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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition – August 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years ago
Sunshine and Shadow (219 words inc. title)
In a yellow rectangle, in the black façade of a house, a woman is laying a table. Her movements are deft and economicalâŚ
Wait.
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Thatâs not right.
For a start, that rectangle isnât yellow; itâs liquid gold. Or maybe itâs a garden of primroses in spring. No. Itâs even more than that. Itâs mo…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 3 years ago
The clues to his, and their, lack of recognition are all there, I think. There’s some folk in it, some protest, a lot of the jolly sound of the 60s (cf the Beatles, Bonzo Dog Band, etc), but essentially it’s quiet, undemonstrative, intelligent music. Sometimes serious, sometimes funny, often both. It’s the sort of music that you want to listen…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh, by the way. Coming soon to a website near you: Whodunnit? A six-month(ish) challenge and opportunity for fun.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 3 years, 1 month ago
I have had a good listen. I have a feeling he’s somebody to hear live. Perhaps we’ll meet up at his next gig – if he has one.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 3 years, 1 month ago
She seems pretty English to me – although her mother is French and her father’s Maltese. But yes, it’s the French connection that hooked me on Renaud.
I don’t know, but put the speculation aside. Pete Atkin has a smooth confident voice and he holds a note very well. And that’s true right from the first album to the last. The songs hold your…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Influences in the forum Blogs 3 years, 1 month ago
The only writer who I enjoy and where I can see similarities in style with my own, is Kurt Vonnegut. That’s not to say we write in similar ways. Vonnegut was a master of prose and I’m not drawing a comparison. However, he made an effort to keep his writing plain and clear and advised others to do the same. Certainly there are subtleties in…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 3 years, 1 month ago
Fabulous blog, Richard. Chanson is so little known outside of France. People think they know it because they’ve heard a recording of Non, je ne regrette rien or maybe they know that Seasons in the Sun is a translation (sort of) of a Jacques Brel number. It’s hugely popular in France. Travel to any town and go out and about on market-day. Every…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 1 month ago
Brutal
Graham was beside himself. Furious, speechless, incandescent with rage. They had demolished the ancient well in his garden, thrown the centuries old stonework down inside, and constructed a former which showed their intention to pour footings a full twenty metres from where the summerhouse should be. He leaned forward and peered down. All…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
And we’re there. Thank you to all the generous donors. We’re here for another year!
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Athelstone posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
One More Year!
Probably daft, bearing in mind we have maybe 10 to 15 members who are even close to regular, and perhaps half a dozen who are. I need to raise about ÂŁ150 this month to keep the site going. It will keep going; it’s just a case of finding as much as I can. SO… please see the donations group for details. Simple as that. -
Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 1 month ago
Hi Janette – as discussed, it’s gone. Feel free to post again when ready.
Ath.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 2 months ago
I knew from the minute I started reading these that judging would be a tricky businessâŚ
Thanks all for entering! I love that you each took a perfectly mundane experience â like sitting in traffic â and gave me a fabulous peek into the headspace of your characters.
Ath, straight in there with your character reference of the man in the siler GT. T…[Read more]
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Thank you, Sea, for such a good challenge. Congratulations @Libby – a worthy win.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 2 months ago
What is this? I turn my back for TWO days and Iâm inundated!! ????
Please bear with me. Worked a fifteen hour shift today (with the same tomorrow). I promise to come back with a winner by Monday at the absolute latest x
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 2 months ago
Car
Look at that bloke. Arm out of the window, cigarette in hand. Marks and Sparks polo shirt that his wife bought him. Revving the engine every five seconds; counting down the time until death. And he got the silver car, the GT model. He chose that. He calls it âmy carâ. But if anybody asks, âWe chose it. Me and my lady.â
How old do you reckon?…[Read more]
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Seagreen started the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 3 months ago
Youâre sitting in traffic. Tell me about the car and the person (people) in the car next to you.
400 words
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 3 months ago
Pleasantly surprised by this, especially given the company ☺️
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 3 months ago
Wow! They were all classy little pieces of writing. Seagreen, I really enjoyed that. Well done.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 3 months ago
The Unmarked Letter
Itâs a circular, sitting there on the mat. Or is it? It doesnât look like the sort of envelope they use. And they usually say To the Householder or something like that. When Arthur was alive, heâd say, âThatâs me. The householder,â as though I didnât count. This one has nothing on it.
Right, thatâs Edith at the door. Iâd b…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – May 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 3 months ago
UNTITLEDÂ (321 words)
On Thursday, I wrote a letter. Not to send, you understand, since it wasnât really to someone, and not to keep either, because once I had written it, and re-read it in that way that people do when they are shocked by their candour, I felt embarrassed by it. Embarrassed by the uncontrolled rage and disappointment that I had…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Motor Racing's Blackest Day: Le Mans, 1955 in the forum Blogs 3 years, 3 months ago
Quite awful accident, Richard. I sought out some of the video and still-images after reading your blog, and I have to say that Hawthorn does look, physically, like the villain of the piece. Whether he was the actual villain or not, his face relaxes into a rather smug expression that does him no favours. I was reminded of the comedian Rob Beckett,…[Read more]
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