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  • I think you’re right.

    Of course, AI writing is effectively a sampling of other authors’ work, albeit with some sophisticated algorithms that hide the truth away. An author may say that they are using AI to produce something original, but AI simply won’t work with just small samples such as from one author. It needs a “large language model” as…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted an update 1 year ago

    OK, I just pushed through a batch of updates on the Den. I had already tested them on the Den’s testing site and they seemed to be fine. If anybody finds something not working please let me know. Thanks.

  • Athelstone posted an update 1 year ago

    Welcome to a new member Silver. Some may remember her as Catasshe back in the Wordcloud days

    • As in CAS Short Story Competition? Obviously I’m going to welcome you, Silver.

      • Silver replied 1 year ago

        That’s me Richard, nice to meet you! How’s the writing going?

        • Kate replied 1 year ago

          Hello my old SE buddy! Lovely to see you here.

          • Silver replied 1 year ago

            Hello Kate! How are you doing? The writing is flourishing I see!

            • Kate replied 1 year ago

              Having fun writing and publishing. The marketing… less so. But a necessity!

        • Actually we have met virtually before. If you haven’t made the connection, my story came second in that competition, and we had a brief exchange of e-mails afterwards. Nice to see you here.
          After two novels were greeted with deafening apathy by the trade, I decided that at my time of life I had better things to do than putting myself through the…[Read more]

          • Silver replied 1 year ago

            Hi Richard, oh yes, I wasn’t clear in my message but I did remember you from our email exchange – clicked it was you by reading the posts in the Podium section on here where you were posting about the competition. Still remember your story well – a fantastic one. I’m sorry to hear you’ve given up ‘serious’ writing. I empathize as I had a similar…[Read more]

    • Welcome back, CAS. Great another Cloudie has found their way here.

      • Silver replied 1 year ago

        Thank you Janette! Yes, if only all the Cloudies would come! Great this is still going though.

    • Libby replied 1 year ago

      Hi CAS/Silver, good to hear from you again!

  • Athelstone posted an update 1 year ago

    Sometimes when life is busy, important occasions are overlooked.
    It’s that time again. In fact, it is way past that time, so I’d better get this party started. There’s a new group in town. Head on over to “September Song” for details of the new Short Story Challenge.
    All are welcome.

  • I’m late with the congratulations – life has been frantic for a few days! Thanks so much for the prompt, @jillsted. A thoughtful piece from @libby is a more-than-worthy winner. And well done to @knickylaurelle for a splendidly acute story.

  • The Artist of Wexton

    A gust of icy wind blew across the beach, and I turned to one side and pulled my coat tighter. Doing so, I realised that something was wrong, but I wasn’t quite sure what. An elderly woman stood about fifty yards to the west looking out to sea. There was something almost mournful about her, and, against my usual inclination I…[Read more]

  • Here I am, racked with guilt. I did sit down a couple of times to write an entry, but it just wouldn’t come. I had an idea yesterday that I liked, and it may end up as a scene in the WIP, but I had so much going on I couldn’t manage it. Apologies, it’s a fascinating idea and I should have done something. However, you have two very good entries to…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 1 year, 1 month ago

    Pretty much, these days.

    Most of the pubs I’ve loved are long closed now. The Railway Hotel in Newbury where I first tasted Morland bitter at the grand old age of 15 (just). At 12p per pint even I could afford it. Then there was the Cambridge in Cambridge Circus. To be fair, the beer was dreadful – so bad that I drank bottled lager mainly – but…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 1 year, 2 months ago

    Sounds glorious.

    Just had a short break in France where nearly all the draft beer is lager style, with the exception of a few unpleasantly-sweet dark beers. To be fair, some of the lighter ones are drinkable, especially if it’s a hot day – which it usually is.

    All this talk of real ale reminds me of that magical moment when you enter a…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic Not a Disaster Story in the forum Blogs 1 year, 2 months ago

    Oh for a decent pub nearby. There used to be a decent pub only a few hundred yards away from me. It was always The George as it stood by a roundabout on Worthing’s George V Avenue. A couple of years ago it was acquired by the Toby Carvery group. I see that they claim to serve real ale now, but I did try to beers they offered a few times and I…[Read more]

  • Well done, Sandra! And thank you for the prompt, Seagreen. As ever, some fine entries.

  • Thank you for indulging my ‘tearful’ requirement and apologies again for being so late with the results.

    @Jill – Good to see you back, and thank you for diving back into the monthly comp with your tale of Lucia. I confess to knowing nothing about Vestal Virgins, but your entry has definitely piqued my curiosity and I’m sure there’s a much larger…[Read more]

    • Congratulations, Sandra and fellow entrants. All excellent stories which touched me and brought tears to my eyes. Sandra’s image resonated with my own recent experience and sadness as my husband had to go home alone for nine days, tired and worried when I was in hospital. I chose not to write a personal story as enough personal emotions w…[Read more]

  • Foolishly, I thought I’d have time on my nightshift to absorb the stories and choose a winner. Ha! The salt mine overlords had other ideas.

    I promise it’ll be done today…

  • Teabreak tells it straight

    I have been known to buff the truth a little, just to get a sparkle when a story is recounted. And if that helps somebody see the finer details a little more clearly, then who am I to deny them the opportunity? However, just as experts say we should resist the call of Mr. Sheen and microfibre when rare treasures are at…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago

    It’s that time again. If anybody feels inclined, please take a glance at the Donations Group. If you aren’t a member of the group, you’ll need to join to see the forum, but that doesn’t commit you to anything.

  • As you know, Sandra, this prompt came about following the loss of one of our cardiologists and my subsequent inability to write anything meaningful in his Book of Condolences. Faced with Imposter Syndrome because I didn’t know him as well as some of the other nurses, I simply invalidated my feelings and wrote a stiff little sentence that had n…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic Positivity in the forum Blogs 1 year, 3 months ago

    William James seems like an interesting man. He’s an example of something less common these days, a polymath. He studied widely across medicine and philosophy, developing expertise in both fields so that he taught physiology, psychology and philosophy (at different times) at Harvard, whilest finding time for an apprenticeship as a painter, and…[Read more]

  • For July, I’d like to be enthralled by your creative endeavours inspired by the following quote:

    ‘There is a sacredness in tears. They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. They speak more eloquently than ten thousand tongues. They are the messengers of overwhelming grief, of deep contrition, and of unspeakable love.’  Washington Irving…[Read more]

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