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Squidge replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 11 months ago
The Sanctum of Dreams
“I dreamt about you last night. You were in the sanctum.”
“Well, that’s hardly surprising, is it? Given what’s about to happen.”
“No. I suppose not. It was just so…”
“So…what? Are you going to share? Or just sit there looking worried? I’m not a mind reader.”
“Yet.”
“Ha! True. Well, tell me about it. I don’t like to see y…[Read more] -
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 11 months ago
Good question @Seagreen. I checked with the story that inspired it (A L Kennedy’s ‘Sympathy’) and the answer’s pure dialogue, please. The difficulty of it is part of the challenge.
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Sandra posted an update 5 years, 11 months ago
I doubt there’s a single person in the Den who has not said, at one time in their life, ‘I dreamt about you last night –’
November’s competition asks that you continue the conversation for up to further 354 words.-
I kind of have an idea. I just need night shift to be over before I can pull it together 😴
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I’ve been mulling it over, but I can’t get the ancient joke out of my head.
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I don’t know of an ancient joke, and certainly don’t need to!
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I don’t need to either. But it does rather stem the creative tide
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Ah well … guess who’s first to post on Bump?
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 12 months ago
Thank you, Sea, for the challenge. It was a challenge, too! Not my normal kind of writing.
Congratulations, Sandra. An excellent story.
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Sandra started the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 12 months ago
Opening with ‘I dreamt about you last night –’ I’d like you to write an all-dialogue piece between two people in no more than 350 words, at the end of which we have an understanding of each of them as individuals and the state of their relationship.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 12 months ago
Thank you Sea, not least for the challenge itself, which forced me to face and write a scene I had been putting off; I look forward to the time that bottle of wine is anything but virtual. And yes, I was glad not to be the judge this month, so many differing emotions to choose from. I’ll be back in the morning with a challenge for November.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 12 months ago
346 words excluding title
Learned Habits
Her flatmate said she wanted a chat, about the apartment. She called it an apartment but with its beige kitchen units, its shower over the bath, its dingy paintwork, it was an old-fashioned flat.
Both women were in their early twenties.
Jess sat down on the sofa. The sofa, said the flatmate. Its…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 6 years ago
OK all. Did you miss out on your chance to join the “Things that go bump” writing challenge? Well, just like Brigadoon, we have appeared again – just briefly – to give you one last, brief, opportunity to join your fellow Denizens. To grab the opportunity send me a Direct Message and I’ll tell you what to do. ACT FAST! This offer expires on 1…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Keep at it, Keep at it! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago
Congratulations, Doug. Sounds like you’re on a roll. It’s lovely having that feeling of not wanting to stop.
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Squidge replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years ago
There’s a monster inside of me.
It was born when Noellia moved into number 14.
The car started it. A shiny new Fiat 500. Electric. In powder blue. Parked on the drive. I looked at my own clapped out Fiesta and felt the first stirrings of new life, deep in my chest.
She fed the monster well, did Noellia.
Had an open house, she did. Invited…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years ago
0815 Wednesday 12 December (350 words, 1 an expletive)
I assumed … God help me, I assumed McCallan had come with news of arrests, of mitigation. Or at least reassurance of progress
Instead –
Instead – Rob.
Robbie my son, my first-born.
Dead.
Dead in her car.
She the driver. No blame … no blame for Robbie, McCallan said.Robbie, who Moira r…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthy Comp – September 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years ago
Well done, Sea – and also for the theme of next month’s competition.
Thanks Janette, for an opportunity to rehearse a scene, and for feedback. -
John S Alty replied to the topic Monthy Comp – September 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years ago
Well done, @seagreen, excellent story.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthy Comp – September 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years ago
Great stuff @seagreen. Super story.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthy Comp – September 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years ago
Congratulations @seagreen. I love the voice in your story.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthy Comp – September 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years ago
Untitled
And the theme for this evening is Armageddon. Car after car heads west into London under a roseate sky, a bursting bloom, seepage of orange and crimson, a lure like a turn-on.
I drive. We all drive.
Earlier today, Clare’s voice on the phone.
– Who is Emily?
Emily. Emily naked.
– Dunno. Why d’you ask?
– You left your…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthy Comp – September 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years ago
Red Sun
Sunsets are very different here. Everything is different, but it was the sunset that I was staring at last night. Or rather, the absence of a sunset.
OK. No sunset. Tell you what, there aren’t any asthmatics here on Grissom’s planet either. I’m not blaming anybody; when a 300-mile-wide asteroid drew a bead on Earth at twenty-five miles…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 6 years, 1 month ago
OK – at the risk of badgering people, three and a bit days left to enter “Things that go bump”. Also – 18 members at present, but only 16 sets of choices. If you’re intending to take part, don’t forget!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthy Comp – September 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 1 month ago
The marking of a life, or two.
This the second funeral in six days and the mourning very different.
Last week’s was of a mother. Not his, not biologically, but one who had nevertheless mothered him. Had generously included him, enabled him to share in the love she gave her natural sons. Much needed when his own family had been hard and spiky, s…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 6 years, 1 month ago
“I don’t care where you’ve been, You ain’t been nowhere till you’ve been in – the Things that go Bump writing challenge.”
Find the group. Join. Enjoy.
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