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Elle replied to the topic First chapter – Spider's path in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
Hi Sophie,
I enjoy reading this. I think you have two distinctive voices which makes each part stands out from other. Especially Laura, I am curious to get to know more about her.
I like the sense of urgency and confusion in the first section. Some of the word repetition work well but I think there might too much of it and and the repetition…[Read more]
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Alan Rain replied to the topic Den monthly competition September 2018 in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 8 years ago
I forgot to add my word count (204), and can’t edit the post. This is odd, because I was able to edit a post in a private group.
@sandradavies I can’t. The reply option just sets up a new post. I think the rule is that you can edit (with the edit option) providing your post is the last one. When someone else posts, you lose the ability to edit.
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Athelstone replied to the topic A Room with a View in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
It’s not. The chit chat thread is over in the Challenge Group “A Room with a View” but as all votes count – so does yours!
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John S Alty replied to the topic A Room with a View in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
Is this the chit-chat thread? If so I vote MEAN. (If not I still vote MEAN)
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Athelstone replied to the topic A Room with a View in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
OK – this is really important. This is NEW, this is a TWIST and this is IMPORTANT.
The choices you have made, are making and are still free to change can have an impact on the way you write your story. However, one of the choices may have a surprising effect depending on whether I am GENEROUS or MEAN. And the surprise may not be expected. So –…[Read more]
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Elle replied to the topic Wip beginning… in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
I enjoy reading this, I get a Station Eleven vibe from it (that’s a good thing) in terms of setting the apocalyptic atmosphere and hinting that something’s coming however I think it might be a bit too much setting up in one go for my liking and I’m not overly fond of the omniscient narrator style (but that’s a personal preference of mine). I agree…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Pitching opportunity for northern writers in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 8 years ago
Histfic can definitely have mainstream appeal. Seems as though one of Juliet Mushens’ biggest successes as an agent recently was with The Miniaturist. Though I gather Juliet is interested in history. The blogpost about how that novel was pitched to her is interesting. I think the link was posted somewhere around here. Go for it
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