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  • Mezz posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago

    Hi, all. Just popping in to see how everyone is and hope I am welcome.
    I had already left the word cloud writing community before social go pulled the plug.
    Some of you know me already. I write for fun and mainly for myself. have no illusions about my abilities.

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  • Squidge posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago

    Just wondering how many here were in the Sept (I think) 2014 Self edit course? @swoop @tenacityflux … Jody Klaire, who I don’t think has found us yet? Anyone else?

    • I went twice to FoW, & was in a self edit course straight after one of them, with you & Tenacity. I’m going to have to work this out by cricket seasons I think, hold on….

      • Jody was definitely on it, but I’m caught on whether it was 2013 or 2014

        • I changed clubs at the end of the 2012 season. I missed my last match for my old club when they were relegated to be at my first FoW, then I missed the last match for my new club when they just escaped in 2013. I couldn’t take that any more & haven’t been since….til next year. Pretty certain my self edit was 2013

    • I did it before Mrs Sinclair came out, but after I got my agent, so I think it was in 2013 I did mine. But I think Neil was on my course – Hi Neil!- so I may be getting muddled!

      • Yes it was @louisewalters in 2013, sorry I couldn’t remember, time flies. Sirtanic is who we’re thinking of, Mills?

        • Wouldn’t @debi know this anyway? Or were all records cloud based?

          • Yes, I wondered if records can tell us which intake we were all in?

            • There are no records of anything that was on the Cloud at all. Everything went pfft. πŸ™ I could tell people who was in their group but it would take me some time. I’ve just done it for one recent group. One person contacted me and said they wanted to get in touch with their group so I went back to the emails I sent out with the course pack at…[Read more]

            • Oh blimey, no, too much work Debi. I reckon we can work it out if we stop and think, and search our own docs for clues!

            • Sirtanic – of course! I think Neil’s right, it was 2013 for us all, cos I was working on Rurik (who is now Tilda) and think I’d published Granny Rainbow in that year so I had the confidence to revisit the novel.
              Much good it did me – as I edited it again for the milioonty-umpteeth time last year. Thank goodness it’s got a contract with it now…

  • Anna replied to the topic Festival Dreams in the forum Blogs 8 years, 1 month ago

    It was great to be there, Skylark, and hear you tell your story. So inspiring. I bought Home at the end and you signed it for me. Just the perfect memory of York 2018. It was my first Festival of Writing, hoping for many more.

  • I’m pretty sure I do this anyway, probably 100++ if I’m honest. I see it as essential as I’m in the process of fine-polishing, and we all know a MS has to be as good as possible before submitting to agents. And frankly, if I should miss a day, I would feel guilty.
    Today, I’ve had raging toothache, so I worked on my synopsis.
    Make every day count.

  • Squidge replied to the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago

    Haha! He’s the one! I could picture him…but not remember his name!

    I looked up the author – her novel sounds brill, must look it up. I like the idea of women ruling the world πŸ˜‰

  • Sandra posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago

    An anthology of poetry, kept beside the loo, results in a LOT more poetry being read than if I keep it by the bed.

    • lol! I used to read poetry way more than I do now. Perhaps I should try your trick! Or by the kettle, to read whilst waiting for it to boil?

    • I’ve been reading a bit more lately. The resurgence started after I bought Alan Bennett’s ‘Six Poets’ selection for the Orkney break. I remember thinking ‘Blimey, I wouldn’t have chosen that’ and never looked back

      • Ath, Did you ever get round to reading Orkney’s no.1 poet, George McKay Brown?
        The anthology I’m currently reading is 1992-2001.

        • embarrassed to admit that I said I would, but I didn’t. However…I have just bought his collected works and am looking forward to some light and delightful reading if these words from ‘the poet’ are typical: When all the dancers and masks had gone inside
          His cold stare
          Returned to its true task, interrogation of silence.

    • Did somebody in this thread alter or delete a reply? Just curious because a lot of it seems to have disappeared

    • I can highly recommend Wild Embers by Nikita Gill. Her stuff is beautiful and makes me cry quite a lot! Also got Kumukanda by Kayo Chingonyi which is good too. A lot about coming from Zambia to the UK, which my mum did, so it feels personal in some ways.

      • I’m finding it’s not the beautiful but the thought-provoking, recognition of something previously unvoiced that is currently jolting me into appreciation.

  • Yes, well, exactly. There’s only seven plots in fiction, I seem to recall being told, and as you say, it’s all down to individual writing. So I wouldn’t worry too much.

    Stella

    It was Frank Carson I think!

  • Jonathan replied to the topic Festival Dreams in the forum Blogs 8 years, 1 month ago

    Great blog, Skylark, and it’s so good to have seen your journey through the cloud and onto that stage (though I wasn’t there this year, you know what I mean). Long may it all continue! πŸ™‚ Laughed at the train incident though. I did something similar when I was about 18 or so and had a few shandies. Difference was this was an older train where the…[Read more]

  • I’ve been working hard on our kitchen remodel – now finished, as far as these things are ever finished – and can get back to doing a bit more writing.
    I wonder where this will appear when I post it? Finding my way around.

  • Squidge replied to the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago

    Thanks all!

    Stella, I’ve not heard of Naomi Alderman at all – I’ll have to look her/her books up.

    It’s sods law that what I’ve written makes you think of someone else’s work – originally the Power was rings, and I got slated by an agent over it being too LOTR, when the story itself is nothing like.

    Ah well, they do say there are only so many…[Read more]

  • Hilary replied to the topic Festival Dreams in the forum Blogs 8 years, 1 month ago

    Thanks for posting this, Skylark. I, too, was very sorry to miss your speech, but glad to hear about it and glad it all went well. You continue to be an inspiration to others of us who are taking a LONG time!

  • It’s very visual, which I like. I also like your almost-informal style of writing, which should work for your target readership, which I’m assuming is younger teens/children? I vastly preferred your original opening sentence, for what it’s worth, it scanned better for me and ended with the interesting word illuminiorb, which makes you want to…[Read more]

  • Good tip @John T I’ll try that.

  • I downloaded a voice recorder app for my mobile so that when I’m out and about finding inspiration on my country walks, I can record ideas that pop into my head and save the mp3 files into their own folder for future use.

  • Baz Baron posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago

    @raine so, you like Toblerone eh? how about this for an unhealthy snack: https://www.bbcgoodfood.com/recipes/1503633/toblerone-cheesecake – he he he!

  • One I picked up from Brian Keaney at York for intense, magical or transformational scenes (to be used sparingly). Write it as prose, rewrite it as poetry (however crappy) then rewrite it again as prose. The idea is to knock away your own familiar turns of phrase and find a different language. I’ve already tried it in the last couple of days, and…[Read more]

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