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Squidge replied to the topic Red (short story – 2,600 words) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Very nice… There were a couple of points only that tripped me up in the reading:
‘Tasha and she nicked the lipstick’. Didn’t sound right. I wondered about ‘She’d nicked the lipstick when she was with Tasha’, but wasn’t sure how that’d affect your word count.
‘The salty scent of sweaty skin trapped in every pore’. I read this first as the sweaty…[Read more] -
JT. posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
Hope everyone has managed to get a bit of writing in today. It’s lovely to look out on to the autumnal garden and get inspiration.
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Squidge replied to the topic Mentorship Scheme – Writing East Midlands in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 10 months ago
Don’t think I’d qualify as I’m not looking to change genre but am already published… Also can’t commit to the time at the moment 🙁
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Squidge replied to the topic Mentorship Scheme – Writing East Midlands in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 10 months ago
Are you involved in WEM, Philippa? I just received their latest email update and it all sounded a bit highbrow!
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Squidge started the topic Fairlight needs winter/new year stories… in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 10 months ago
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Squidge posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
Just spotted this if anyone’s got anything that might suit?
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Squidge replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
SloMo. Love it. Matches me perfectly.
(Although I did manage a couple of hours yesterday on the WIP – nothing new added, but dialogue’s snappier!)
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Squidge replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
I like Two Cities and the Void, but wonder whether, for the novel as you’ve described it, The Void Between Two Cities works better? Which is more central to the story – the space between, or the actual cities? Looks like you’re getting closer to finding your title though.
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Jules replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
Also up for SloMo. Sounds fun 😊
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Daedalus posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
I have to say I’m a little disappointed. The Den gets its first spammer and they didn’t even post a wacky blog about plastics or grass. Dull. Must try harder
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Jules replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
Love London and her Shadow.
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Daedalus replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
Most of them are good, but I particularly like ‘Two Cities and the Void’ and ‘London and her Shadow’
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Squidge replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
Mine would definitely be a slow write. I have no idea how I’m going to get any writing done at all between now and the New Year… Not even my Room with a view! 🙁
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Daedalus replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
I like Raine’s suggestion of December. It would allow those doing NaNo to keep up a bit of momentum while not having to keep to such a ferocious pace, and is soon enough that folk not doing NaNo have something to look forward to. And it could be a good way of getting Room With A View entries done
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Daedalus replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
I’d be up for SloMoWriMo
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Daedalus replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 10 months ago
A Story of No Importance
Or, Lady Wokingham’s Ban
Or, Baloné: A Tragedy in One ActWas meeting the in-laws ever straightforward? Alton reflected on the frosty atmosphere as he pushed his food around his plate. Gwen gave him a smile when her mother’s attention was otherwise engaged but he could tell she felt as awkward as him. Every topic of conv…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Loved the story, Elle, congratulations!
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Daedalus replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Great story Elle, well done. I agree with Philippa about that line!
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Daedalus replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
I completely understand, and I tend to have the same issue. For me, the fact that NaNo is only a month means I can feel a bit more comfortable turning down the quality filter. I do like to construct first drafts carefully (I don’t really know any other way) but that’s far from the main reason I don’t write much. For me, the main challenge is in…[Read more]
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