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Squidge replied to the topic Some notes on Dara Marks' Transformational Arc in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
I remember doing these sessions at York…it all seemed to make perfect sense when CMT was explaining it, but I can’t put it into practise. I don’t think I have the kind of logical and structural mind that can break a story down into these kind of segments. Which is annoying, because I know it’s all good stuff and very useful – I just can’t apply…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic Red (short story – 2,600 words) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Very nice… There were a couple of points only that tripped me up in the reading:
‘Tasha and she nicked the lipstick’. Didn’t sound right. I wondered about ‘She’d nicked the lipstick when she was with Tasha’, but wasn’t sure how that’d affect your word count.
‘The salty scent of sweaty skin trapped in every pore’. I read this first as the sweaty…[Read more] -
Kate replied to the topic Some notes on Dara Marks' Transformational Arc in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
This is great Raine. I’ve read a few structure books and I can see how they all reflect in this arc. It’s nice to have it in this concise summary. I’m going to print it out and pin it to the wall!
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John S Alty posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
Market day in town so I’m off to see what treasures I can find at the book stall.
I’ve rediscovered the joy of real books now I’ve ditched my annoying Kindle.-
Nothing beats a good rummage through bookshops/book stalls, does it? But I confess I do love my kindle very, very muchly. ๐
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Nothing can beat the smell of books.
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Magical, I agree, but then again Pebby’s pie shop in the village has a certain attraction, too.
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OOOOOh! Pieeees! I am rather partial to a pork pie!
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My problem is more with amazon than the kindle per se. I’m happy to read on an ipad, I just don’t want the intrusive presence of amazon.
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Squidge replied to the topic Mentorship Scheme – Writing East Midlands in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 7 months ago
Don’t think I’d qualify as I’m not looking to change genre but am already published… Also can’t commit to the time at the moment ๐
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Squidge replied to the topic Mentorship Scheme – Writing East Midlands in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 7 months ago
Are you involved in WEM, Philippa? I just received their latest email update and it all sounded a bit highbrow!
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Squidge started the topic Fairlight needs winter/new year stories… in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 7 months ago
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Squidge posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
Just spotted this if anyone’s got anything that might suit?
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Squidge replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
SloMo. Love it. Matches me perfectly.
(Although I did manage a couple of hours yesterday on the WIP – nothing new added, but dialogue’s snappier!)
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Squidge replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
I like Two Cities and the Void, but wonder whether, for the novel as you’ve described it, The Void Between Two Cities works better? Which is more central to the story – the space between, or the actual cities? Looks like you’re getting closer to finding your title though.
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Squidge replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
Mine would definitely be a slow write. I have no idea how I’m going to get any writing done at all between now and the New Year… Not even my Room with a view! ๐
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John S Alty replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 7 months ago
The Banjo
The phone rings in the lost property office at Euston Station in London.
โLost Property, Smith speaking, how may we help?โ
He takes a sip from his tea, listens.
โYes, sir, anything left on a train on this line ends up here. Assuming itโs turned in, like. What have you lost?
โSo, a banjo is it sir? Well let me have a look, wonโt be…[Read more] -
John S Alty replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 7 months ago
Well done, good job as usual, L!
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Libby replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
It’s not my cup of tea but I’m supportive of anyone who does it. I know someone who sets her own word count for the month and that works well for her.
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Squidge replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
PS Discipline…what’s that?
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Squidge replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
So does that mean we have to come clean on our daily word count? Oh Lord, I really WILL have to buck my ideas up!
Am I allowed the 1st November off? Interview day for candidates for the new vicar…and guess who’s one of the interviewers? ๐ -
Squidge replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
HA! Just crossed with Daeds – Daeds, shall we form a novel finishing club?!!
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Squidge replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
Is there a version for NaNoFiMo? (National Novel Finishing Month) I really must get moving on the WIP, but I’ve stalled with everything else going on and I cannot get motivated to write at all. Keep knitting instead…
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