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JaneShuff replied to the topic A Blank Piece of Paper (short Story – critique) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Wow. I really enjoyed this Elle. And the second person worked very well for me. It didn’t feel at all self-conscious which I think it often does. It also reads as though it was written by an English native.
A couple of very minor points:
Sam throws up his arms a couple of times in swift succession which jarred for me.
This bit – His lips on…[Read more]
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Squidge posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
Can’t believe the cloud simply doesn’t exist any more… Calling myself a Dennie doesn’t have quite the same ring to it. So what DO we call ourselves here? Suggestions welcome…
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Yes, it is very sad, but we can’t say we weren’t warned. How about DENizens?
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Denizens
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Although I also like Den-dwellers
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Denizens 🙂
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Denizens!
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I like Denizens. Den Dwellers is rather good too 🙂
And yes that sudden complete failure was a bit of a shock!
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Denofians is my suggestion, but TBH I prefer denizen.
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Q: What do we call ourselves here?
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Denizens. Although, I might be more of a denlet than an izen. 😉
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I was thinking denizens too.
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Not ‘Dense’ then?
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Denizens – I like. And @sandradavies – just look at the folks already here. Definitely not dense in any way, shape or form! 😉
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Dentists? Maybe not …
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Sorry Squidge – I’m editing :-(, but a quick look at the OED suggests ‘dendrite’ -‘crystalline growth , or ‘denatant’ – the migration of fish. I rather like denominator …
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Denizens perfect 😀
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Squidge posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
@theweyman – good you found us. Look forward to reading more of your stuff…
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 7 years, 10 months ago
Fingers crossed for you PB.
Kaz, I agree it is a very fine line. I think business like and to the point is good. They want to read fast and to be able to extract the important information from your letter asap and then get to the book. I am sure many people here have watched Piers Blofield (spelling?) on you tube showing how he deals with his…[Read more]
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KazG replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
awww 🙁 I got it too, the white screen of death…a very sad day. Bye bye Cloudling…#farewell
Ath, the comp!! What happens now?
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Knicks replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 7 years, 10 months ago
Good luck, PB! 😀
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Knicks replied to the topic Book 2 of Oath and Crown out soon in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Moral quandries the best. Will procure with my next paycheck 😊🙌
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GippsGirl started the topic Table explaining the publishing industry in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
This provides a useful summary of The Key Book Publishing Paths: 2018 by Jane Friedman
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GippsGirl replied to the topic Hello All in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
Just tried to log in to the Cloud and there is naught but a blank screen. Looks not so much like the lights went out but the Cloud has dissipated into the ether. Farewell old friend. 🙁
And thanks for rescuing me, Athers – just in the knick of time.
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GippsGirl posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
@debi Wonderful to see you here, Debi! I imagine you are stretched with all your writerly commitments, but your presence here, when time permits, will be most appreciated. x
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