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Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 5 months ago
Apologies to Denizens who are not members of the group “A Different Time”. Any member who is considering an entry to the challenge, or who may have forgotten about it, please note that we close for submissions on Sunday 2 February at 22:00 UK time. Thank you.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 5 months ago
I’ll come back tomorrow
I’ll come back tomorrow to look at the clear space between the Co-op and the Santander Bank. The fresh morning sun will light the glistening concrete and the unexpected birds taking baths in puddles where carpets have been carried off. Men in hard hats and hi-vis vests will bundle drills about and smoke their cigarettes a…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh Sea, cleverly written, this really tugs at a range of emotions: Well, it did mine.
I hope ,when I walk into the dawn, someone does this for me .
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John T posted an update 1 year, 5 months ago
I’ve finished my story for the yearly challenge, but I’m lingering before I press the button. One more read-through tomorrow, I think. In other news, I’m fulfilling a long-held ambition and having a retreat at Gladstone’s Library in North Wales soon, to finish the first draft of Apples in the Dark book three.
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Athelstone replied to the topic The latest in vanity publishing in the forum Marketplace 1 year, 5 months ago
I asked it about limits and it recommended breaking text into chunks, so I divided the input into blocks of chapters, but as I was about to do the final block I hit an error, which I think was the limit of my free access: there was a message about that soon afterwards. Annoyingly inconclusive! Some chapters were summarised in full, others were…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The latest in vanity publishing in the forum Marketplace 1 year, 5 months ago
I tried a 500 word synopsis. It was curiously like a “bad” synopsis that an inexperienced writer might try, too much detail at the outset and then broad generalisations for the middle and end. It always concludes by asking whether you want any refinements, so I asked for more detail about the conclusion and it invented a character and several plot…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 5 months ago
ODDS AND ENDINGS IN MY LIFE, INCLUDING THE STICKY ONES. .
For me the phrase ‘the end’ invokes a variety of feelings.
Some, such as the end of a candle or bit of soap are not memorable. Those endings flash out of existence in a blink of thoughtlessness, never to be recalled again.
However, dancing along the polar opposite to that, there are…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The latest in vanity publishing in the forum Marketplace 1 year, 5 months ago
As we are in imminent peril of being swamped with things-AI if Mr Starmer and our present government are to be believed, I thought I’d bite the bullet and give ChatGPT a whirl. As an experiment, I thought I’d try for a summary of my WIP. Since that’s something I will have to wrestle with when I come to submit, I wondered whether it might be…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 5 months ago
Regrettably late to this – and non-participant – but what a joy to catch up with those that did make the effort- thank you @ Richard and @Terrie
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 6 months ago
My offering was much the same Richard.
I thought about all the things that cause me difficulty – didn’t know how to start writing about it and ended up making myself smile with a bit of fun.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh Lord. Two entries. Both very different from what I expected. Not that I expected anything in particular, but I know what I mean. Both excellent. Richard’s engrossed me, as the protagonist was engrossed in the model. Terrie’s made me laugh out loud. There’s no winner or loser here, because it was a virtual toss of the coin. Richard, choose us a…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 6 months ago
<p style=”text-align: center;”>DEGREES OF DIFFICULTY IN MY LIFE</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>(when it gets difficult – make it rhyme )</p>
I find it difficult to hide the truth, or say things that are untrue.I can’t fit inside a kayak, or paddle a canoe.
I can’t crochet anything or mend my pushbike brake
and bouncing on a tramp…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
Anybody thinking of entering the last Monthly Competition of 2024? Still plenty of time for a few hundred words, but it’s getting closer.
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Athelstone started the topic One Christmas in the forum Coffee Shop 1 year, 6 months ago
Back on the WordCloud I started a group called Advent for Christmas-related posts. It was slightly popular, but back then we had an active wall and plenty of other groups, so it never flew especially high.
I posted a short children’s story. It needs a good edit that I might give it one day, but i think it’s quite fun, so if you’re in need of some…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Happy Christmas in the forum Coffee Shop 1 year, 6 months ago
And many thanks to you, Libby, and to the other happy few who make this place worth keeping. A very happy Christmas to us all.
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Athelstone started the topic Monthly Competition – December 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 7 months ago
I did the first one of the year. Here’s the last. I’ve been fitting a kitchen. Plumbing, carpentry, stuff to a standard I’ve never managed before. Came close to giving up once or twice.
Up to 500 words on doing something really difficult.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition- November 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks Seagreen. Glad you laughed. Well, Terrie, there’s a coincidence. I’ve barely been able to write for the last month having been fitting our new kitchen. Completely new from top to bottom including having to rebuild joists under the floor and fit a kitchen to an accuracy of 1mm per metre. As I’ve never done anything to that accuracy except by…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly competition- November 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 7 months ago
I popped in a few times but sorry, didn’t managed to post anything for the monthly comp . I’ve been really busy sorting and emptying the kitchen as sparkly new units, sink and other gizmos are being fitted in the new year. the old one is over 20 years old and it’s turned into a major refit having to move pipes, wiring and other thin…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition- November 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 7 months ago
Sea, I well remember, a couple of years ago admiring your shorter haircut when you picked me up at Markinch station, Promise I wasn’t thinking of the competition we might meet at Craigievar! I did hope to do something more inspired for this great prompt, but ran out of mental space, so well done Ath.
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Athelstone replied to the topic The latest in vanity publishing in the forum Marketplace 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m not surprised by this. For some time there have been AI editing features available with Prowritingaid, Grammarly and so on. I have the former, and although I seldom use the AI features, some of which are behind an additional paywall, I have given them a spin in the past. What you get from one of the reports does appear to be a reasonably…[Read more]
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