Athelstone

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    The book was finished, the story told. But more importantly, the truth laid bare. Every pocket dimension of past trauma exorcised. Every chapter of his life stamped adult, checked as complete. Every fragment of what it meant to be human sorted and struck through.

    Now was a new time. A beginning time. Time to rejoin the…[Read more]

  • Fiona posted an update 11 months ago

    Hello! I think it’s years since I last dropped in but in switching computers I rediscovered this page. So glad to see some familiar faces and competitions going strong. Fiona (SE 2013)

  • This month I’ve gone for an essay, or at any rate not a story.

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    Outside my window there’s the small garden and then a field, where a tractor drags a harrow. The harrow’s arms are open and horizontal. Metal discs hang below them, making contact with the ground, and I hear the discs rattling along the soil and bouncing over flints. The…[Read more]

  • Only two entries, as Athelstone rightly points out, but both were a joy insofar as they echoed some of my experiences.  Like Jill, Steve and I were but 16 and eighteen – me young enough to be banned from going on the back of his motorbike, but after four years of ‘going steady’, when  Steve asked my Dad for,  permission  to marry me his response…[Read more]

  • Only two entries, as Athelstone rightly points out, but both were a joy insofar as they echoed some of my experiences.  Like Jill, Steve and I were but sixteen and eighteen – me young enough to be banned from going on the back of his motorbike, but after four years of ‘going steady’, when  Steve asked my Dad for,  permission  to marry me his respo…[Read more]

  • Aargh – busy weekend filled with grandchildren visits and attempts to add names to a 1905 photo of a Christmas celebration family history question. I’ll get to reading and deciding ASAP.

  • RichardB replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 12 months ago

    I have little nostalgia for the pubs of my earlier days, mainly because the pubs in Sutton, where I spent most of my life, were, and are, a pretty sorry lot. But there is one pub I remember with a certain affection.

    Watling Street, which becomes the Edgware Road, that arterial road that runs in a straight line through North-West London, starts…[Read more]

  • @ Libby: Sorry not be reading an entry from you, but fully sympathise with lack of time.

  • Apologies in advance, Sandra. I won’t be doing a story this month. I do enjoy these poetry prompts but a combination of holidays and life admin is swallowing the time.

  • RichardB replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 12 months ago

    Mention of plain-looking pubs reminds me of another pub with a heart-warming story, the Hope in Carshalton, near where I used to live and even nearer to where I grew up. In appearance a nondescript 1930s local, it was going to close down until a bunch of its customers got together and bought the lease, and then a few years later the pub outright.…[Read more]

  • Sandra posted an update 1 year ago

    Ten days left to write 500 words about a first time meeting with in-laws (and follow a link to a brilliantly vivid account of Liz Lochead’s experience)

  • RichardB replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 1 year ago

    Actually there was a bit of a wobbly phase on the ale front for the first year or two of the new regime, while Nils, who is not himself a real ale drinker, was finding out by trial and error what would sell. There was a heavy emphasis on those light golden bitters that are fashionable these days, but are not much to my taste (unless it’s hot…[Read more]

  • RichardB started the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 1 year ago

    I do seem to have this habit of writing about disasters, so I thought it would make a nice change to write about something more cheerful. Something that is very much not a disaster.

    Let me tell you about our local pub. Well, not literally, because there are a couple of pubs nearer our house, but it’s the one we go to, and has our loyalty.

    The…[Read more]

  • The Woman Whose Nose Pointed North

    I had already met my mother-in-law, years earlier, not that I could have known. We had moved onto a still-being-built estate, the house across from ours taken by a large family. So many children were a draw for a five-year-old girl and her brother.

    The children, I remember, seemed friendly. Not so the…[Read more]

  • As usual, I began my search for inspiration by looking through my collection of charity shop-acquired poetry books, although ‘Intimate expanses’, a collection of Scottish poems published 1978-2002, in which I found Liz Lockhead’s  ‘My Rival’s house’ was a first purchase from Carcanet. It details a vivid account of a first meeting with  a future…[Read more]

  • Thank you, Sea, for the challenge and for the kind words. Congratulations, Sandra, your words clearly came from the heart and made you a worthy winner.

  • Have to say I am astonished to be chosen, Sea – and grateful, despite feeling that I fell far short of ‘enthralling’ in comparison to those far more apt which were posted, and made impressive reading. Also, following what has been something of a let-down day, this was a welcome cheering, so thank you for that.  I’ll aim to post August’s…[Read more]

    • Jill replied 1 year ago

      I have posted my congratulations and comments and not sure why they are not showing here! Perhaps under Seagreen’s link? This site confuses me at times. Anyhow, Congratulations once more.

  • Thank you for indulging my ‘tearful’ requirement and apologies again for being so late with the results.

    @Jill – Good to see you back, and thank you for diving back into the monthly comp with your tale of Lucia. I confess to knowing nothing about Vestal Virgins, but your entry has definitely piqued my curiosity and I’m sure there’s a much larger…[Read more]

    • Jill replied 1 year ago

      Congratulations, Sandra and fellow entrants. All excellent stories which touched me and brought tears to my eyes. Sandra’s image resonated with my own recent experience and sadness as my husband had to go home alone for nine days, tired and worried when I was in hospital. I chose not to write a personal story as enough personal emotions w…[Read more]

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