@philippaeast
Active 1 year, 8 months ago-
Raine posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago
Happy Monday, Denizens. It’s a dreich one up here, so please send all the tea.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 7 years, 8 months ago
Very interesting blog, Elle. Place is very important to me when I write and when I read. It’s often the element of a novel that stays with me longest after I’ve finished it. I try to think in terms of how the people in my story react with the space within the scene and what part the place has played in their lives but your list is very helpful.
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Elle started the topic Setting The Place in the forum Blogs 7 years, 8 months ago
I went to workshop on Saturday about creating a sense of place in short stories and novels, which I found extremely useful as I don’t always think of setting as much as I should.
One thing that I wanted to share was an exercise we did that I thought some of you might found useful. Depending how you work you can do this at the planning stage or…[Read more]
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Seagreen started the topic Golden Egg Academy (North) in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 8 months ago
Don’t know if any of the YA/Children’s writers would be interested in this, but GEA North have extended their submission deadline until November 19th. For those who haven’t heard of it, the short blurb reads:
GEA North works with new writers, professional writers, published authors and MA postgrads – as well as writers who simply feel ‘stuck’…[Read more]
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Bella posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago
Coming back to a WIP after a year off. My writing tics are horrendous! On the plus side, the word count has now been slashed to something approaching acceptable, and there’s more to go.
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Daedalus replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Thanks Libby, that’s really nice of you. Glad you found it interesting and informative. I thought they struck the balance pretty well, and as you and Jane felt, did not overdo it with reconstructions. The little bits they did have (a snippet at the start of the Eugene Ely segment and some sailors running through corridors on a warship in the…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Thanks Jane, am blushing now! You’re very kind
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JaneShuff replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Just finished watching this. Daeds – you’re a star. The depth of your knowledge and your passion shine through. Plus I thought the programme was a quality production. It told the story in an interesting and engaging fashion, simply enough for someone with no knowledge like me to follow but without talking down and without the endless repetitions…[Read more]
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Elle replied to the topic Lilith (Flash fiction – 430 words) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
Thanks Philippa for your feedback and for catching that typo! I’m glad to know that it works and yes it is the typical ex’s issue but one with darker edge than the current girlfriend, hence the title “Lilith”.
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Raine posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago
Dammit. Just realised the core theme to the wip is not what I thought it was.
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One day you’ll be glad of this. Better sooner than later.
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I’ve also completely lost control of the days of the week. I think’s it’s just been both Tuesday and Friday simultaneously.
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Sympathies, Raine. I had to spend the best part of a day retiming my plot because I got the days wrong and ended up with things happening on a Sunday when they couldn’t
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I’m thinking of launching a campaign against the need for books to have to do days of the week at all.
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Or to have any internal coherency whatsoever. Who cares if my MC left the house in trousers and was wearing a skirt by the time she got on the bus
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I recall that Joseph Conrad had to make some rewrites to Under Western Eyes at a very late stage when someone realised that the entire plot took place over one extremely long day
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@janeshuff there’s a possibility of that happening in my current wip – only more likely shorts -> trousers as the MC is a he.
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@athelstone Hurrah. It’s time we writers broke free from the shackles of continuity.
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@janeshuff this looks like another case where bbpress is hiding replies (for space and tidiness) but not providing a ‘show all replies’ button. So although I can see there were 8 replies, I can’t actually view them.
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Neither can I!
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KazG replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 8 months ago
Yes, that’s good. Intriguing, suggestive and evocative. Well done, that’s a relief! 🙂
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Thea replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 8 months ago
Yes, great title, Philippa. It’s both concise and intriguing.
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JaneShuff posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago
So, returning to my WIP this morning, I saw that the last sentence I’d written yesterday was – I don’t care if this is a redam. – And nope, I don’t have a clue what I meant…
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Jonathan replied to the topic Monthly competition – Nov 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 8 months ago
Ok, great, thanks everyone, I’ll leave it 🙂
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Elle replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 8 months ago
I like it. As @raine said it strikes the right balance of things said and unsaid.
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Seagreen replied to the topic TV appearance – Quest, 'Wings of War' in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Very impressive, Daeds 🙂
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition – Nov 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 8 months ago
Don’t change anything! Mr Sea is in Doha this weekend with instructions to visit the Museum of Islamic Art to take photos of their amazing collection of astrolabes. I don’t have any ideas yet, but I know an astrolabe will be involved.
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Raine replied to the topic Monthly competition – Nov 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 8 months ago
I liked the prompts, Jonathan – their utter randomness and the idea. Stick with it. Nano will be a slow month, but we all might need a little breather mid month to keep ourselves sane!!
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Daedalus replied to the topic Monthly competition – Nov 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 8 months ago
My inclination would be for you to leave as-is Jonathan. I’m sure you’ll get plenty of entries as and when. NaNo month is always a bit difficult for things like this, but I for one am keen to make sure I enter every Den comp
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Tea and biscuits on their way 🙂 Patchy sun here in southern England.
Thank-you for the tea! If you could see your way to sending a patch or two of that sun north, that would be grand!!