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Janette replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 8 years, 1 month ago
Am I putting this in the right place???
Anyhow, presuming I am, here is another with some exciting news to share. This year I decided to try my hand at external comps, but put them behind me as the lack of news seemed to confirm I was a novice at it.
… until this morning, when I received an email from Pennine Ink Writers’ Workshop, confirming I…[Read more] -
John S Alty replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Tony, good points, noted.
Thanks, Elle. I guess my spell checker doesn’t speak French! Good points. I think I have a tendency to over-explain or I would have ended it at “He was my first”. Need to trust the reader more. The telly paragraph is a bit of a cop out – I’ll need to rewrite it.I can’t remember what the original prompt was, but I…[Read more]
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John S Alty started the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Here’s a nasty little story I have been playing around with for fun. Have at it, critics!
Memories
Two tall men wearing overcoats followed the nurse down the corridor towards Room 19.
“Florence can be a bit slow some days but most of the time she’s surprisingly bright. She was quite perky earlier so she should be able to answer your que…[Read more] -
Sandra posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago
@jhowejr And yet another Predictioneer – well done and welcome.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Hi Daeds,
Yes, if you look under fiction at acrossthemargin.com and at https://www.ellipsiszine.com you should find them. A couple of super stories from @Elle also. -
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Raine posted an update in the group
A Room with a View 8 years, 1 month agoHello again, dear comp. 🙂
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Janette replied to the topic Friday night live in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Just catching up with things, including this. Yep, the girl did well. It was an amazing piece well read and really was stand-out. There was one other – a very good comedic piece – which got close, but Helen’s had the edge and I do hope she posts it so that you can see what we mean.
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