a sad little piece, and the bird image is perfect.

  • Daedalus posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago

    This is just to say

    I have finished
    The Draft
    I was working on since 2014

    And which you
    Probably thought
    I’d never finish

    Forgive me. It was indulgent
    All 178 thousand
    Words of it

  • RichardB posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago

    Call me weird if you will, but I do love picking a passage apart and putting it back together again, better than before. So satisfying.

    • That’s not weird, Richard. I didn’t think I could be the only one who preferred working with an existing draft to creating a new one

      • Two different types of adventure, I think. I enjoy both but creating a new draft can be like swimming in very rough seas.

        • Definitely. Editing is a craft. Writinf a first draft is an extreme sport

          • I like that analogy. If it’s skiing, then I am currently uphill xcountry skiing, stuck in those parallel ruts and not sure whether they are heading in the right direction…

  • Thank you Daeds, I really appreciate it.

    I’ve found your nonfic book on the Amberley publishing site and will order a copy forthwith! It’s a while since I read a pilot biog or autobiog and am looking forward to learning about Duncan Menzies.

  • Yay! Such a beautiful and chilling story…. well done!!

  • Good to know! Coffman starters are great. Basically using a shotgun cartridge to start an engine, minus the lead shot of course. I don’t just do naval aviation btw, my last nonfic was a biography of a RAF bomber pilot, flying instructor and test pilot before and during WW2. Any technical queries, feel free to ask

  • Daedalus posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago

    Woohoo! Just got a rejection in six minutes. Six minutes! Beat that if you can

  • Raine replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 7 years, 8 months ago

    Thanks Elle. These are good prompts. I’m very into settings, which I think comes from my previous life as a conservation ecologist – working in some amazing wild places. So I’ve always got to have a strong sense of the natural world that my story takes place in – weather, plants, animals, noises, tides, rock types … yeah maybe I go too far, but…[Read more]

  • Libby replied to the topic What shape are your ideas? in the forum Blogs 7 years, 8 months ago

    Sounds like you might be doing spider diagrams, Philippa – more poshly called mind mapping I think, but ‘mind mapping’ sounds too abstract for me. Anyhow, I find the technique very helpful. Completely agree with the two ‘touch points’. I need somewhere to head for – that itself is the basis of an idea. Also need to know the main theme before I…[Read more]

  • That’s really kind of you Daeds. I’m OK at the moment but there could well be something as I still do bits of research as I draft. I promise not to bombard you. My story deals with flying before and during WW2 but I admit I’ve kept naval aviation at arm’s length as something I don’t need to include, at least not in any detail.

    You’ve already…[Read more]

  • Raine posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago

    Happy Monday, Denizens. It’s a dreich one up here, so please send all the tea.

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