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  • Many congratulations, Elle and Hilary. Enjoy the read, Hilary x

  • KazG posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 8 months ago

    Well done all SloMoers and it looks like gentle forward motion is happening for everyone, even if it might not feel like it (@daedalus – I’m a firm believer in the power of mental gathering and composting, even if no actual words are landing on the page).

    I’m finding SloMo a lifesaver – it’s slow enough to feel like a break from the frenetic…[Read more]

    • Oh good for you @kazg. I am glad it’s helping you conquer the fear. Driving with headlights, yes! (Ug). Chipping away, exactly, and I’m so pleased you feel “rested but engaged”. NaNo really is crazy… I have never done it. I fear I’d lose my mind!!

      • I love that analogy – I will think of that as I plough through each slow chapter!! I’m driving in pretty dense fog at the moment, but there are cats’ eyes. And actual cats on my desk, obv. Well dones for sticking to your targets – that’s bolstering & will hopefully keep you moving.

  • Philippa East posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 8 months ago

    Well, I’m sure glad for this SloMo month… until the start of this week, I had too many distractions to focus on writing and the lack of progress was just making me increasingly panicked. But for the last three days, I’ve managed my plan of a few hours a day. I feel less panicked now, because I feel sort of ‘back in the familiar groove’ and I can…[Read more]

    • Sounds good, Philippa. And I think you are right to acknowledge that some days are just not meant to be writing days. I can never write when we are away, even if I have the time. It used to annoy me but now I accept it.

      • Yes… I’ve found if I try to write in the evenings (i.e. after work), my brain gets too wired and I can’t switch off to sleep. Also, because I’m like a dog with a bone with stuff, and enforced break from writing is probably good for me, to prevent me getting obsessed and overwhelmed. It also means I make better use of the other days, knowing I…[Read more]

        • Not surprised you can’t focus after work! But well done for moving through the panic and getting into things again. Hope the weekend lets you keep the momentum up…

  • Oh wow @hilary, what an honour!! Congratulations again on your placing. I hope you had a wonderful time at the launch x

  • Daedalus posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 8 months ago

    My SloMo has virtually been NoMo so far. Interrupted sleep patterns and disruption from house repairs, not to mention preparations for puppy, have just left me with little mental energy in the evenings. Nice to hear about and vicariously enjoy other people’s progress though!

    • Gah, @daedalus, that’s rough. But maybe trust that your writing brain will be whirring away in the background and when you have the time and energy again, the ideas will be there.

      • Thanks @philippaeast, I hope so. The other day I really wanted to just drop everything and start reading through my WIsortofP so that’s probably a good sign. I feel I should just read it through without making any notes, let alone editing, to try and read it as much like a reader might, and get a feel for what I might cut without overthinking it.…[Read more]

        • Do it Daeds.

        • @daedalus I’m pleased the impetus is there. That IS a good sign. And I think an “open-minded reader’s” read would be a great place to start. (Tip: If you’re like me, lock up the pencils / pens before you start. I find it so hard to resist marking stuff up and it always gets in the way of absorbing the story as a whole)

  • Squidge posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 9 months ago

    My slomo so far has been to draft a Christmas newsletter (rather a Marmite thing, I’ve found, for the recipients), planned a few writing exercises for a group I’m talking to tonight (which I will also be using for NIBS next week), and about 150 words of something I like for Room with a View (although I have no idea where it’s heading or why I’ve…[Read more]

  • I see we have four new members who could use a vowel or two in their name. What’s that all about?
    Anyway, Wlcme!

  • Hope the launch was fun @hilary, and congratulations!

    And @elle, I’ve just been reading back thorough this thread and seen your other stories – absolutely stunning writing, no wonder you keep getting placed! Well done 🙂

  • Exciting about the antho launch Hil, have fun!

  • Oh, Elle – just read your flash piece. So sad and beautiful. Congratulations.

  • Tomorrow is the launch of the Bath Short Story Award anthology. Excited about reading a page or so from my story, and meeting other winners and shortlisters.

  • Daedalus posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 9 months ago

    All I did today was trim 500 words from a short story so I could submit it to Barren magazine, which has an upper limit of 4000 words. It was worth doing as it tightened the prose a bit, and I spotted a few mistakes as well, which was unsettling as I’d submitted that version a couple of times. I’m pleased I did that much tbh, as it’s been a diffi…[Read more]

  • KazG posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 9 months ago

    So I managed 203 words yesterday. That’s a little too Slo Mo for my liking. I think I need to embrace the theme of this group a little less enthusiastically.

    In my defence, it was the day after said music festival, kids had music performance of their own AND husband back in the house after a month away. So not a normal day…

    Have to get…[Read more]

  • Hilary posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 9 months ago

    Sorry I’m late, but here now for mutual encouragement. I’m working on structural edit of novel, having done one and two-thirds drafts. Have been trying to hone and clarify main story arc and am now trying to work out how and where the subplots intersect/have an impact on the main plot. Like some of you, I am feeling the fear, mainly because it’s…[Read more]

    • Oh good luck! I feel your pain! Are you doing the splendid post it notes!?

    • Congrats on being a runner up, Hilary. I also feel I’m making progress then decide the opposite is true. It sounds as though you’re making v good headway. The structural stuff needs doing and you’re doing it. Congrats on that too, and pat yourself on the back.

      • Thank you, Libby and Raine. Yes, post-its have played a part; also multi-coloured highlighting in Word. It all helps.

        • I use a chapter plan in a separate word doc too. This can be changed as often as required but without it I’m lost.

          • Well done @hilary on pushing on. I know what you mean about the false summits, but keep,faith. It does just take that long. If it’s any consolation I’m on draft, er, 20 with at least another round of edits to go! And trust me: the agent will wait, there’s no rush. I took a whole year between the request for the full and sending it, and it was fine.

  • Squidge posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 9 months ago

    Very late to this – two days gone already! – but I blame it on an overnight visit to Germany to see friends and celebrate Advent.

    SloMo… I jotted a few ideas down for Room with a View, then decided I didn’t like them and another idea popped into my head this morning. Not sure it’ll work, but might play around with it this afternoon. I shan’t…[Read more]

  • Philippa East posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 9 months ago

    Okay, well today has gone well, I think. I managed about two hours, working on balancing the various twists, climaxes and (false) resolutions in the book. I think I’ve managed to pin down the problem more clearly and sketch out a general solution.
    I still have to work out the specific details I’ll need to add into the story MS itself to pull…[Read more]

  • KazG posted an update in the group Group logo of December SloMoDecember SloMo 7 years, 9 months ago

    Thanks for setting this up @raine, great idea, and inspiring to read about all the gentle but still moving forward targets in here.

    I’m in dire need of SloMo December, especially after coming back from a brain-and-soul-rejuvenating music festival in the beautiful middle of nowhere. Which was fabulous on every level but very lacking in sleep…[Read more]

    • I didn’t realise you could keep using the nano site like that – oh YAY for the chart – That lovely thing gace me such a geeky glow of pleasure!

      • Also, music festival sounds amazing! I spent the weekend on trains and hosting family, so slightly less rejuvenating!

        • It was BRILLIANT. such a good vibe, amazing range of music, lovely people, food and coffee 🙂

      • I didn’t know that either, I’ll have to go check it out

        • Yes, it’s a bit different to the normal graph in that you have to add your TOTAL every day, not just what you did that day and then it updates it for you (unless there’s a setting I’ve missed somewhere). I learnt that the hard way today, but luckily the grand sum of 203 (yesterday’s achievement) wasn’t hard to remember, so I just add that to…[Read more]

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