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Athelstone replied to the topic Help/brainstorming needed please – using antagonist narrator in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 4 months ago
Thanks Bella 🙂
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RichardB started the topic A Bad Job: Thirsk, 1892 in the forum Blogs 7 years, 4 months ago
Though the story of every fatal accident is a tragedy for somebody, few are quite so sad as the tale of what is known as the Thirsk railway accident, although it actually happened about three miles north of there. I have perforce had to include some (simplified) signalling technicalities, but you’d need a heart of stone not to be moved by this…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Help/brainstorming needed please – using antagonist narrator in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 4 months ago
Is that video on JW, @philippaeast? I just can’t spot it.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 5 months ago
Congratulations, elle!!
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Daedalus replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 5 months ago
I was thinking a PM to the setter would be the easiest way, and not putting too much responsibility on a smallish group of people, but we can always try it for a while and see how it goes.
An alternating competitive-non competitive challenge is an option, but how would we decide who set the prompt for the non-competitive months?
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Squidge replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 5 months ago
Just to prove how stupid I am – did not realise that the camp didn’t let you post anything until the official start of the writing period. But at least I know where to find the thing to log word count – even if it’s not appearing yet.
Can you tell I’ve not done this before? *face plant*
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Squidge replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 5 months ago
Having never done Nano before, someone’s going to have to tell me how I log my word count, cos I can’t find where on the menu bar I do that. I have found stats… just not how to change them.
Sometimes I really hate technology.
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Squidge replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 5 months ago
OK, looks like I’m going to be ‘Silver Squidge’ as just Squidge was already taken…
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Squidge replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 5 months ago
Might join you – I can use it to be Camp NaNoEdMo again – that worked well for me once before.
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Squidge replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 5 months ago
For me, it’s about getting the time to think about short pieces, full stop. I’ve finally got going again on the novel, so my writing energy’s good, but I can’t commit to something every month on top.
If you wanted to split comp and non-comp, they could run on alternate months – that way, you can choose whether to be competitive or not. And I’ll…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 5 months ago
Good thought, thanks Libby. I do like the idea of regular writing prompts, but at the moment we seem to be struggling to assemble enough entries for the competition, so whether we could maintain both I don’t know. What’s the general feeling towards non-competitive prompts as well?
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Athelstone replied to the topic Opening of new WIP- 1289 words in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
Once I’d read through a couple of times, my overall impression was curiosity, which is generally a good thing, and I felt comfortable with the way the story is moving. When I read through the first time though, I was a bit confused as to what was going on. I don’t mean the bare facts, I mean things like whether Bethany wanted the phone call,…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Opening of new WIP- 1289 words in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
Once I’d read through a couple of times, my overall impression was curiosity, which is generally a good thing, and I felt comfortable with the way the story is moving. When I read through the first time though, I was a bit confused as to what was going on. I don’t mean the bare facts, I mean things like whether Bethany wanted the phone call,…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic Opening of new WIP- 1289 words in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
Didn’t feel slow at all.
Only bit that jumped out at me was the initial explanation about Bert early on – it felt quite tell-y and a bit out of place where it was. I was caught up in the conversation and Bethany’s dilemma, and it pulled me out of the dialogue.
I wonder if that info would be better moved to when Bethany mentions him later on…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Opening of new WIP- 1289 words in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
PS I particularly enjoyed the telephone conversation betwenn the two of them.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Opening of new WIP- 1289 words in the forum Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
It didn’t seem slow to me at all @bellam. Lots of great stuff. An unhappy heroine with a tricky relationship with her annoying mother who clearly has secrets in her past. And now she’s going to have to go on some ghastly coach trip with her. I’d read on. Particularly as she’s got an old and much loved cat. Only one comment – maybe the back story…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Writers & Artists short story comp in the forum Podium 7 years, 5 months ago
There’s little I like more than seeing fabulous writers recognised. Great stuff Raine, enjoy it
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Athelstone replied to the topic Writers & Artists short story comp in the forum Podium 7 years, 5 months ago
Oh, Raine, that’s just fantastic. You deserve recognition.
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Athelstone posted an update 7 years, 5 months ago
Goodbye, Ranking Roger. You made me feel cool, which took some doing, when I listened to you.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 5 months ago
Sorry, final thought – I personally like the competitive aspect, and I think the peer judging takes the subjectivity out of it somewhat, but how does everyone feel about Squidge’s suggestion of just making it a prompt/challenge? Could/should we make it non-competitive every so often?
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