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Athelstone replied to the topic Influences in the forum Blogs 2 years, 8 months ago
The only writer who I enjoy and where I can see similarities in style with my own, is Kurt Vonnegut. That’s not to say we write in similar ways. Vonnegut was a master of prose and I’m not drawing a comparison. However, he made an effort to keep his writing plain and clear and advised others to do the same. Certainly there are subtleties in…[Read more]
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John T replied to the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh wow! That brings back memories. I heard Pete Atkin (without Clive James) at a soaking wet Bristol Folk Festival sometime in the early 70s, and again in Cardiff Student Union. And I loved his music. I had a Clive James/Pete Atkin LP from that time, but it is one of the many that I sold when I moved to a single room in Scotland in 1980.
As for…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Influences in the forum Blogs 2 years, 8 months ago
I agree, John, this is a difficult one. I’ll have to think about it.
Some influence comes from writers whose style I don’t like. I make mental notes not to do things like ‘whoever’ (they’ll remain nameless :-))
Then there’s the memory of a feeling a book created at the time I read it. They include authors I couldn’t or don’t feel drawn to read…[Read more]
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John T started the topic Influences in the forum Blogs 2 years, 8 months ago
Have any of you thought about who your writing influences are? I’m asking, because I was about to write a blog about my writing influences, and then stopped, unsure. I know plenty of authors whose writing I adore, including a fair few in this Den. But influences? I’d have to go further back, and then I’m not sure at all.
Most of the authors I…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 2 years, 8 months ago
Fabulous blog, Richard. Chanson is so little known outside of France. People think they know it because they’ve heard a recording of Non, je ne regrette rien or maybe they know that Seasons in the Sun is a translation (sort of) of a Jacques Brel number. It’s hugely popular in France. Travel to any town and go out and about on market-day. Every…[Read more]
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RichardB started the topic Richard's Musical Byways: Pete Who? (No 2) in the forum Blogs 2 years, 8 months ago
There is a genre of French music known in English as chanson – ironically, since in French chanson simply means song, any kind of song. You might call it popular music with brains, for its distinguishing characteristic is articulate lyrics that set out to say something actually worth saying. In France it has a long and noble tradition, its best k…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 8 months ago
What terrific stories. So much horror too. I began to wonder if the topic of building work had raised deeply traumatic memories!
@clebs ‘Behind Closed Curtains’ is very atmospheric, rich in detail and perfectly titled. I felt a few words could be cut, such as the second mention of Jimmy’s bowl, and I wasn’t sure if I got the story’s message.…[Read more]
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Wow, Libby, and thank you, a big surprise, especially as I’d already identified winners 1,2 and 3 and, my laptop having died and been taken away, and only having my ancient, over-full and steaming one, I wasn’t checking as often as I have been. I’ll try and come up with something as interestingly challenging as the last few have been.
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Congratulations, Sandra. And thanks, Libby, for the challenge. Didn’t expect the critique too.
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Clebs replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 8 months ago
The formatting isn’t great – sorry.
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Clebs replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 8 months ago
<p style=”text-align: center;”><b>Behind Closed Curtains</b></p>
‘Jimmy look, that rude electrician is back!’ Marjorie adjusted her glasses and squinted towards the bungalow. ‘And he’s wearing that t-shirt again, you know, the orange one with large red letters saying Bog Off You Nosy Neighbour!’ She poked her tongue out in the general direction of…[Read more] -
Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 8 months ago
Brutal
Graham was beside himself. Furious, speechless, incandescent with rage. They had demolished the ancient well in his garden, thrown the centuries old stonework down inside, and constructed a former which showed their intention to pour footings a full twenty metres from where the summerhouse should be. He leaned forward and peered down. All…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
July monthly comp reminder – three more days to post an entry 🙂
Tell a story of building work that suffers some kind of mix up. The wrong site, the wrong builder – anything you like.
Deadline midnight 31st July.
300 words maximum
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Athelstone posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
And we’re there. Thank you to all the generous donors. We’re here for another year!
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Athelstone posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
One More Year!
Probably daft, bearing in mind we have maybe 10 to 15 members who are even close to regular, and perhaps half a dozen who are. I need to raise about £150 this month to keep the site going. It will keep going; it’s just a case of finding as much as I can. SO… please see the donations group for details. Simple as that. -
Janette replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
The Mausoleum
… The star broke down as wife Stephanie’s casket was taken into the mausoleum. The stone masterpiece, testament to their love, could have been fashioned by Wren …’
Justin Mallory’s architect had also been proud of the secret panel to facilitate re-entry: stone-clad, freed by hidden lock and latch. Justin pocketed the key. He swiped…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Hi Janette – as discussed, it’s gone. Feel free to post again when ready.
Ath.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Hi Janette – feel free to tidy up! I see no reason why software idiosyncrasies and confusions therefrom should affect anyone’s chances in the monthly comp.
I haven’t yet read your submission so I won’t know what you change. I think you can delete the original post if you wish.
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I just tried that, but it remains on the monthly comp thread. Typical Monday morning.
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@janette
Don’t worry. Post your tidied-up version and I’ll ignore your first submission.-
Thanks to Ath, I’ve been able to delete and try again. Sorry for the kerfuffle!
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Libby started the topic Monthly comp – July 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
For this month’s comp tell a story of some building work with some kind of mix up. The wrong site, the wrong builder – anything you like.
Deadline midnight 31st July.
300 words
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
Thank you @Seagreen ! This is a lovely surprise. The standard of entries is so high – I loved all the stories.
Thank you too @Sandra for your congratulations.
Right, now I must try to think of a comp theme that will be as good as Seagreen’s …
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
I knew from the minute I started reading these that judging would be a tricky business…
Thanks all for entering! I love that you each took a perfectly mundane experience – like sitting in traffic – and gave me a fabulous peek into the headspace of your characters.
Ath, straight in there with your character reference of the man in the siler GT. T…[Read more]
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Thank you, Sea, for such a good challenge. Congratulations @Libby – a worthy win.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – June 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years, 9 months ago
What is this? I turn my back for TWO days and I’m inundated!! ????
Please bear with me. Worked a fifteen hour shift today (with the same tomorrow). I promise to come back with a winner by Monday at the absolute latest x
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