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John S Alty replied to the topic Making sense? in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Thanks, everyone. Bit of a relief, back on track now. It’s the context that makes all the difference. The song is about seeking adventure now, because it’s later than you think. Eg:
Hitchhike down to Mexico,
Drive to Kathmandu,
Better do it now, my friend,
Time catches up with you.Thanks again, everyone.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Making sense? in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Jane. The previous line, which I’m still working on, is something like:
Go now, go now, don’t hesitate, your only master’s you,
Don’t ever let yourself regret the things you didn’t do.I think in that context it’s clearer. No?
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John S Alty replied to the topic Making sense? in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Hmm. It was intended to mean if you seek adventure now it will not be necessary to later regret not having done so, but it does seem to imply the opposite.
Good line but in the wrong song!
Jonathan, I sing like a cat with its tail in a mangle, but maybe someone else might want to sing it. My interest is in the music and words.
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John S Alty started the topic Making sense? in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Does this line: “Don’t ever let yourself regret the things you didn’t do” immediately mean to you: Don’t regret being adventurous? When I analyse it, it seems to mean different things. Maybe context is important to the perceived meaning. It’s a song and so it needs to pan but I’m beginning to wonder if it means what I meant it to mean!
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Barny replied to the topic Publishing deal!! in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
Tremendous news and tremendous writing, you Author, you!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
Sensible lass, your daughter …
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Sandra replied to the topic Publishing deal!! in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
Saw this on FB, but deserves double congratulations. Well done.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Publishing deal!! in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
Well done, congratulations!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 2 months ago
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John S Alty replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 2 months ago
Bringing a gun into the house changes it; that’s the truth. It’s not as if it was much of a gun, just an old Spanish automatic called a Ruby. Piece of junk, but cheap on the street. I never knew my dad to be scared of anything but he was scared now. Really scared.
Before, when he hit my mother, we cowered in a corner of the kitchen, my sis…[Read more]
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Sandra posted an update 7 years, 2 months ago
July’s competition – I’ve given you the first eight words; you only need add 200 more. @libby has set the standard, but I’ve no doubt there’s more than 200 variations to be had. Deadline 31st.
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Sandra started the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 2 months ago
‘Bringing a gun into a house
changes it.’The opening words lines of a poem entitled ‘The Gun’, written in 2001 by Vicki Feaver, whose work I discovered last year.
I’d like you to enlarge upon this by adding no more than 200 words.
And because I’m not convinced that two months makes participation any more likely, I’m setting a deadline of…[Read more]
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John S Alty replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 2 months ago
Thanks for a good competition idea, Raine, and well done Sandra.
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Sandra replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 2 months ago
Good heavens, Raine – what a compliment, especially in view of the strength of the rest; I certainly was torn between at least three to name as my favourite. Thank you, indeed. And you can most certainly read the rest, as soon as it’s done. (Currently ‘resting’ after finishing a first draft last week, and already knowing things need…[Read more]
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John S Alty replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 2 months ago
Has to be “A Lyttle goes a long way.” Excellent title.
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Sandra replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years, 2 months ago
Saw John’s news, but congratulations to Mad Iguana too – what an achievement for you both.
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Sandra replied to the topic New Book Release: Revolt (The King's Knight) in the forum Podium 7 years, 2 months ago
Well done, Jules and thanks for the horse breed check list, correcting my belief that a destrier was a sort of fast carthorse. I’m a big fan of Dorothy Dunnett so this will be added to my list.
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John S Alty replied to the topic New Book Release: Revolt (The King's Knight) in the forum Podium 7 years, 3 months ago
Well, congratulations and I hope the book does wonderfully well.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Reading Times New Roman doc on screen in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 3 months ago
I guess not. Google “troubleshooting font problems in word”, you should find this:
https://support.microsoft.com/en-gb/help/918791/overview-of-fonts-and-how-to-troubleshoot-font-problems-in-microsoft-w - Load More
