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RichardB posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
Editing: they say cut cut cut, don’t they? Hmm. I don’t work like that. When I finished the first draft of my ghost story six (My God!) years ago it was only 47,000 words long. When I submitted it two years later it was 74,000 words. Now its creeping up to 80,000. Mind you, there’s some rather drastic cutting needed near the end.
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Elle replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
@AlanR — it’s not often but it can happen Meg Hunter’s debut, The End We Start From” was only 17,000 or 18,000 words if I remember correctly.
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Libby replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
I’d guess probably not, Alan! Maybe publishing novellas is something to look forward to once one’s career is established 🙂 Though as they seem mostly to be written by big names such as Hill and Ian McEwan, you probably have to be very established.
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Alan Rain replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
I do have an outline, but it isn’t detailed, and maybe I should have developed it more before starting. I’ll have to stop now, anyway, and fix a couple of plot holes. If I was a true Nano’er, I suppose I would plough on regardless and fix the mess at the end of the month. But I can’t work like that. I see no point in writing that I know will be…[Read more]
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Philippa East replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
Time to make yourself an outline?
Nice work though on the 16k!!! -
Alan Rain replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for the positive feedback on the title. Still motoring: Just passed 16k. The problem: I’m too far into the plot. Maybe it’s too simple? In danger of being a novella.
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Giselle replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
Hello all!
I thought about doing NaNoWriMo but I don’t have time to write a sentence these days, let alone 50k!
That being said, I need some motivation so I’d love to do a Denizen’s SloMoWriMo – sounds like perfect motivation, and what great people to do it with! -
KazG replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
Well done on the creative burst @alanr – that must feel good. And I really like that title.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
Yes. Great title. Hope the creative/productive jag lasts.
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Elle replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
@alanr — intriguing title! I like it.
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Alan Rain replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
@raine that’s even better – assuming 50k is your target. You’re on track.
Like some others, I can’t write and leave mistakes in. It slows me down, but I’m not concerned. I prefer 25k good words rather than 50k error-riddled ones.And now I have a title for this supernatural story: The Never Never Item
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Elle replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Thank you everybody! xx
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Raine replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
That’s great, @alanr! Hope the flow keeps going. I am in the process of hauling myself over my 25k wall. Getting there, but oof.
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Alan Rain replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
Not actually doing this Nano thing in a formal sense, but by a remarkable coincidence, I morphed into creative/productive mode early in November. After a slowish start it’s coming together nicely and I have nearly 12k words down. Done 3k today alone.
Will it last? -
Alan Rain replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Good on you, @elle.
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Alan Rain replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 7 years, 8 months ago
Agree with all this. Use all 5 senses, and incorporate the sixth.
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Kate replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Well done, Elle. 🙂
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Raine replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Well done @elle. Such a sad little piece, and the bird image is perfect.
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KazG replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 7 years, 8 months ago
Really interesting, thanks for posting @elle. Place is crucial – for me it’s pretty much as vital as character and sometimes feels like character itself. I can’t write anything half decent without knowing what surrounds us, what the history is, how it has formed and influenced what’s going on ‘onstage’…
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KazG replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Oh that story is beautiful and awful both, @elle. A well deserved win.
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I think it works like that for some, doesn’t it? Writing the bare bones first and then fleshing out. (I’ve always hated the term ‘fleshing out’ – too many dissection classes and JEkyll and Hyde stories!)
I seem to always end up at roughly the same word count – cutting a lot and feeling all pleased with myself, then realising I need whole new scenes…
Yes, I know that Debi (for one) works like this. so there’s a published author as an example.